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Zaid heard Mubashira once again and looked up, their eyes met.

His breath caught in his throat as he watched her standing up from the bed, the blanket lay forgotten and Mubashira stepped forward.

Zaid locked eyes with her rather confidently and responded but the tremor in his voice betrayed him.

Darane ki koshish ker rahi ho mujhe?

Kyun tum dar rahe ho?

Mubashira asked, her seriousness evident in her tone as she took another step forward.

Mubashira thoda distance.

Zaid said taking another step back. His heart was pounding in his chest like a wild drum at the proximity. Every nerve in his body seemed hyper-aware of the closeness.

Mubashira still stepped forward. Her own heart fluttering like a caged bird in her chest as she placed a hand on his chest. The room seemed to hold it's breath as their eyes met, the conflicting emotions reflecting in their depths.

The world around them seemed to blur into insignificance leaving only the two of them in their own bubble.

Mubashira, still aware of the growing proximity didn't step back and instead took the lead. Feeling a surge of courage, she stepped forward and reached up to cradle his cheek with a tender touch.

Zaid closed his eyes, the sensations that coursed through him were in the forms of a warm tickle and a gentle shiver making his breath hitch.

She cupped his face in her palms and their eyes locked, a mixture of conflicting emotions enveloped them and Zaid let out a trembling breath. The closeness was doing something to him, like it had done the night he had came to her room.

(Episode 23)

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She smiled, her eyes a blend of warmth and affection along with a hint of mischief.

Nakal utar rahe thy meri.

Mubashira asked, a hint of seriousness evident in her tone.

Haan kya karogi?

Zaid asked, a smirk playing on his lips.

She moved back, sighing.

Shauhar bhi takar ka mila hai mujhe.

She said, a note of tiredness coloring her tone.

Woh toh hai.

Zaid said mischievously.

Mubashira smiled weakly but the softness and love were evident in her eyes.

Zaid gently cupped her face in his palms. Mubashira trembled, his touch felt cool against her warm skin. Her heart skipped a beat and a delicate shiver raced down her spine.

You are warm.

Zaid exclaimed, worry etched across his features.

I'm fine Zaid bas thodi si weakness hai.

Mubashira said, her voice weak and she trembled. Zaid, guided by concern snacked his arms around her petite frame lifting her up in his arms effortlessly saying

No you are not.

A gasp escaped Mubashira,s lips. She looked up at him, her eyes went wide, a mixture of shock and disbelief flickering across her features as she watched him.

Zaid main...

Shh.

Zaid silenced her gently. Mubashira,s heart stopped beating for a moment before starting to race like a bullet train in her chest. But later she gripped the front of his shirt feeling her head spinning and placed her head on his chest allowing him to carry her and closed her eyes hearing his loud heartbeats.

As he gently placed her on the bed, Mubashira,s feet trembled as she felt the bedsheet beneath her feet cold. A cold shiver raced down her spine.

Wait.

Zaid said softly and hurried out.

He returned with a glass of warm milk in his hand and held it out for her.

Have it.

Zaid said gently. His eyes holding boundless concern for her. Mubashira had no courage to argue so she nodded her head and slowly took 3 sips.

He passed her a pill. Mubashira took it from him and gulped it down her throat with a sip of her warm milk which surprised him. Later she drank the milk.

He gazed at her, his eyes wide and mouth opening and closing like a fish out of water again and again.

Aise kya dekh rahe ho?

Mubashira asked weakly, her eyes carrying a hint of gentle curiousety.

Zaid came out of his shocked state and shook his head sideways.

Kuch nahin.

He said softly and reached out to hold the empty glass. His fingers grazed hers and they both felt current passing through them. The touch lingered only for a moment. Their hearts skipped several beats.

Sona hai?

Zaid asked softly sitting beside her.

Nahin. Neend nahin aa rahi.

Mubashira said, her eyes sparkling with love as she looked at him, causing his heart to skip a beat.

Kyun?

Zaid asked knowing well that it's not the case.

Mubashira sighed in defeat. She held his hand gently, her fingers playing with his thumb.

Mujhe so ker bahot bimaron wali feeling aati hai as if pata nahin main kitni bimar hoon.

Mubashira confessed, a note of irritation coloring her tone.

Acha toh yeh baat hai...

Zaid said thoughtfully.

He stood up and extended his hand towards her.

