Review for:- birdeyze

Reviewer:- ThatOneDolphinGirl

Genre:- Romance

Chapters reviewed:- All

Cover:-

Title: The title is unique I will say. I would have liked it to be having his as the husband's actual name so it adds a little touch. Other than that, I think the title is fine.

Cover: I don't really get what's happening in the cover picture. The picture could be something else, or just have it in color. The black text blends into the black and white picture to the point where I can't see the text.

Blurb: I think the blurb was nicely written. It was constructed very well but I do have one thing to say. You need to have some sort of quote at the beginning because it helps set the mood of the summary. The blurb could have also been shorter, as it's almost revealed too much of what happens in the story.

Plot: The plot was way too sexual for me. I'm not really into that kind of thing. I do think you got a good flow so far with how the story is progressing. I do wish that she didn't have so many people out for her love. Many ex's don't want their ex's back nor do they want to be near them half the time.

Grammar: It was average grammar I would say. And by that I mean it was the kind of grammar published books have, and so that means I don't have to correct about grammar at all.

Enjoyment: I'm a teenager, and I couldn't deal with all that lust so I would say I didn't really enjoy it because of that. And of course, it's just by who read it who will have their opinions about this. I do think an adult would like this way much better because of this.

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