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Just a quick chit chat with me!!
Hello everyone, welcome back to Dragon Heart. Today is September 29 and it is exactly 10:14am as of this moment. I have come back to take down the previous version of 'Dragon Heart', which was the re-written version of 'Realization'. And I will be replacing it with the re-written version of Dragon Heart. Complicated? Yes, believe me, I KNOW. I was never really satisfied with Realization, which mind you I wrote when I was thirteen. I lost sense of the story and what was going on, which led me to twist the story a bit. And BAM! Here we are with another version, yet again! I am trying to go more into detail, since I felt like Realization was just moving too fast, on chapter one Lucy was broken and hurt and her ego was just, come on, anyone could wipe the floor with it. And then she just 'coincidentally' happens to come across a powerful mage, come on people!! What was going on with me!!? Which to my horror, as I read it again last night, it made no sense to me. She returned back powerful and very much cocky and conscious of her strength in just the third chapter!! The THIRD freaking chapter!!! Who does that!!?
Apparently me at the age of thirteen.
I am trying to make up for it now, by actually at least trying for the plot to make sense! Oh!!! Oh!! And let's not forget how in Realization she just came across Sting and Rogue while laying in a &#%^_*$) bench!!! What!!? Yes, I want to puke at this moment. I know some of you loved it, I did at some point too, but here we are. I hope this version will satisfy you all, I know I've been going over any grammatical errors.
If there are any errors, or you feel like something is off, do point it out!! Any rude comments will be deleted!! So keep it to yourself people!
This is me trying to understand what the hell was going on in my brain, like, *sucks on teeth*, I don't know. Realization was giving me nightmares, I couldn't sleep this past week just thinking about how I could have the story MAKE SENSE. There was too much missing, I was just going crazy with it. I didn't like the second version, so here we have Realization 3.0. Which is now, Dragon Heart.
I came to hate Realization 1.0, which I had been debating taking down.
I didn't really love Realization 2.0, so yes, I will be taking that one down. If anyone is interested to know what I am talking about after I take it down, I will be adding it to Realization 1.0.
Will I love Realization 3.0, I don't know. But I am currently filled with ideas to make the story better, so I'll just go along with it.
Before I go, I have gotten plenty of messages asking of me to read one of their books, to check it out and give any constructive feedback. I just want to say I am open for it, I would love to read your stories as you've read mine!
And I've also received a message, a very rude message that was pretty much insulting my updating skills and the fact that I haven't finished a single book. Trust me, I know. I was really mad at this person for calling me out on it, my mind is just overwhelmed with ideas at times, that before I can finish something I start another one. But I am trying my best to get back on track, by finishing my very first book Realization (Dragon Heart). I will be moving on to Between Two Guilds next, which there will be some changes as well.
But thank you for reading this!!!
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~~~~ Warrior_Erza_Scarlet
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