DB#007 Zhu Xiaoli (CharlesSmith9) vs. Maximus "Max" Tempest (TheYoungDragon)


by StevenBro6


"How can my grandaughter be this stupid!" yelled Xiaoli's grandfather. He brought up his cane and smacked her in the back of the head. "Your posture is sloppy, your strikes are too forceful and your concentration lacking. Are you trying to aggravate me!"

"Of course not grandfather," Xiaoli replied as she rubbed her head which stung like hell. "This technique is just too difficult."

"Difficult. DIFFICULT!" Xiaoli's grandfather repeated. "This is a very—-"

"DIE YOU BLOOD SUCKER!" screamed Max. His odd looking motorcycle flying through the air with a person on the front. Laser cannons came out of the motorcycle and fired a high power laser blast, turning the person on the front into ash instantly. "Gotcha!"

Max had a look of joy and accomplishment on his face but looked down to see that his motorcycle was quickly losing altitude and was heading straight towards Xiaoli's grandfather. "SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT." He swore while jerking the handlebars in every direction he could.

"Grandfather get out of the way!" Xiaoli said as she tried to grab her grandfather out of the way.

"Nonsense!" Xiaoli's grandfather commanded as he smacked Xiaoli out of the way. "I will make sure that this white man will regret ever coming here!" He began to channel his internal energy into his fist as the motorcycle got closer and closer and prepared to punch out of the sky.

"Shit shit shit!" Max repeated. He jumped off the bike just as it collided with Xiaoli grandfather punch causing a massive explosion. Max retreated behind a rock while Xiaoli jumped high jumped to a cliff edge. "I am so fucked when the agency finds out I did this." contemplated Max as he looked at the explosion crater.

Dust began to settle from the explosion. The motorbike was completely ruined with its front half completely crushed but the figure of the grandfather still stood but he was severely injured. "Granddaughter," he croaked out.

"Yes grandfather?' Xiaoli asked with great concern in her voice as she jumped down towards him.

"I am going to die from this insolent white savage so take revenge for me and make him die a slow and painful death." ordered the grandfather before he collapsed and died from his injury. A few tears began to form in Xiaoli's eyes.

"I'm sorry okay? I had no id-" Max was cut off when Xiaoli charged at him with sword in hand. Taking out his own sword, Max just managed to block the incredibly powerful attack. Wind and leaves blew behind him.

Then came even more attacks, slashes, stabs and cuts all came out of Xiaoli, all reinforced with internal energy. Max either dodged or blocked the attacks but was given absoluting no opening for a counterattack. It frustrated Max that he was forced on the defensive and with a cry of anger, her pushed back Xiaoli's blade.

"Listen here. I don't wanna fight another person and if I don't get back to my school group I am going to be royally screwed."

Xiaoli complete ignored Max (since she can't speak english) and brought her sword down to cut off Max's head. Using his superior speed, Max ducked under the blade and went on his own offensive bringing down SteelFrost.

Xiaoli backflipped out of the way and jumped onto a nearby tree. She channeled her internal energy to make her light as a feather and she balanced on a leaf.

"Looks like I'm fighting a chinese kung fu master," commented Max before Xiaoli jumped down and brought down her blade for a renewed offensive. "This is going to be awesome!" cheered Max. He jumped up with his own sword ready to attack.

Blades clashed and the noise echoed through the mountains with sparks flying everywhere. They continued trading aggressive blows in mid air, neither gaining an advantage until they landed on the ground. Meters of earth separated them, their eyes locked with each others as they analyse what their next move is.

Being as impulsive as he is, Max moved first, sweeping his enchanted sword to cut Xiaoli at blinding speed. Xiaoli was caught almost completely off guard and was forced to block with her own sword. More lightning fast attacks came from Max with his sword being little more than a metallic blurr.

