Everyone so this chapter is gonna get a bit sad and like I promised there is going to be a lemon scene at the end of it I was just one point out that I've had to make my own version of nomu so I'll try and ascribe them to the best of my abilities but if you don't recognise the character and document I'm talking about my own made up nomu just want to let you guys know

Please vote. please, I worked really hard on this one

Narrators point of view

Brightburn gave out his orders: kill them all!

The army of mutated corpses charged at the small rescue party The others got ready for a fight while izuku put on his hood and smiled

He called out : slushy now!

From the back of the rescue party, a whirlwind of ice and snow came barrelling down on the attackers. Freezing them instantly, even Brightburn was frozen in place.

The one responsible for the sudden blizzard, ice skated to the front, where he received a pat on the head by izuku

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Stitch: good work, cousin should buy us time

The experiment was part of himself back to that pride quickly fade away when the sound of cracking started. It appeared that being frozen did stop them, but only for a short time they were already breaking free, and everyone could see that in bright Burns cocoon of ice, his eyes were already glowing red

Loona: yeah, about 30 fucking seconds

izuku: we don't have time to waste ace, get the hostages out of the ice now!

The alien experiment hero did exactly what he was told and smashed the hostages out of the ice carefully not to smash them in the process

Blitzo complaining as usual: Satan's ass! That was called annually for my Dick froze off

Moxie shivering: you... You couldn't have figured out a... Better way of getting us...out of here

the hell hound growled: stop complaining your easy manage ass

Octavia immediately ran to her father and apologised repeatedly: that I'm so sorry this is all my fault if I had just

Solas: no my dear fear it's my fault I remembered now I promise that he could see the stars today and I forgot I am so so-

the father and daughter moment was actually interrupted by izuku: guys I love that you're having this wonderful father daughter moment but can we please focus on getting out of here before-

the sound of bursting ice caused everyone to fall silently as they turned to see Brian Byrne with his burning eyes of anger pointed straight at them, izuku pointed: before exactly that happens

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not a second later Bradburn unleashed his heat vision on the group but thanks to the efforts of slushy and izuku new invincible jacket he attacked was stopped but it didn't stop Bradburn from charging through what was left of the ice along with the rest of his gang.

The alien invader ground izuku and flew up into the air before throwing him into a neighbouring building: I'll deal with him you all kill the others, dad take the book back to sensei and don't screw up!

the boy flew off to attack his enemy once again while what was the corpse of his father retreated with the book as ordered his mother's corpse remained in charge of the remaining nomu that were not still trapped in the ice

Brian's mother: kill them that the order my son gave us!

a nomu the head features similar to a dog charged at the hell hound full force on all fours the other members of the IMP organisation try to find some weapons to defend themselves what they did not expect was loona and for a creature to pop out of her hair and shoots a fireball straight at the monstrosity killing it immediately

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loona smirked: you know I was kind of against you hiding in my here when izuku suggested it but now I'm beginning to think you have your uses

she then proceeded to pet the experiment on the head and it the equivalent of purring enjoying the praise it was receiving

Stich grabbed his blasters and revealed his extra arms: remember go for the head and destroy it and be careful for the black they can regenerate really quickly! Ace you should go help izuku he could use backup

ace nodded as he flew out of the hole that Bradburn made and followed in the direction where the boy went

He then proceeded hands on his blasters to the members of the IMP to defend themselves with meanwhile Solas and Octavia stayed out of Their Way, Solas could fight back but he was more concerned about the safety of his daughter and without his grimoire he was less powerful so we decided to let the professionals do their job

Millie food intake blaster instead pull the rusted piece of metal from the side of the wall: all right motherfuckers don't know what the hell you are or why the hell you're doing this what I do know is I could add a lot more kills to my account!

Millie then proceeded to charge at the first monster she saw a skinny one with white pale skin it had nowise just brain she tried stabbing it in the chest but it had no effect the creature just raised a battalion almost smashed her it wasn't for the efforts of her husband moxie

he shot at the monster in the head destroying private brain but not bringing it down: what the hell are these things! There are not Demons but they're not humans either!

