These are the reviews of your stories, please don't take any offense in what I say! It's constructive criticism, as I want to see you all become the best writers you can! If you haven't submitted your entry, don't stress! You still have until this Thursday to do so.

I Won't Give Up by Retro:
I really liked the idea behind it. Tying in some Solangelo is never a bad thing, right? Plus, having Will bring Nico back was a very nice touch, I loved it! Although, I did see a few grammar errors, in the title as well. Your sentences seemed a little choppy, add some more detail to them so the reader can really feel like they're in the story. It seemed to jump around with the time too, which was a little confusing. Overall, you did good! Just take your time and make it as descriptive as you can.

Valdez (BLUEEEpancakes):
First of all, can I say SHOCKER!! I literally gasped when Percy didn't die, but Leo did! The story was very nicely written, adding details that made it just that much better. The details about the camp, and previous things like Gabe and Percy's fear of drowning. My only issue was that you updated in chapters. The story wasn't completely finished when I read it, I really wanted to know why Rachel killed herself. Just for future reference, write the story in one chapter. I did see a couple of grammar errors, but not a ton. Other than that, I really liked the story.
(Added this after reading more of the story, but not the whole story) You definitely get full points for creativity. Coming up with a new Prophecy was very clever and original. But, like I said before, updating in chapters takes away from the overall story. It felt more like an actual book instead of a writing prompt. Make it more of a short story in the future (but you would be really great at writing a book too!) I found that I forgot details, and I got confused because I thought Rachel was dead...? You just overachieved with this prompt.
(After reading the whole story) It was a very unique story. I like how you killed off everyone in their own ways, not just one character. Some things didn't make sense, like the black thing that took Piper...? I really liked that part, but was a little confused. Just please in the future do only one chapter, thank you. And good job, you really outdid yourself for this entry.

Killing My Fav Character by Lily:
I loved how you started out the story. I really felt like I was there, watching it. Adding in Hazel and Frank's family was such a nice touch. Their kids really made Hazel's death that much sadder. The only things I would say would be to first have a title that pertains to the story. Something to give the reader a little glimpse as to what they're about to read. And it did seem a little cliché how Hazel died, I thought that there could've been a little more originality behind it. I didn't notice any grammar errors, yay! Your writing skills are really good, I love how descriptive you get! Great first entry.

Ragnarok by Tiggs:
This story was written beautifully, one of the best so far. I really felt like I was reading something that Rick Riordan wrote. I'm not as familiar with Magnus Chase and Alex Fierro, but it still made my heart hurt when Magnus died. That's exactly how I wanted to feel when the character died. I noticed a few grammar errors, not bad. You did a fantastic job!

Their Eternal Sleep by Ship:
Holy CRAP IM SOBBING. Your writing skills are phenomenal, really. The way you described how Annabeth was feeling, and the little details you brought in from the PJO books was amazing! I thought at first the story seemed a little slow, but then my girl Annie killed herself. Ahh! My only critiques would be to separate your paragraphs more. Like when there is dialog, make that it's own paragraph. It's easier to read when it's like that. And it was a little confusing because you didn't explain why Percy was gone. But, I saw no grammar errors, yay! Really well done!

Say Hello... by Kat:
This was exactly the type of story I was hoping for. The way Nico and Will died was truly tragic, and you did a great job of emphasizing that. It indeed made me very sad, and Will and Nico aren't even my favorite characters (I don't hate them, but my girl Piper takes the cake here folks). I loved that it was an alternate ending to the war with Gaea. The Prophecy was also a clever touch. I saw a couple of grammar errors, that's all. Great job!

Invisible Forever by Maeneth:
I'm sobbing. Again. That was so incredibly BEAUTIFULLY written. I loved the connection to The Trials of Apollo and it coming full circle. Your description of the battle and Percy's feelings afterwards was flawless, and it genuinely tugged on my heartstrings. You added details that I didn't even remember, like Annabeth's invisibility hat and good old Paul. I really felt like I was in the story. Plus, you went above and beyond and made a cover for it. The only thing I would say is that I noticed a few spelling errors, but I'll get over that. This was easily one of my favorite entries, very well done.

Everything Good Always Ends in Tragedy by Maia:
This was definitely an entertaining story. It was a unique take on the prompt, I really enjoyed it. Having Calypso incorporated into a quest of her own was such a refreshing idea, really. And using her old loves as apart of solving the quest was ingenious. Your writing skills are very good, I loved the descriptions. I could visual the story throughout my head vividly. I noticed like one or two spelling errors, very nice job. I'm very pleased with your entry.

Kill Your Favorite Character by Jay:
This was a very good story. You incorporated elements that really helped me to understand the story more, such as the song and the pictures of Percy. That was a nice and clever touch. I loved how you had Percy give her the ring before he died, it made my heart hurt. Your writing skills are great, and your sense of detail is really good. I didn't see many spelling errors, good job. Overall, this was a very good first entry! Just add a title that pertains to the story next time.

