Title: Beauty & The Beast || JHS/JHope BTS
Author: user89406074

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Summary:

The summary was a bit too short for my liking. I wish the summary was little much longer as it helps you to attract readers. Try to make something that is a hook to your readers.

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Cover:

The cover clearly shows Beauty and The Beast, as taken from Disney's Beauty and the Beast. Also, there is Hoseok and Jenny on the cover. Preferably, I would love it if, the cover was solely on Hoseok and Jenny. Give it darker dark, loud colour to portray that Hoseok is the beast but was being tone down by the picture of Jenny.

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Plots:

Review #1:

First of all, I think it is great to start off a book with poems. It gives this feeling of knowing to know more of how it's going to be in a story. I personally have this feeling of wanting to dig for more out of the poem. On the poem, I would suggest add in a few spacing in order to differentiate the two paragraphing, as this give more impact on the poem, especially towards the reader. 

Before we move into the whole plot or story, I would like to say a bit on the character page. For me, it is unnecessary to elaborate of the casts, as this would be a spoiler on the plots, which I believe it would be a major spoiler in it. It is okay to publish the character once the story ends.

Moving onto the plots, I won't say much on the story progress, as it does shows the emotions felt by the female lead. I just want to point out on the paragraphs. It is wise to only italicise the dialogues-- may it be conscious or subconscious , not the whole paragraph, just to differentiate them. 

Review #2:

Since this is critique, I'll have to be strict. Do remember that these are all just our opinions and that you are a great writer.

Firstly, the cover is fine but it would've been better if you add in the author's name.

Secondly, the blurb would've been better if you had written more. I know you did have a disclaimer but it would've been better if you had at some point, either in the summary or on the disclaimer page, written that the story will be in (character)'s pov. This way, the readers can actually imagine and relate to character better.

Thirdly, I'm not really a big fan of leaving so many spaces. It would've been better if you minimise the spaces and keep the chapters short. Scrolling is not really fun when reading in wattpad.

Fourth, as for the plot, I can sense the emotions of the main character. The love towards the male lead and hatred towards own sister. I would say you have done a good job in showcasing the emotion of the character. However, I'm a bit concerned about the writing technique. I know that english is not your first language but it would look better if you try and edit it.

Overall, I would say you do need to do some editing because you have a solid plot. Do remember that this is only our opinions and has nothing to do with your skills. After all, all authors are best in their own ways. All the best!

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End note:

Overall, I would say you do need to do some editing because you have a solid plot. Do remember that this is only our opinions and has nothing to do with your skills. After all, all authors are best in their own ways. All the best! 

Lastly, we would like to apologise for the delay in giving out the reviews, especially me, @PrinceSeokgene.

Thank you for requesting, any questions, feel free to DM me or @KabyHsu personally. Have a great day!