Stich who jumped on top of the leader nomu and try to rip its brain out but it had no success the creature jumped and threw him off of her then proceeded to build a acid in her thighs and spray them at the experiment slushy is created cover stitch allowing him to escape the attack meanwhile loona and slowly head one having as much luck either the sneak attack and managed to kill one of the nomu but like with most league attacks it only works once they were now being bombarded with attacks of the nomu

loona got surrounded and a nomu with clause coming out of it hands (like Wolverine ) stabbed her in the leg, not dad saw this and was furious he came charging in the shooting at the creature responsible for hurting his hell hound daughter

however the blasts were doing anything it was a black one so it was regenerating almost instantly slowly head joined in on the attack but it still wasn't enough the creature raised risk already to finish off the hell hound Blitz couldn't stand it anymore and he pushed his daughter away at the last second but it didn't have time to save himself he was then stabbed through the chest

loona: blitzo!!

The clause were removed from the imp and he remained there silent and slowly bleeding out loona was now furious it was true that her and her not dad never really saw eye to eye but she in her own way loved him and now someone hurt him and she was furious ignoring the pain in her leg she stood up and raced towards the corpse responsible for hurting blitzo she jumped up and wrapped her legs around the creature's neck and then twisted it so hard that it had popped clean off she then grabbed hold of the head using her legs and slammed it into the ground crushing every thing into the pavement

all the other nomu stopped what they were doing and looked at her for a second it was clear that they were winning the fight yet there was still surprised to see someone being able to kill one of their own with such extraordinary strength and skill

they were about to attack her all at once but then a mysterious voice gave the new orders: stop!

The monsters and the Demons and imps looked up to see who had given the order it wasn't who everyone was expecting it wasn't Bradburn it was not all for one it was a shadow or rather a silhouette of one with crimson blue eyes, he didn't look that much taller than izuku erected in look as old as him either the figure was also wearing a nice tailored sky blue suit with a black tie other than that there wasn't really much to describe about them they had no other features it was like their entire body was shrouded in a shadow

(if you're having trouble picturing it just imagine kurogiri just without the foggy effect his more like a shadow he still got the body type of up person like he's still made of fog but the fog is mainly selected to work silhouette of a person like a shadow)

the shadow looked at the carnage it was true that the majority of casualties were on their side however the rescue party and the hostages looked beaten up they could easily finish them off especially with his help at least that's what he thought but that wasn't the orders he was given: we are retreating we have what we want whereas is the master's disciple?

All of the walking corpses pointed in the direction where he flew away: excellent now everyone retreat

the shadow snapped his fingers and massive portals began appearing around the creatures they followed their orders and retreated into the portals

Stich pointed his blaster at the shadow and took a shot but to his surprise it had no effect on him in fact he absorbed the blast and ensure back at him through his eyes with lasers: I advise that you do not do that again my orders were to bring back my master's disciple and the nomu but if I am attacked again I will defend myself properly

experiment 626 growled: Coward

the shadow shook his head: will you consider the positives I'm letting you live don't ask me why because I don't really know I could kill you right now but I'm choosing not to let you mourn your dead tell your leader that the next time we meet I will not be so merciful actually are telling myself if you'll excuse me

a portal opened up behind the shadow and he walked backwards into it disappearing from sight everyone was left confused they just win or with a let go either way they were happy to be alive well... Not all of them

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Back when izuku was first separated from his team

izuku point of view

So as a crash into another building, I come to realise just how useful my new invulnerable jacket not only did it shield me from getting roasted by his heat vision, and also exhaust the shock from his punches, and from the following to the building

I need to thank Dr strange for recommending her ginger costume without it I would definitely dead by now. Judging by the level of power in that punch I would say that Bright burn is as strong if not stronger than homelander but his heat vision isn't as strong I don't think plus I think you always got his flight superstrength invulnerability and the heat vision I don't think he's figured out about what he can do with his voice even if he can do in the first place that could give me the advantage

suddenly bright burn bursting through the ceiling and landed across from me just staring at me as I got up on my feet: you're one of the first people actually been able to get up after one of my punches other than those Demons

not sure what a compliment from a homicidal 10-year-old take it although I need to act tough because that really did hurt a lot: well I aim to please... So why are you doing this bright burn what did he promise you

bright burn: sensei... Well since you're going to die might as well tell you he saved me well more like he showed me that he cared

oh so it's gonna be like okay: so you think he cares about you hate to break it to you but I don't think the guy cares about anything you know he killed his own brother right will make you think you won't drop you the second you're not useful anymore

bright burn: well I guess I just won't stop being useful... Sensei told me about you and how you got your powers to how it rightfully belongs to him and you stole it

okay so he knows my secret honestly at this point it's not really much of a big deal anymore and others will just tell the others I don't even know why I haven't maybe it is one I still feel like I'm special when I'm not just an ordinary guy I was the best out of a bad situation and I was chosen for is nothing special about me