Mere sath aao.

Zaid said softly expanding his hand towards her.

Mubashira looked at him, her heart skipping a beat.

Kahan?

She asked, a hint of curiosity evident in her tone.

Zaid smiled softly at her.

Bahar. Aao mere sath.

Zaid said smiling softly at her. Her heart skipped a beat and she placed her head in his and stood up. He left her hand.

Zaid held the blanket and walked out with her. His other hand moved down and he interlocked his fingers with Mubashira,s. Mubashira looked at him, her breath hitched as Zaid looked at her, a hint of smile playing on his lips as he gently squeezed her hand. Mubashira let out a trembling breath.

Zaid pyaar Kerti hoon tumse. Apna dil diya hai maine tumhein tod toh nahin doge na?

She thought. Her eyes shimmered with unshed tears as she looked at them. Zaid sat on the cozy mattress which was set on the ground. He pulled her down and she sat besides him.

Hum yahan kya ker rahe hain.

Mubashira asked looking around. They were on the terrace.

Tumhein pata hai jab main chota tha na toh mom aur main aise raat ko yahan per aa ker aise mattress per beth jate thy aur khoob sari baatein kerte thy.

Zaid said, a soft smile tugged at his lips. He gently pulled Mubashira close, her heart quickened it's pace as he gently wrapped the blanket around them.

Toh aaj hum donon baatein kerenge.

Zaid said, a servant came and gave Zaid a cup of coffee.

He cradled it gently in his hand, the warm steam swirled around his face as he closed his eyes and took into the rich scent of the warm coffee.

Apne liye coffee and mere liye doodh...

Mubashira exclaimed crossing her arms across her chest looking at him with a hint of accusation in her eyes.

Kyun? Phir se doodh peena hai Kya?

Zaid asked, a hint of mischief avident in his tone.

Mubashira made a face.

No.

Good girl.

Mubashira gazed at him, a hint of nostalgia in her eyes.

Pata hai Zaid mera na ek khwab tha.

Mubashira said, a hint of nostalgia lacing her words as she looked up at the beautiful moon in the center of the beautiful sky.

Kya dream tha?

Zaid asked, a hint of genuine curiosity avident in his voice as he sipped on his coffee.

Nothing special just teen fantasies.

Mubashira said shrugging her shoulders. Zaid placed his coffee mug on the table.

Zaid reached out and held her hand gently in his, this time without any hesitation. His heart skipped a beat. He watched her, a smile played on her lips and she tightened her grip on their joined hands. Their eyes met and the world around them seemed to blur into insignificance leaving only the two of them lost in each other.

He reached out, cupping her cheek, he let his hand linger there for a moment longer than necessary, which they both noticed but none of them commented on. He tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear with a gentle touch.

Mubashira closed her eyes lost in the moment of tender connection. A mixture of love and warmth enveloped her heart in a confronting embrace.

Batao na.

Zaid said softly, a hint of curiosity evident in his tone. Mubashira opened her eyes and looked at him, her striking eyes bore into his and then she took a deep breath.

Woh jab main choti thi na tab cartoon movies dekha kerti thi. Ek baar maine beauty and the beast dekhi.

Mubashira said dreamily, a slow smile spread across her face as her eyes sparkled with nostalgia. Zaid took a sip of his coffee listening to her patiently.

Uske baad kya hua?

Zaid asked softly, enjoying listening to her.

Toh main na apne dreams mein dekha kerti thi ke main bhi dance ker rahi hoon apne prince charming ke sath.

Mubashira said smiling dreamily remembering the dreams she often saw in her teenage years.

Zaid heard her and felt a delicate burn in his heart. He asked, his voice tinged with genuine curiosity

Kon tha woh prince charming?

Pata nahin.

Mubashira said, her voice tinged with honesty.

Zaid breathed, a wave of relief washed over him.

Acha hai Mohib nahin tha.

Zaid thought, a bitter taste filled his mouth and he shook his head, then he looked at her, the spark in her beautiful eyes dimmed slightly.

Kya hua?

He asked noticing the dimed spark in her eyes.

Bas scenario different tha.

Mubashira said instead lost in the memory lane.

Kya tha scenario?

Zaid asked smiling softly, the hint of curiosity and genuine happiness evident in his beautiful black eyes.

Taaron se bhare asmaan mein, khubsurat sa chand, main aur woh.

