And then he came

Requestor:- Vaikarthana06

Reviewer:- Deardevil123

Genre:- Mystery/thriller

Chapters reviewed:- Till updated..

Cover:-

Title:- Title is very nice I personally like it short and catchy..

Cover:- Cover look is over all good but a little brightness should be adjusted as it's a little too dark..

Grammar & vocabulary:- Grammar and vocabulary is good but needs a little bit of improvement can be more better..

Plot & originality:- Pretty unique never red a book like this..

Flow:- Flow of the story is pretty nice and everything is connected well..

Characters:- I liked how you portrayed each and every character but Agastya character could be a little better (more strong maybe)..

Overall satisfaction:- I got totally satisfied reading this story and was happy to read such a amazing plot..

Total:- 9/10
A little improvement and you are good to go..

Hope this helps
All the best..

With regards,
The angel community

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