Title: Dolls

Author: glossyseokjin

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Summary:

The summary is an absolute perfection! Short and simple, and definitely catches the eyes of a potential readers!

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Cover:

The cover is pretty and does potrayed the theme of the book, dolls, but I am not quite sure of the pink colour, because it doesn't suit much for a yandere book.

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Plots:

Review #1:

I must say, this is rather different from the other books I have reviewed. Totally unexpected plots. This book is totally a work of art. The words are beautifully written, the descriptions and emotions on each characters are well expressed. The speed of the plots are great, not too rush, and not too slow. The plots thickens in chapter "huit", to be honest, I did not expected it to happen. To be honest, I have no words to describe the book, I am ANTICIPATING for the next update!

Review #2:

The cover may not be of the member but the picture being used relates to the story. It may be simple but it's attractive enough to catch the attention of the reader. The theme is definitely my type of story and your beautiful work of art has just made me fall in love with the theme even more. The emotions are so wonderfully described and I could really sympathise with the girls. My heart hurts from reading the story as I could feel the pain the character went through. The plot is really intriguing and it had kept me on my toes. It had a really smooth flow and I wanted more after each chapter.

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Others:

There's a minor mistake I encountered. I would suggest to give space in between two POVs in a chapter. There's two POVs in chapter six, which I had to read twice, slightly confused of the POVs. As I went further, the author did differentiate the two POVs, by highlighting the name, but I would still prefer a few gaps or spaces between them.

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End note:

Overall, it is absolutely a great book! Thank you for requesting, any questions, feel free to DM me or @KabyHsu personally. Have a great day!