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I wanted to know one thing...
Which one do u think is better?
1. Destiny of love or
2. Love has its own way
Please do tell...
Thank you so much

Recap : Karan hired a detective to find about the truth. He asked rohan's help. On the other side, preeta was having some unnamed feelings for karan.

Now coming back to the story,

Preeta was crying silently in the corner of the field....

And karan was crying near the bench..

Preeta wiped her tears and went towards karan

Karan when saw her coming towards him, wiped his tears immediately

Karan : tum yaha...?

Preeta : ha Woh.... Mere senior doctor ne mujhe kaha hai ki mujhe aaj tumhare saath rehna hoga kyoki tumhare shoulder par lagi hai aur kuch din baad finals bhi hai....

Karan : theek hai..

He could not play as he was having pain in his arm..
He sat on the bench
Preeta was sitting near him

Preeta : Karan wo....... Tum mujhse baat Kyo nhi kar rhe? Kuch hua hai kya? I'm sorry...

Karan : kuch nhi...

Preeta: Karan please kuch Toh bolo.... Mujhe Acha nhi lag rha..

Karan : but tumhe Kyo Acha nhi lag rha? Bolo preeta..? Bolo?

Preeta was lost in her thoughts.. She was not able to figure out anything.

Preeta : wo actu..... Actually mujhe bura is liye laga kyoki tum mere dost ho... Acha baba I'm sorry.

Karan just ignored her and went away. He went back to his home.

Preeta who saw this started crying again. She was feeling like someone has stabbed her heart.

She felt helpless.

She ran out from there and returned to her home. Her eyes were all red. She wiped her tears and directly went towards her washroom. She stayed crying badly.
She did not knew why she was feeling like that.

She stopped crying and washed her face. Came out of the Washroom and slept for sometime.

On the other side,

Karan s also crying for hurting his baby doll and ignoring her.
He had no option other than this to make her realise the truth.

He also slept for sometime. Then woke up and went somewhere in his car.

On the third side,

Prithvi was at sherlin's place...

Prithvi and sherlin were making plans to separate karan & preeta forever..

They saw someone entering there...
It was rohan..

He went towards them.
Prithvi and sherlin were shocked...

Rohan : darro mat!! Mein tum dono ke baare mein Sab jaanta hu..... Aur mein in Sab mein tumhari help kar sakta hu...

Prithlyn (shocked) : tum kaun ho? Aur kya jaane ho?( Scared)

Rohan : yehi ki tum dono ka affair chal rha hai aur tum luthras ko barbaad karna chahte ho..

Prithvi : tumhe humse kya chahiye?

Rohan sat on the sofa keeping his legs in the table.

Rohan : mujhe tumharasaath chahiye. Kyoki mein bhi us the karan luthra ko barbaad karna chahta hu.

Prithvi and sherlin see each other

Rohan continues : is liye abhi tak uska dost banne ki acting kar rha hu.... Taaki usse shak na ho. Aur tumhe pata hai kya usse preeta se pyaar ho gaya hai. Aur usse tum dono par shak bhi hai.
Is liye usne mujhe bheja tha ki tum dono ke baare mein pata lagau.
But mein kya karu, mein kissi kimat par usse khush nhi dekh sakta. Is liye tum dono ko yeh Sab bata rha hu.

Prithvi (shocked) : par tumhari usse kya dushmani hai?

Rohan : badla! Badla lena hai mujhe uss se. Uski wajah se mein team ka captain nhi ban paaya. Meri puri life barbaad ho gayi hai. Ab mujhe hamesha uske under khelna Padhega.

Sherlin : tumhe hum dono ke baare mein kaise pata laga

Rohan : mein apne dushman ke saath uske dushmano ki bhi khabar rakhta hu(winks)

Prithvi and sherlin smile seeing his attitude.

Prithvi : Toh dost, an aage kya karna hai?

Rohan : Toh ab hum Sab mil kar usse barbaad karenge. Deal?

They shake their hands.

Rohan leaves.

Prithvi and sherlin smile hearing that there are more people who want to destroy his career and him.