With every blow, she was pushed further and further towards the cliff walls. "End of the line kung fu master!" Max yelled as he stuck down with a massive overhand strike that cut through the rock, but Xiaoli wasn't there. "What the?" Max asked to himself as he scratched his head and looked around. Xiaoli was completely out of Max's sight until he looked up.

Xiaoli was running straight up the cliff with sword in hand. "What in the world?" Max said under his breath. Then Xiaoli stopped and went down.

Max reached into his belt and brought out his Arctic Eagle and pointed straight at Xiaoli. He fired a shot that reverberated throughout the landscape. The round hit Xiaoli's sword and shattered it. Realizing the threat of gunfire, Xiaoli infused what internal energy she could into her hands and observed Max for his next shot.

More rounds came out of the Arctic eagle. Xiaoli brought her hand to deflect one of the shots but the bullet hit like a truck and shot her hand backwards with extreme force. More high magnum rounds came and the same thing happened, Xiaoli was unable to deflect all the bullets and one of them hit her straight in the stomach, making her cough out blood.

But the injury didn't faze her, She brought down her palm using Snowing Mist penetrating Palm which connect with Max's ribs. Two audible cracks were heard and Max was pushed back hard, slamming into a tree and broke it in half. Xiaoli charged forward to finish Max.

She ran to the destroyed tree and wound up another powerful palm strike. Then a sword came up, impaling Xiaoli with its razor sharp edges. "I Win!" Max yelled, putting his Arctic eagle to Xiaoli's forehead and shot her at point black though her head.

Brain matter and the back portion of the head was blown off and Xiaoli collapsed onto the ground, lifeless.


K.O. Winner Maximus "Max" Tempest!


Analysis: Well that fun to write! Xiaoli takes the advantage in skill and technique which is far above Max's. Combined with her internal energy, she was able to perform many superhuman feats. But, Max is physically superior. He hails from a long line of champions whose physical abilities is superhuman and speed is unmatched. Xiaoli can also perform superhuman acts but Max is superhuman all the time while Xiaoli must consciously channel her internal energy to perform such acts. Max's speed is also a key deciding factor and is what Xiaoli struggled with as she only managed to stand against it with her keen eye predicting attacks. Secondly, never bring a sword to a gunfight. Max wields an Arctic Eagle which is a badass version of the desert eagle and by badass I'm pretty sure it means that it's better in every way. Desert eagles were originally made to be an anti-light vehicle pistol and chambers a 50 caliber round. Xiaoli can deflect bullets but a 50 caliber round is insanely powerful and an Arctic Eagle is probably more powerful. Finally, Max is a vampire slayer and if you now anything about vampires is that their nearly impossible to kill. Combined with a gun and superior physical ability, Max out fought Xiaoli superior skill.


Credits:

StevenBro6 for guest writing

CharlesSmith9 for Zhu Xiaoli

TheYoungDragon for Maximus "Max" Tempest


Bio 1

Name: Zhu Xiaoli

Age: Early 20s

Gender: Female

Species: Human

Appearance: A small Chinese woman with long black hair and lean but powerful muscles, like a hunting cat. She dresses in archaic robes and carries a dao (sabre).

Personality: Xiaoli is a simple person. She doesn't understand a lot of the complex moral ambiguities that drive most people's behavior, and this is sort of the source of her heroism. If a friend of hers is in danger she would charge in to save them without any thought to the circumstances or her chances of success. She's naturally non-violent and just wants everyone to get along, but won't hesitate to resort to violence if someone violates her somewhat simplistic sense of right and wrong.

She's not a particularly good student of kung fu, but if it takes her five times as long to learn a move as anyone else, she practices it for ten times as long.

History: Xiaoli was abandoned in the wilderness to die of exposure shortly after she was born, because her parents wanted a son. She was discovered by chance by a disciple from an all-female kung fu sect from a nearby mountain, which ended up adopting and raising her. She spent her childhood studying the two Emei styles of kung fu: Descending Flower Swordsmanship and Snowing Mist Penetrating Palm, being sword and fist styles respectively.