I rubbed the back of my head: I don't deny that your master or sensei created the powers that give me the ability to save people but you also don't know that his brother took part in creating this wonderful power... Don't you think it was his right to choose to

bright burn: no I don't his brother was weak, he could have been strongly denied it that all you humans are just weak you try to be strong we are nowhere near as powerful as me or sensei we have God's up to you and you are nothing but ants

I don't deny that and judging by the way he's talking he's got superiority complex and he doesn't quite view himself as human if he is human to begin with but he is right in the face of such terrifying power I might as well be a powerless child but there is one thing he has wrong: you're right about all that arming and do you probably but here's the thing about's ants, they pretty strong and there's a lot of them

bright burn I could see that he rolled his eyes under his mask: what ever, and this can be the crap out of you and then drag your broken body to sensei and he'll get back what you and the rest of those idiots inside your head stole from him

I can hear Ace coming in fast my plan worked: yeah I can see that but hear me out counterpoint...

Ace comes barrelling into another wall I'm amazed the building that was still holding up and smashes bright burn into another building thankfully this whole district is abandoned as a winner of the worry about collateral damage I can hear the two of them do get out and see bright boys heat vision coming out of the building I activate 10% of one for all in my legs and I leapt after them

Nana appears beside me as I tried to catch up to the two: you need to be careful is much stronger than you like homelander is and  I don't think attacking his pressure points are going to work so do you have an actual plan

I shrug: yeah don't die

I say that just before Ace gets thrown straight back at me knocking me to the floor he's beaten and bruised and I think he's bleeding internally but he's alive for now I use my powers to teleport him away to safety just before bright burn comes up charging once again

I call out to my jacket: jacket rip-off Dr strange!

The jacket comes off of my body and wraps itself around the kid causing them to stop and try to rip it off using his heat vision and brute strength is not working and I'm thankful that my jacket is somewhat indestructible but I don't Wanna test it I need a plan but what without my jacket will shatter my bones and instant and is more spontaneous than homelander I can predict his movements and I can't fight him head own.... or can I

I think the fifth user could tell what I was thinking as he appeared beside me: did I know what you're thinking say it's stupid reckless and quite honestly something I wish I came up with when the quirk was mine go for it

good got permission and if the fifth user thinks is a good idea then I know it's gonna be good I call out black whip all around my body but instead of wrapping around my target I ask it to rapid self around me it covers nearly my entire body in this energy I call back my jacket and I reveal my new attack form to bright burn

he just smugly looks and it: what you call this energy armour?

Energy armour... Not a bad name actually yeah from now on this technique will be called energy armour

(If you're having trouble imagining that just picture black whip wrapped around izuku body like armour)

bright burn: whatever it's not gonna work crush you like an insect!

He comes in and lift his arm up ready for a punch I use my arm to block it hoping that it doesn't shatter my bones... And to my surprise it doesn't I mean totally wrong the shot back was intense but I can still move my arms energy armour is working but it's really hard to keep black whip concentrated all around my body like this I'd serve only got a minute left have to stop which means got in this quick

I smile as I grab bright burns hand and flipped him over my body crushing him into the ground with 30% he actually let out a small gasp of pain: what was that you said about crushing me like an insect! Now the real fight can begin

narrator's point of view (yeah sorry I know I don't usually go for three point a perspective especially the same one as the first but I just felt like it was needed)

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bright burn flow upward and then came diving back down into izuku putting him through several other abandoned buildings wait for real... seriously how many abandoned buildings in LA?

izuku went through the walls with relatively no injuries though he was starting to bleed even though his arm was protecting him from most of the impact it still can stop all of it he then grabbed the alien invaders arms and swung under him and unleashed a 30% punch right into a stomach