Screen shifts to rohan
He is going towards a car.

It is karan's car

Rohan signs him thumbs up
Karan smiles

*Flashback*

In karan's farmhouse,

Karan : tujhe sherlin aur prithvi ko ye yakeen dilana hoga ki tu mujhe barbaad karna chahta hai. Aur tu unka saath dega.

Rohan : but main ye karunga kaise?

Karan : simple, tu unhe bol ki tu meri wajah se captain nhi ban paaya aur ab tu mujh se badla lena chahta hai. Is liye yeh Sab kar rha hai.

Rohan : par karan, tu apne merit ki wajah se captain bana hai aur meine kabhi aisa socha bhi nhi...

Karan : par tujhe ye Sab unko bolna hoga Taaki unhe yakeen ho jaaye ki tu mujh se badla lena chahta hai.

Rohan : theek hai. Sirf tere liye.

*Flashback ends *

Rohan sits in karan's car and both of them leave from there.

Both of them go to their houses.

Screen shifts to preeta,

She remembered the previous day incidents.

She was lying in her bed and crying.

(Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dil Nashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee
Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dil Nashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee
Rukhi Rukhi Si Yeh Hawa
Aur Sukhe Patte Ki Tarah
Shehar Ki, Sadko Pe Main
Lawaris, Udta Hua
Sau Raste
Par Teri Raah Nahi Eeee
Sau Dard Hain, Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dilnashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee
Behta Hain Paani, Behne De
Waqt Ko Yuhi, Rehne De
Dariya Ne Karwat Li Hai Toh
Saahilon Ko Sehne De
Sau Hasratein
Par Tera Gham Nahieeeeeeee
Tanha Tanha Tanha Hai
Tanha Chal
Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein)

She had locked her door for more than 2 hours and was crying continuously.

Prithvi had come to her house to fix the marriage date. (Just now)

Sarla came outside preeta's room and knocked the door

Sarla : beta darwaaza khol, prithvi ji aaye hai shaadi ki date fix Karne ke liye. Bahar aa ja

Preeta wiped her tears

Preeta : ha maa abhi aa rhi hu

Sarla went towards the lobby:

Sarla : beta ji preeta abhi aa rhi hai. Aap thodi der wait kar Lijiye..

Prithvi : aunty mein itni der jaanki aunty se mil aata hu.

Sarla smiled : theek hai beta ji

Prithvi went in jaanki's room

At the same time preeta was coming out of her room, she saw prithvi in jaanki's room. She stopped there.

Prithvi : aur jaanki budhiya. Kaisa Lag rha hai yaha par padhe hue?

Preeta was shocked hearing this.

But she stopped there only.

Prithvi : dekh mein aaj us preeta se shaadi ki date fix karane aaya hu, aur tu kuch nhi kar sakti. Tujhe saara Sach pata hai Phir bhi......... Shaadi ke baad mere paas do ladkiyaan hogi Ek ye preeta aur Ek meri sherlin baby.

Preeta was more shocked hearing this. She controlled her tears and ran towards her room. She was crying because she did not trust karan.

She locked herself in the room

She thought that prithvi was betraying her and her family. And that she had not trusted karan. He had warned her several times. But she ignored him. She was crying badly. She then remembered that karan was also ignoring her.

At the same time Sarla came there, she knocked again

Sarla : beta aaja bahar

Preeta : ma meri tabiyat kharaab hai.aap hi fix kar lo....
Mein thodi der rest kar lungi

Sarla : kya hua beta? Tu theek Toh hai na?

Preeta : ha maa aap jao... Mein thodi der rest kar ke theek ho jaungi..

Sarla left

Preeta was crying badly.

She could not do anything.

She just took a knife and cut her wrist. Blood was flowing from her hand and tears from her eyes.

But this pain was nothing in front of karan's ignorance.

She slowly fainted and blood was continuously flowing from her hand.

After sometime Sarla came there.
(prithvi has left) She knocked the door but no one responded. She called preeta, but again no response. She was worried, she called shrishti and dadi. All were knocking, but were getting no response.
Shrishti called karan and informed him.
Karan panicked and immediately drove there.
Here, all of them were continously knocking without getting any response.

