What the fuck. Noice this seems lit, let's see what e-

Well shit I miss the 150 mark, great job me. Welp
Let me just get started a One-shot.. horray.

Off my weird persona. Thanks for reading the story, I know I'm not as good as some people, but yet you read, eh whatever. So. Might as well put some writing tips, they trashy so yee.

1.Put spaces between your paragraphs, not like this:
Love seemed strange, it could tear your heart or build it up.
How he did it. He didn't know.)

It is annoying for commenters and readers, words love to blend for me.

2.Everytime a different person speaks, make a new paragraph.
Do:"Are you ready?" She said.

"As ready as I'll ever be."

Don't:"Are you ready?"She said."As ready as I'll ever be"

It's gets confusing, try to not do that.

3.Set a word minimum, it helps me with writing, might help you.

Ex:Mine is 1000 though I hope one day to make a longer one.

4.Think. What can go wrong in that situation, and make it go wrong. What can break your character, Break Them.

Tear what the love and care about. Make them cry at sad occurrences . Don't build them up, let them break, that's how the light gets through.

5.So slight rp advice

These '*' are not for actions, their use is for correcting errors. Put ' " ' when you speak, that's their purpose, so use it.

6. Don't make Gary and Mary Sues.

Mary Sues are those with zero problem in life, always gets what they want. (Often with O P Powers)

Gary Sues are those with all problems, never get what they want, no body loves them.

Basically, don't do it.

And uh I think that's it! So thanks again for reading! The One-Shot will hopefully have around 3000 words. Ta ta!

~Mrs.Frog