Brendan gasped for air the first time ever drug his it actually felt like he was being punched however little in return of this realisation he gave izuku another punch to the face started to bleed from the nose is armour again protected him from his face being smashed in but couldn't deflect all the power it seemed as if bright burn was holding back the first time and now he was going all out or at least as much as he could

izuku used a screen to get a moment of safety for coming back in and charging straight at the alien with his foot raised high ready to deliver a roundhouse kick he proceeded with the attack but bright burn courted and tried twisting his leg in response to this izuku flipped his fingers sending a shockwave at the young man forcing him back just a bit

bright burn removed his mask to catch his breath he'd never felt exhaustion like this before and that's when he felt it the small bit of blood coming up from his nose he looked at the blood and looked at his target it was clear that he was in more damage state that him yet somehow seeing this one bit of blood infuriated him he was supposed to be perfect supposed to be invincible and yet this young man was teaching him that he wasn't and that made him angry

Brendan screamed as he charged at the hero, izuku held his ground and the two were in court in an epic brawl destroying the ground and nearby buildings Brian was still holding back a fair bit it didn't want to think that someone like izuku could actually make him go all out but he was definitely putting in more effort than he did when he killed the people from his world that irritated him

izuku was on the verge of a collapse every punch that bright burn delivered was a lot stronger than the last and his armour was keeping his bones intact but it definitely wasn't stopping the shockwave damaging some of his organs if I like it was gonna throw up but it held in and just Delivering 30% smashes into his enemy

the two of them delivered punches on both and neither of them had any rhythm or strategy they were just duking it out with nothing but pure instinct for long both of them delivered a punch that got caught on the others fist and forced them back

Brendan was catching his breath he'd never been in a fight like this before he thought he could kill izuku easily but this fight proved to him that he was wrong of course he wouldn't think that if he knew what is his opponent was thinking right now izuku felt as if his legs were going to shatter at any moment and he was bleeding internally and externally he knew that he didn't stand a chance against bright burn but that still didn't stop them from trying even though he knew that he was most likely going to die he wasn't going to run away in your would have been pointless anyway all it would have done was cost the lives of innocent people and he wasn't about to let that happen

the two roared at each other as they raced towards one another once again but something appear between them causing them both. Shadow figure appeared in the middle of the battlefield he turned to izuku who got a strange sense of déjà vu when he looked at the shadowy figure he didn't recognise him not in the slightest but for some reason izuku felt as if he knew him  

the shadow then turned his attention to bright burn he then took a bow: hello master Brendan I am well... I don't have a name yet master insisted that you were the one to give it to me I have been told to come and collect you

Brendan looked at the shadowy figure suspiciously:  who are you who sent you was it sensei?

The shadowy figure still kept his head down as he looked up at the alien: yes he has received the grimoire and would like you to return immediately he sent me to collect you and the nomu as well unfortunately some were already dead when I arrived Master is insistent that you return now

bright burn: what no and so close to beating this guy can you see it on his last legs I can tell

the shadow: I understand, but unfortunately I'm just following out my orders from the master himself he does not want to have any more casualties today he told me to tell you "you've achieved your mission today do not get greedy Brendan you'll get another chance" now, we must not dillydallying his reinforcement should be arriving soon

Brendan did not know what was going on but if it was a direct call from his teacher he felt inclined to listen even though he hated listen to adults his sensei was the exception so he nodded allowing the shadowy figure to open a portal up behind him when she stepped through the shadowy figure was about to join in but then took one last look at the hero

izuku had no idea what was going on it was clear that this shadow was a new ally of all for one or why would he want Brendan back now he was about to win probably could see that yet it was willing to let him live didn't seem right... There was also the matter of why he seemed so familiar to izuku the couldn't quite place it felt like he'd known him for ages yet he couldn't remember where he saw him from

the shadowy figure shrugged and gave a wave as he will step through his own portal and once izuku was sure that they were gone he collapsed on the floor the only thing he heard was the sound of breaches portal opening up close by

a few hours later

izuku woke up  in what appeared to be the base of the pack but with some new faces the members of the IMP and Octavia and her father

one person he could not see was loona and Blitzo he asked where they were and that's when he received sad looks from everyone unfortunately blitzo did not survive his injuries and loona had gone into the barracks of the base and had not come out since

izuku feeling responsible for the loss of her not dad decided to try and talk to her he steps into the role and was immediately attacked by a chair that was thrown at him by the angry girl

izuku: a simple get out would have sufficed

loona: whatever just leave me alone

izuku took a breath and sat down closer to her: loona I know what happened and I am well and truly sorry if there's anything I can do to help then let me know

loona expression softened for a moment as she started to sniff and let out a wee she was crying: I just Wanna forget just for a moment that he's gone and that the last thing we did together was fight he was such an idiot why did he push me out of the way and not his real daughter I was 17 when he adopted me I was almost 18 so why did he care so damn much!

