My Stinking Rich Boss

             Dedicated to Disha_2007

~relationship is an art.. The dream that two people create is more difficult to master than one. Cause our greatest joy and greatest pains comes from a relationship~


Book Name: My stinking Rich boss

Info: the name clearly depicts the book..

Genre: Billionaire Romance

Blurb : they say love is blind, but they are freaking blind themselves.. Infatuation is blind, love is when you can see right through a person and accept what you see..

"Cause you already took me"

"Say you'll remember me even if I'll be a slut in your life"

"Any other woman would say that she'd like to meet you in the future on friendly and proper terms, but I wish I never met you"

"But she wasn't any other woman, she was my woman, she was the woman.."

"Relationship is an art and she was always a good painter"

What I liked about the book:

I liked the way it progressed from a fight, into a relationship.. From hating each other's guts, to becoming fond of each other, and how he didn't know she was dying.. I liked both the Aidan and Alyssa's character.. It was thrilling to read.. Everything was perfectly written and described, and I loved the way you paid attention to details...

What I think would make this book better:

I think the writing is all mashed up together that, at some point, I was starting to find it difficult to identify which character was talking next.. I think you should give the writing spaces, a little, to separate them..

The emotions came out bland, I wasn't really feeling some of the emotions, like it should have come out.. I'd advice you use words that easily and clearly depicts the characters emotions, so they don't get Bored at the first few chapters..

And the Mature part, I think it was rushed, matured contents are written for readers to enjoy, but, it was rushed, I think that part should be taken slowly, and step by step.. Even if you do not want to add too much details, you should summarize it in a fun way, that'll put readers on the edge, and make them want more..

Try going through every new written chapters over and over again, to avoid grammatical and typographical errors.. Before publishing..

My overall opinion:

I'd give this book an 8/10
It was written well,
I think readers would love this book and if the few things I've pointed out, could be worked on, it'll make the book much more Amazing, for those who enjoy books of these genre's, and for those who don't.. And I'd recommend this book be given a shot by readers..

The End of this review..

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