Not long ago I found a really ugly comic if mine. I draw it maybe two or three years ago. It's a piece of an RPG I took part in that time.
It was from Lou-Chan12 and is called "Spiegelwelt"
One of my Charakters was Kisaar.
And that's the old comic...

That's just... Trash, okay? So totally trash.

I couldn't let go, so I thought of doing a reprise!!!

First get an impression of what you wanna keep and do some brainstorming!
What should the charakters look like?

Do I wanna keep the structure and words I used?

Second do a quick sketching of the structure and where you wanna have the speech bubbles and everything else.

Third you should always start with a lead pencil!
Don't use any other pens you can't erase!

Forth you can start with the line art!
Be careful and take your time.

I've got a bad camera because I kinda destroyed it so I'll show you a few pieces in close.

In the first comic there wasn't really a market even though I wrote it was happening at a market. But well, second try is better!

The dialogue has more affection if you draw the eyes in close.
Use lines around the body to show the trembling. -> picture in the right bottom corner.

Her legs are a little too short again, I'm really sorry for that.

Most important part are the eyes!  They show you the feelings and thoughts of the charakters. Never underestimate the eyebrows too! They are at least as important as the eyes!

I could have used colours as well, but meh.

I'm a little afraid it would have destroyed the whole thing! XD