REMEMBER EVERYTHING BELOW HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE PERSON OR THEIR USUAL WRITING. IT IS BASED ON THEIR ENTRY AND THEIR ENTRY ONLY. NO HARD FEELINGS.

I have not recieved an entry from the following people despite countless reminders and a very increased deadline:

@Persephone_Hades

@Rachel_Dare_

Those people have been eliminated.

I have read all the entries and judged them fairly. Every single one of them was amazing, but I have to eliminate one.... why oh why?

This round I will give advice to some writers:

Silena- I enjoyed it a lot! It was very sweet and nice, but there is always room for improvement. You could work a tiny bit on using less 'said' words and things like that. But besides that, you were amazing!

Thalia- It was a very nice plot and fun to read but hard to follow. And less 'fillers', if you don't mind. People would prefer to read a nice and intresting plot like yours without having to read things things that are written to use more space and distract from the story line. But it was really great overall.

Hazel- Talk about Frazel! You made my heart melt. But like I said with Silena's advice, there is ALWAYS room for improvement. Maybe a bit more grammer? As Albert pointed out, when Frank told you about Trick-Or-Treating you turned what would be multiple sentences into one. I think it's because you wanted Frank to seem nervous, but then you should have written something like 'His sentences strung together as he stared at his sweaty palms...'. Or something like that. But I loved it so much!

Nico-  Aww, you wrote about us on Halloween! That's so sweet. I loved the plot and everything about it! You, the only boy in the competetion, may prove hard to beat. But remember to edit a bit more. There were some minor things like combined words 'awas' or a left out word like 'to' but that is understandable since you what you explained to me about the IPod thing or iPad or whatever it is called. Great job!

Katie- It was so descriptive and amazing and.... Ugh, I'm running out of words to describe it. But I loved it. Maybe you could add some more figurative language. (That applies to everyone!) But it was really good, a large step forward in this competetion.

Now it is time to announce the.... *sniff*... elimianted.

OK, this person is an awesome writer. Last entry, her's had no chance of losing or even coming close to last place. Unfortunatly, this time her entry was hard to follow and very hard to understand. Lots of times I had to go and reread parts so I could understand. (No, I do not have dyslexia)

Remember, don't feel let down. You did really well, it just fell a little short this time.

I'm very sorry, Thalia.