After some time, karan reached there.
He saw everyone were crying and knocking the door without nay response. Without wasting the time, he broke the door
He saw preeta lying there in the pool of blood.
All of them panicked
Karan was standing like a lifeless body. He went towards her and saw her hand bleeding badly and the dried  tears on her face. He was crying. He took preeta in his arms and went towards his car.

Shrishti, dadi and Sarla were standing there crying continuously.

Karan took preeta to the hospital. He took her in his arms and called the doctor. Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes.

Sarla and  shrishti  also decided to come to the hospital. They took an auto and left.
Dadi was at home. To take care of jaanki

Screen shifts to the hospital,

The doctor took preeta in the room.

Karan was continously crying and then he remembered the events that took place the previous day when he realized his love and preeta was so close to him.
He then remembered the incidents that took place in the morning, when he was ignoring her and she was continuously crying.

He blamed himself for preeta's condition.

He cried more realising his mistake.

At the same time the aroras came there.

Sarla : beta, preeta kaha hai?
(worried)

Karan who was not hearing anything was continuously crying.

Shrishti shook karan
Karan saw them.

Shrishti : Karan sir meri Di kaha hai?

Karan had no answer to her question. Because he was blaming himself for preeta's condition.

He just pointed towards the room where preeta was lying unconscious and the doctors were treating her.

Shrishti and Sarla ran towards the room and saw preeta lying unconscious.
They both were crying seeing her condition.

A nurse came out of the room.

Karan immediately stood up and ran towards her

Karan : meri preeta kaisi hai? Usse kuch hua Toh nhi na..? Wo theek Toh ho jaaygi na..

(Sarla and shrishti were shocked hearing meri preeta)

Nurse: dekhiye abhi kuch keh nhi sakte hai.. Bahot blood loss ho gaya hai.
She gave some papers to karan and said : aap in papers par sign kar dijiye, isme likha hai ki Agar patient ko kuch bhi ho gaya Toh isme hospital ki koi galti nhi hogi.
Aap unke husband hai na...?

Karan took the papers and was standing like a lifeless body. He could not bear more pain. The papers slipped from his hand and fell down.

Nurse : dekhiye, aap jab tak ye papers sign nhi karenge tab tak him ye operation start nhi kar payenge...

Sarla who heard this, immediately signed the papers.

The nurse left

Karan sat on his knees. And was remembering all his moments with preeta.

(Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dil Nashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee
Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dil Nashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee
Rukhi Rukhi Si Yeh Hawa
Aur Sukhe Patte Ki Tarah
Shehar Ki, Sadko Pe Main
Lawaris, Udta Hua
Sau Raste
Par Teri Raah Nahi Eeee
Sau Dard Hain, Sau Rahatein
Sab Mila Dilnashin
Ek Tuhi Nahieeeeee
Behta Hain Paani, Behne De
Waqt Ko Yuhi, Rehne De
Dariya Ne Karwat Li Hai Toh
Saahilon Ko Sehne De
Sau Hasratein
Par Tera Gham Nahieeeeeeee
Tanha Tanha Tanha Hai
Tanha Chal
Sau Dard Hain Sau Rahatein)

He was remembering their first meeting, their cute nok jhoks, preeta's falling down and karan holding her,their cute moments, their friendship, and the incidents that took place in the morning. He was shattered.

He just broke down in tears.

Sarla and shrishti were shocked seeing his condition.  They thought what had happened to karan....

Another nurse came out of the room and said : Hume jaldi hee AB + blood group chahiye hoga.... Nhi Toh condition aur critical ho jayegi..

Karan stoop up and ran towards her

Karan : nurse, mera blood group AB+ hai...

Nurse : theek hai, aap jaldi chaliye...

Karan went with the nurse

Here, Sarla was thinking why was karan reacting in this way.....
But they ignored their thought.

Karan gave his blood for preeta.

He came back and sat on the chair
He was emotionless and lifeless.

He thought some thing and went towards the temple in the hospital.

He kept the burning camphor in his hand and prayed to God for preeta's well being.

