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Nandini P.O.V.

I have seen him after 3 long year which were like ages for me. I wanted to touch him , i wanted to ask so many think but but.. my bad luck always comes.. in b/w.

Before i could reach upto him. Somebody shot n he got disappeared with in friction of second as because of gun shot there had been huzzle buzzle I can't able to see him from front also.

But i m sure he was my manik . As my heart was beating so fastly that time.. like the way it was beated when manik was with me.

Now everything settle down in casino.. and i m sitting lost at bar corner. Where few min. Ago my manik was sitting.

No i can't sit idle n waste my time in thinking ridiculous. I have do something. Yes..

"Excuse me.."i call bartender then he immediately comes to me.

"Yes madam.. which drink you want.. "he asked but i show him my hand.

"I don't want anything.. i wanna ask u about a person.. who was sitting here before the gun shot"i asked

"Sorry mam we can't disclose his name.. "bartender said blowing his head down. What the fuck here i m dying to know about manik and he is saying sorry.

"Now also u don't want to tell me.. "i ask placing 500 dollars in front of him. He immediately pick up the money n put it in his pocket.

"Mam.. yes i will tell u.. but after my working hours as there is strick order we can't display his name.."he said making me hell angry.

"Listen.. tell me.. now.. "now i said taking out my pistol from my clutch. The person start sweating in fear.

"I m telling.. "he said rubbing his forhead with his handkerchief.

"Good.."i said and keep the pistol back. Then i get a shock to know about him.

"He is parth samthaan the mafia boss.."he whisper coming close to me.

After listening this i become blank n bartender get busy in attending other costumer. How can this be possible. My Manik become a gangster in these 3 year. I have to find it right now.

Then i come outside of casino . Driver open the car for me n i immediately settle inside and start searching about him on browser. But there i get nothing.

I get disappoint and keep the tab aside n take a long breath. Then look outside the window.

"If today i have got a clue about manik.. then surely i will get u back also one day.. god is cruel , my destiny is more cruel but i always know how to change my cruel destiny.. "i think while looking outside the window having determination in my eyes.

Then i pick up my phone and call detective to know about manik.

"Yes mam how can i help you.."as soon as detective Henry pick up the phone said

"I want all information about mafia boss parth.. " i said directly n he remain silent for a second.

"30000 dollars"he directly tell his price.

"Okay.. done.."i said because for me 30000 dollars is nthng in front of my manik.

"Till Tonight all the information will on desk.. mam.."he said n then i hang up the call.

"How can manik be a mafia boss... "This one think is not going from my mind.

P.O.V. ends

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"Jack how can u be so irresponsible.. u was there with me.. then how can somebody attacked on me.. "Parth shout angrily on Jack and Jack is standing blowing his head down.

Jack as zain imam

Jack's right arm has been injured which is clearly showing that to save parth he has got injured. Then also parth is shouting on him as he is ruthless mafia who having no feeling for others. He is strick to his rule.

"Sorry boss.."jack appolize still looking down in shame.

"Sorry.. just keep it to yourself.. and go find the shooter.. "parth shout again on him

"Yes boss.."jack saying this leave his study room immediately and parth sit on his chair holding his forhead. Afterward he start smoking his cigar lighten up by one of his bodyguard.

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On the other hand nandini reach hotel. Now she is waiting for information about parth whom she is thinking her manik.

Nandini P.O.V.

Finally my P.A. come with information. I take a long breath and open the file.

The first think my eyes fall on his picture. I was right he is my manik only. And i smile touching his picture n a tear drop down from my eyes. Which had been stored from 3 year. I never let myself cry as it is weakest point of human being.

Then i start reading about him. I m finding Everything different about him from manik. But rather then his face one think which make me more sure that he is my manik that is he got famous before 2.5 year approx . Manik had also got disappear before 3 year ago.

"He is rude , he is arrogant , he is emotionless. But why he become like this. Why he enter in world of mifia. Before we both together had killed gang of mafia now he become the same. Why.." all these question are running in my mind. Which can be answer by him only.

How will i enter in his house and meet him First i have to focus on this.

Then i read something which can be help me to enter in his house. He is finding his personal maid.

I will go there becoming his personal maid as i don't have any other option.. to get him back.. i will find the reality soon.

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Next morning

Parth is in his study and taking interview for his personal maid.

"God morning sir"One girl in age of 23 enter inside n she greet him.

"First rule for becoming my maid is that she should refer me as her master.. understand.."parth said dangerously.

"So.. sorry master"the girl appolize

"Strip your cloth"he said while standing up from his chair.

And then the girl start removing her cloth but like always Parth doesn't get turn on by her body.

"Just get lost.."he shout while throwing the chair in frustration. The girl immediately leave the room after wearing her cloth.

Now next girl enter in his room that is non other than nandini Malhotra. She is wearing a simple blue dress which is coming upto her mid Thigh.

When she enter in room manik is busy doing something on lappy. Finally she see him. She keep on staring him for sometime. She wanna kiss him now n wanna tell him how much she loves him.

Nandini P.O.V.

After seeing him i feel i have started breathing after 3 year finally. I wanna ask him what happen to him. I m waiting for him to look at me desperately.

Finally he look at me n i get lost in his dark brown eyes. But he only for a second look into my eyes. Then i feel he is checking out my body. He is looking at me with lustful eyes. Manik never in his life look at me like this.

He get up from his chair n start coming close to me looking at me as like he will eat me up in next movement. My mind stop working. Manik call me his perfect nandini but the way he is looking my body manik's perfect nandini is also fly away.

"Ma.. "i about to call him but before that i can able to say something he put his finger on my lips n dangerously look at me. No one sacred me that much he is scaring me now.

"Is he really my manik.."one question come in my mind..
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Questions for this part..

1.Howz the part ? Try to do long comment

2.few words about parth in this part

3. Few words about nandini in this part

4. Few words about jack in this part

5. Wht do think manik will select nandini as his personal maid

6. now u also think parth is manik

7.how was last scene

8. Late this part out of 10

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