izuku: maybe because in his eyes you were his daughter... Listen I don't know blitz at all but I know that he cared about you, look I know he probably pissed you off more times than you could count but the truth is I think he was just trying to be a good dad like you said he's trying that was worth more than you thought

loona let out a sad chuckle: I know that and it did piss me off but some days it actually made me happy I never doubted that he loved me I just don't know if he knew how much I loved him (as a father daughter thing let's not overreact people)

izuku: I'm sure he did loona I'm sure he did

loona smiled for a moment happy to hear that but then something crossed her mind she really did want to forget just for a moment but she could only think of one way to forget something like this so she pounced on the young man and started to take off his clothes and rip off her own

izuku kinda figured out what was happening but wanted to make sure one thing: are you sure about this loona?

The hell hound nodded: yeah I just Wanna forget just for a moment no strings right

the hero in training looked at her and nodded: yeah, no strings

And the second the two horny Young adults go into the room they instantly started making out hard-core style as they undressed each other and left their clothes on the floor. Once they were fully naked izuku pushed Loona down onto the bed but he didn't let go of her lips

Loona Was getting busy with Izuku I lower half she was stroking his cock which caused some moans to escape his lips and into her mouth

Izuku plled away from The hell hound: do you have condoms right?

Loona smile: yeah don't worry I snuck them into the bedside cabinet which is on the floor wait how are you holding me up like this?

Upon this new realisation Izuku and Loona fell a few feet to the floor luckily for Loona she landed on top of Izuku which broke the small fall. Unlucky for Izuku he was a cushion for Loona but on the plus side her breasts pressed up against his chest which turned him instantly back on.

The lovers didn't let this down for the mode instead they just grab the condoms placed it on Izuku's dick and Loona began to lowered herself

Izuku was still trying to wrap his head around if this was really happening: Loona is this really happening?

Loona smirked happier than she's ever been before: yep you're about to lose the V card

Izuku Felt inclined to tell her: actually, I'm not a virgin... I lost my virginity last month

The hell hound stopped and process this for a moment, she shrugged: well you're about to have sex for the second time in your life I'll take it as an achievement

Those final words spoken, Loona lower self onto I think she's been dreaming of for who knows how long. Her pussy welcome to the dick it wrapped around tightly in a hug but also had blood exiting from the hole

Loona was in a confusing state of both pain and pleasure, but that didn't stop her from moving her hips up and down to give izuku The best experience of his life

Izuku moaning as he grabbed The hell hound ips and helped her move along, this was by far the greatest thing he'd ever felt in his life his cock was being tightly hug by a girls pussy by the feel of the tightness she did not wanna let go

The pain that grin was feeling was telling her to stop at the pleasure was telling her to continue she couldn't help herself she let go into the pleasure and it felt she felt amazing it was like her entire body was on fire but in a good way

Eventually The buildup of pressure got to Izuku and he unleashed his sperm into the condom after if you press the two of them continued in a different position

After another few hours of epic lovemaking, that you finally stopped, and took a breath

Izuku turned over to look at the hell hound : you feeling better?

Loona trying to catch a breath: A little... But it's still in my mind, but I guess I just have to deal with it And what would make me feel even better is if I get the chance to beat the crap out of whoever made that monster

Izuku: Well, if you're looking for that, Peck might be able to help you with that What do you say don't wanna be alone wolf anymore?