Mubashira said in awe as she painted the scenario once again in her mind.

Zaid smiled and stood up. He forwarded his hand towards her.

MJ.

Zaid called out softly and Mubashira opened her eyes. She looked at him raising an eyebrow.

Aao.

Zaid said and Mubashira held his hand, the blanket layed on the mattress forgotten.

Zaid took his phone out from his pocket and played a song.

Zaid yeh...

Mubashira gasped and looked at him realizing what he was doing.

Chand hai, tare hain, main hoon aur tum bhi ho. So chalo tumhara dream poora kerte hain.

Jaan E Tamanah
Jaan E adaa tujhe
Jaisa hai socha paya wohi

Mubashira looked at him touched by his gestures. Her eyes welled up with a delicate sheen of tears. Her heart swelled with a love for him so profound that it took her breath away.

Suraj ki kirnon sa ek chehra
Dekha hai tumsa maine nahin.

Zaid looked at her and reached out. He gently tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear looking at her with an undefinable emotion in his eyes that left Mubashira puzzled.

Meri mohabbat ka har lamha
Tujhme hi ghum sa gaya
Na main hoon ashiq na main deewana
Keh do mujhe jo piya

Zaid looked into her eyes and smiled softly at her causing her heart to skip a beat. He pulled her forward and twirled her around.

Tera mera hai pyaar amar
Tu chahe toh kadmon mein sar rakh doon
Yeh jeevan kya agar mange tu
Meri jaan nazr ker doon
Tera mera hai pyaar amar

Her back hit his front. She closed her eyes as she felt the rhythm of his heartbeats. Her eyes welled up with tears as she felt overwhelmed with a mixture of emotions.

She couldn't help but let out a shaky laugh as they moved in perfect harmony.

He held her hand and twirled her around. She looked at him and their eyes met and the world around them seemed to blur into insignificance leaving only the two of them in their own bubble of happiness.

Noor e jahan aur Noor e mohabbat
Donon jude tujhse piya
Pagal ya jogi mujhko kaho tum
Haan mera ishq sabse juda

She looked at him and smiled brightly, her eyes shinning with unshed tears of happiness.

Teri hi khatir loon 100 janam main
Chahe ho jo bhi bhala.
Na main hoon ashiq na main deewana
Keh do mujhe jo piya

Zaid gently cradled her face in his palms and smiled at her. Mubashira closed her eyes smiling tearfully and a lone tear escaped her eyes as she leaned more into his touch. Her heart raced in her chest.

MJ.

Zaid called out ever so softly and Mubashira couldn't help but open her eyes and their eyes met.

Main koi prince toh nahin hoon per I promise ke tumhara har khwab mera hai. Tumhara har khwab poora karne ki koshish karunga main.

Zaid said softly, a note of honesty coloring his tone. He cupped her face tighter. Mubashira couldn't help but tear up, touched by the raw honesty of his words

Zaid reached out and wiped the tears that clung to her cheeks, his touch as light as a feather.

Tera mera hai pyaar amar
Tu chahe toh kadmon mein sar rakh doon
Yeh jeevan kya agar mange tu
Meri jaan nazar kar doon
Tera mera hai pyaar amar

She opened her eyes and looked at him, their eyes met. The other noise fading away into the background as she looked at him, she reached up and held his one hand in hers and intertwined her fingers with his and squeezed his hand lightly.

Mubashira wasn't too good with words especially when it came to express her thoughts in words but still she tried, her voice filled with a mixture of warmth and love as she attempted to express her deepest of thoughts

Mere har khwab ka hissa ho tum Zaid.

Zaid smiled, the corners of his eyes crinkling out of genuine happiness as he felt his heart swell with a mixture of warmth and happiness. Mubashira closed her eyes and leaned forward and their foreheads touched. Zaid felt a wave of warmth coursing through his veins and he closed his eyes, his breath hitched in his throat. The cool wind enveloped them in a comforting embrace.

End Of Chapter!!!

Here's the chapter. Don't forget to vote and comment. Love you all take care stay home and stay safe ❤️

Tried to recreate a scene from main. I hope it was good enough. I don't really know how to write romance especially when it comes to my ZaiRa. I wanted to keep it as natural as I can. Sorry if it went too over the top. The reason is I want to bring them closer and that will happen when they'll communicate. I hope you will understand and sorry again if it was too over the top.