Review for :- Anastaciawolf

Reviewer:- ThatOneDolphinGirl

Genre:- Fantasy

Chapters reviewed:- All

Cover:-

Title: I think personally having the title the way it is very common. I see a lot of books have a similar name to what you have. I suggest changing it to something different, so you can be unique. Uniqueness is what gives books their originality.

Cover: I would say the cover is very nice! For one, it blends nicely together. But I would say I don't get the point of the wolf on the front of the cover. I would understand that better if the title or summary mentions a wolf but they do not. I also think the subtitle should be bigger so people can read it.

Blurb: The blurb was well constructed for one. I do wish you could have more of a summary of the story. For example, most authors with published books have quotes of what the main characters say so you can get a feel about them. That way, it can show a connection to why the characters are saying those things.

Plot: It was a very interesting plot but there were some things that confused me. In the first chapters, we got introduced to new characters. They just showed up with names and we didn't get physical descriptions. I understand that the first chapter was the cast but that still doesn't mean you can exclude the descriptions.

Grammar: I think your grammar was very nice. I don't really have much to say about it besides a tip I give to everyone I review. Read your chapters carefully before publishing. It helps with us grammar freaks who get freaked out just by one thing being wrong. Like I said before however, I didn't see a lot of mistakes.

Enjoyment: Overall, it was an okay story. I'm not saying it wasn't good at all because I really liked it. It was a story I might not reread again but I still liked it. All I say is, thanks for writing a good story!

Hope this helps
All the best!

With regards,
The angel community

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