Loona Laughed: That was such a shitty wordplay... But yeah I'm in still can't believe it now other universities and right now there is someone is trying to conquer or destroy them. It's a good thing he didn't actually get the book right

The hero in training: Yeah, still, can't believe Brightburn fell for that, i'm surprised he didn't check beforehand if he did, he would've noticed that I swapped out the front covers for the book and the Driving instructions. He's probably having a hissy fit right about now still, I don't think we should classify this as a victory he was crazy strong, and if it wasn't for that shadow guy, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be standing here right now I got lucky next time I need to be more 

loona: yeah, I can just picture of the little fucker having a tantrum

Meanwhile, in Brightburn is reality

The world had been conquered completely, because of the efforts of all for one and Brightburn, and the walking corpses, The countries of the world surrendered to them immediately, and now the world was a bleak and desolate place where there was no hope for safety people were forced to build the Demon Kings Castle on the remnants of a town named Brightburn

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If anyone refused or tried to resist, they were either killed in the most brutal fashions, or turned into the walking corpses that held the populist captive you would think, after achieving all of this branding would actually be happy with himself, but right now he was frustrated

Brightburn using his heat vision to express his anger as he sliced through some nearby people who just got caught up in his tantrum: that little green shit! He tricked me this isn't what is sensei wanted?

Shadow: I see, and that is why you are so upset that you got your sensei already knows your tricks. He has no anger towards you as a matter of fact he has a present for you.

The alien looked confused as he really getting a present for failure: Wait, what why would you be giving me a prize I failed

All for one emerged from the shadows: Brandon, you did not fail you just weren't prepared for Deku strategy he knew that you were getting the book, whether he lived or died. You had no way of knowing, and that is why I'm giving you a gift to help never make that same mistake twice.

Brightburn was still confused, but he wasn't going to turn down a free gift: what is it sensei?

All for one smiled it down at the boy as he turned his attention to the shadow: This is your gift... Your new best friend he will be your protector your getaway and will cover all bases. When you lack for now I will do whatever You tell him to, he is completely loyal to you and me you just need to give him a proper name

Brightburn looked at the person who was remaining neutral in all this: why didn't you make him sensei?

All for one: I did think about it, but unfortunately the only name I could come up with was kurogiri 2.0 but that wasn't very creative, and now that he is yours, I think it's only right that you name him he has a copy of my ability to travel through the Multiverse and create portals as you've seen before, but also he can exorbitant edgy and shoot them out of his eyes like your heat vision. I thought the two of you would become good "friends" so what do you want to call him?

The boy thought about the moment it was like he was naming a puppy, a very dangerous puppy and he liked that he thought about it for a moment, and then came up with the perfect name: how about shadow Burn? I am bright and he's a shadow and we'll both burn the world

Another figure emerged from the shadows his voice sounded like a radio: an excellent suggestion, my young friend

In response to this, Brightburn lit up his eyes, and shot and energy beam in response to this, the shadowy figure opened up a portal, where multiple tentacles paired out the energy was absorbed by the tentacles

All for one placed his hand on his new students shoulder: easy there Brandon, he is one of our new teammates. May I introduce you to Alistair, also known as the radio Demon

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Alistair placed his hand out to shake with the alien boy, who just looked at him, confused, not at all, intimidated by his obviously evil smile: A pleasure to meet you young man

All for one: and another meeting late one with a lot of connections in this realm of hell andrealphus

andrealphus: I must say this castle seems to be coming along quite well... Hello there, my new acquaintances, I must say when you came to me with this offer, Alistair and I thought you really had lost your mind And I never would've considered it without this level of evidence

The Radio Demon kept showing his creepy smile: I must agree with you, they're my Friend, truthfully, I didn't believe it when This mortal found me in hell and told me about this grand plan He had, and I thought he generally had gone mad, and then he showed me these magnificent creatures he callsnomu and how can I refuse after that this will be very entertaining

andrealphus: yes, yes, and quite profitable to the amount of power that I will get from joining up with you all will allow me to even rival Lucifer himself

All for one: now, now gentlemen, let us not get ahead of ourselves. We have just started on our Grand plan we have enough even chosen, a name for our little group... How about since our enemies call themselves the pack we call ourselves.... the swarm (I know it's lazy, but it just kind of works)

They all nodded in agreement, and ask again, the beginning of the Multiverse's greatest threat the swarm

Okay, wow that was a lot and believe it or not. There was supposed to be more but I had to cut a lot of it out... Anyway, I hope you've enjoyed please leave a comment and a vote and I mean it this time please leave a vote because I worked really hard on this one.