When Xiaoli was 18, and already the #2 disciple on Mt. Emei, a man claiming to be her grandfather arrived insisting her had an errand for her. He fought with a large number of Emei disciples over the matter until Xiaoli agreed to go with him to avoid further violence. Her grandfather spent years teaching Xiaoli Zhu Family Sabre, a secret fighting style passed down only to family members.

Arsenal: A dao (sabre), using Zhu Family Sabre A jian (sword), using Descending Flower Swordsmanship Her palms, using Snowing Mist Penetrating Palm

Armor: Xiaoli wears no armor, but she is incredibly fast and difficult to hit. In addition, she has a high level of internal energy that allows her to do things like parry swords or even bullets with her hands. While she can't actually move fast enough to dodge or parry bullets, she can predict where an opponent will shoot by watching subtle hand and eye movements, and begin dodging or parrying before the shot is even fired. If she does get hit with an attack she in not prepared for (such as one she fails to dodge) she is no stronger than a normal human.

Abilities: Qinggong: Xiaoli can control her body density and make herself lighter. This allows her to move as quickly, jump as high, and balance on as delicate a surface as though she weighed as much as a feather. She is good enough at this to run on water (although she can't stand still on it) and she can run up walls.

Niejing: Xiaoli has cultivated a great deal of internal energy, giving her superhuman control over her own body. She can harden her hands enough to parry blades, bullets or even energy attacks (although anything that could theoretically hurt thick steel would still burn her hands if she parried it), she can (by circulating her qi) ignore any non-fatal wound by holding her body together with her qi. This will, however, exacerbate the wound and uses up a lot of energy so she can't keep it up for very long.

Fighting Style: Xiaoli's primary style is Zhu Family Sabre. It is an aggressive style of swordplay that involves the use of a lot of internal energy and keeping up pressure on the opponent. The attacks are powerful enough to affect people at a range and in extreme circumstances the force of the attack will physically glow.

If deprived of a weapon she can switch to Snowing Mist Penetrating Palm. It is a fast paced style that is based around three attack combinations. It's more balanced than Zhu Family Sabre, with a decent emphasis on defense.


Bio 2

Name: Maximus "Max" Tempest, teenage Vampire Hunter

Age:16

Gender: Male

Species: Homo sapiens sapiens (oh yeah, humanity for the win) (also part of a long line of Champions - men who have superior agility and strength)

Appearance:Medium height. Muscular lithe build. Sapphire blue eyes. The darkest hair on Earth.

Personality: Think Percy Jackson. Shy but talkative, thoughtful, certainly comedic. But doesn't have a moral issue about killing. Especially on vampires. Oh, and he is very deadly. He is also an excellent battle strategist, capable of adapting to scenarios where he fights against stronger and more powerful opponents. High IQ, too.

History: Doesn't know his parents/family. Trained as vampire hunter since he was a kid.

Arsenal: His trusty sword Steelfrost, an enchanted blade that doesn't rust and is sharp as hell. A standard issue Arctic Eaglet (think a badass Desert Eagle) and a motorbike that floats from the ground, equipped with laser cannons.

Armor: No armor, just an all-black costume (think the Undertaker style cloak). Also has an inclination to dark robes.

Abilities: Talkativeness, as befit a teenager. Superior reflexes/agility (on par with even the fastest of vampries) and above par endurance (capable of withstanding attacks that could destroy tree trunks). He has supreme intelligence, calculating, and extremely effective at killing. He also has strength above normal men, due to his being a Champion.

Fighting Style: Excellent swordsman. Usually destroys vampires within three moves. Employs fast, offensive attacks that are quicker than the eye could catch. However, his defense is a bit weak, preferring to go by "offense is the best defense" (partly since he is an impulsive, high school kid). Also a master hand-to-hand combatant, fighting against stronger and more powerful opponents since he was a kid.

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