Screen shifts in the room where preeta was lying unconscious. The doctors were treating her.

(Rangreza
Rangreza
Rangrezaa...
Ho... Rang-Rezaaaa...
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Faya Kun,
Faya Kun, Faya Kun, Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Faya Kun,
Faya Kun, Faya Kun, Faya Kun
Jab Kahin Pe Kuch Nahi Bhi Nahi Tha
Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha
Jab Kahin Pe Kuch Nahi Bhi Nahi Tha
Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha
Woh Jo Mujh Mein Samaya
Woh Jo Tujh Mein Samaya
Maula Wahi Wahi Maaya
Woh Jo Mujh Mein Samaya
Woh Jo Tujh Mein Samaya
Maula Wahi Wahi Maaya
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Sadaqallahul-Alliyul-Azeem
Rangreza Rang Mera Tan Mera Man,
Le Le Rangaayi Chaahe Tan Chaahe Man
Rangreza Rang Mera Tan Mera Man,
Le Le Rangaayi Chaahe Tan Chaahe Man
Sajra Savera Mere Tan Barse
Kajra Andhera Teri Jalti Lau
Sajra Savera Mere Tan Barse
Kajra Andhera Teri Jalti Lau
Katra Mila Jo Tere Dar Par Se
O Maula... Maula... Aaa...
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Faya Kun,
Faya Kun, Faya Kun, Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Faya Kun,
Faya Kun, Faya Kun, Faya Kun
Jab Kahin Pe Kuch Nahi Bhi Nahi Tha
Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha
Jab Kahin Pe Kuch Nahi Bhi Nahi Tha
Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Sadaqallahul-Alliyul-Azeem'
Sadaqa Rasulu-Hun Nabi-Yun-Kareem
Sallallaahu Alayhi Wasallam, Sallallaahu Alayhi Wasallam
O Mujhpe Karam Sarkar Tera
Araz Tujhe, Karde Mujhe, Mujhse Hi Riha
Ab Mujhko Bhi Ho, Deedaar Mera
Karde Mujhe, Mujhse Hi Riha
Mujhse Hi Rihaaaaaaaa
Mann Ke Mere Ye Bharam
Kachche Mere Ye Karam
Leke Chale Hai Kahaan
Main Toh Jaanoon Hi Na
Tu Hai Mujh Mein Samaya,
Kahaan Leke Mujhe Aaya
Main Hoon Tujh Mein Samaya,
Tere Peeche Chala Aaya
Tera Hi Main Ek Saaya
Tune Mujhko Banaya
Main Toh Jag Ko Na Bhaaya
Tune Gale Se Lagaya
Ab Tu Hi Hai Khudaya
Sach Tu Hi Hai Khudaya
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Faya Kun,
Faya Kun, Faya Kun, Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Faya Kun,
Faya Kun, Faya Kun, Faya Kun
Jab Kahin Pe Kuch Nahi Bhi Nahi Tha
Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha
Jab Kahin Pe Kuch Nahi Bhi Nahi Tha
Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha Wahi Tha
Kun Faya Kun
Kun Faya Kun
Sadaqallahul-Alliyul-Azeem'
Sadaqa Rasulu-Hun Nabi-Yun-Kareem
Sallallaahu Alayhi Wasallam, Sallallaahu Alayhi Wasallam)

Suddenly, the doctor came out. Shrishti ran to call karan, but what she saw was unbelievable.
Karan had kept burnt camphor on hand.

She ran towards him and said : Karan sir wo doctor aa gayi hai...

Karan ran towards the room

Doctor : ab unki condition pehle se better hai... But hum abhi bhi kuch keh nhi sakte hai.....
Unko kissi cheez ka bahot stress tha, aur blood loss bhi kaafi ho gaya hai...
Agar unhe agle 24 ghanto mein hosh nhi aaya to Woh hamesha hamesha ke liye coma mein Chali jayegi...

Karan who heard this was standing numb. He blamed himself for preeta's condition. He sat like a lifeless body.

Screen freezes on karan's emotionless face and preeta's unconscious face.

No Precap

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