The Death of Leo Valdez by The Potato Demigod:
This story genuinely made me upset. Leo doesn't deserve to die twice! But besides that, it was good. I liked that Calypso was pregnant and they were married. But, I did notice quite a few grammar and spelling errors. Some of the story didn't make much sense, like how Ethan essentially killing himself pertained to Leo dying. And why did Calypso poison him? Overall this wasn't bad, I can see you have potential as a writer.
(Updated review) It did make more sense once you rewrote it. I still think Ethan dying was a little out of place, but it did pertain more to Leo. There were still spelling errors, so just look for that in the future. But, having Calypso say she still loves Percy was a unique twist and I really liked that!

Prompt #1 by B:
I liked the way you portrayed death as a new beginning. It was an interesting take on the prompt. Although, it didn't go into very much depth which I wish it would've. Just to give a backstory as to why they're fighting those monsters, etc. I noticed some spelling and grammar errors. You seemed to have ongoing sentences, so try breaking them up in the future. And also have a title that relates to the story. Overall, it was a good entry.

I Love You by KG:
This story was very nicely written. Your word choice and descriptions were so precise, I could visualize the whole thing. I liked how you incorporated the hydra and Hercules' story of killing him, as well as the Minotaur. I did think the story was a little on the cliche side and could've been more unique, but with that being said I definitely didn't expect both Percy and Annabeth to die. I noticed a couple of grammar errors. This was a very good entry, nice job.

Rip Ameico Rip by Princess:
I loved how you made an OC and incorporated them into the story. The quest was a great idea. But, I saw a lot of grammar and spelling errors. Sentences weren't capitalized, punctuation wasn't there. Be mindful of that in the future and read your story before publishing it. I thought it was a little cliche his Nico died, but that being said I still enjoyed the story.

Hate... by N.S:
Oh. My. Gosh. I've never seen a story written this way, and I absolutely loved it. Having it be a school AU was a refreshing change, and describing Nico's feelings was perfect. Having each of his demigod friends hate him for some reason was a nice touch, and I loved how they accepted him in the end. It was such a shocker that he died, even though he wasn't going to commit suicide!! It broke my heart. You planned this story out so well, props to you. With the dates I did get a little confused, but that's okay. This was an original, unique idea. Great job!

Kill Off Your Favorite Character by Fangirl:
I really liked this story. Having the arai again and Annabeth wanting to kill them all instead of Percy was such a good idea. I loved how you did the aftermath of Annabeth dying, the funeral and everything (the trident with her name BROKE MY HEART). There was some spelling and grammar errors. And next time, have a title that relates to the story. The alternate ending was beautiful and I loved the idea. This was a very good story, nice job!

William Solace, I Swear You Will Be the Death of Me by Brooklyn:
First off, the IRONY IN THE TITLE. That hits deep. I liked how you started off the story on a happy note, making Nico dying that much more unexpected. I really liked how even when Nico was dying, him and Will still made the best of it. It was adorable. That being said, with the hellhound and the shooter randomly appearing that didn't make much sense. The way he died could've been more detailed and clear. I did notice some spelling errors. And when there's dialog, separate the paragraphs so it's easier to read it. Other than that, it was a pretty good story.

I Love You by Angela:
This was a well thought out story. I loved that you have a background, which really helped to understand the story more. The idea was very unique. Creating an OC was a great detail too. The way Percy and Annabeth died really made me heart hurt. Some of your grammar didn't make sense though, and there were some spelling errors. Overall I really did enjoy it, and the pictures helped to understand the full story.

Percabeth Broken Love and Broken Dreams by Kerry:
This story really touched me heart. The irony behind Percy proposing then dying hit me hard. I liked how you added the aftermath of Percy dying and how Annabeth felt. I thought that Arachne suddenly coming out of nowhere was a little misplaced, but that's okay. There were some spelling errors but not a lot. Great first entry!

First Entry by Raven:
Well I didn't need my heart anyway. My girl Piper ahhh 😭 This one tugged at my heartstrings the most. It was nice to have a different character other than Percy and Annabeth. I liked how you tied in Jason (rip my love). Your writing was beautifully descriptive and I could vividly see the story in my head. My only thing would be to have a title that pertains to the story! I saw no spelling or grammar errors, very good job. This was an amazing story, props to you.

That Night In The Woods by Maddie:
Wow, you really thought this story out. All the details added up and made the story that much better to read. I normally don't like POV's switching that much, but it worked perfectly with your story. It was such an original idea, and not to mention my girl Piper 😭 It genuinely seemed like something Rick would write. I did notice a few spelling errors though. Overall, very nicely done.

Pending:
Scarlet
(Don't rush, this is just for me to know who hasn't finished yet)