Review #10: 65 Days Left
Title: 65 Days Left || P.JM
Author: @rKingswood
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Summary:
Summary is short and simple but enough to attract readers. I love it. It makes me want to read.
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Cover:
The cover is simple, and the main character, which is Jimin is in the cover. Honestly, on the first glance, it does not really attract readers. Though it is simple, I do love it, because it somehow suited the story. It gives out this warm feeling in it, after reading it.
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Plots:
Review #1:
First chapter was a HOOK! I just can't believe that the story was completed with two days. The story was executed well.
I must say I am a bit confused with the text alignments. I got confused with the left and right alignment. What does it actually represented on, in the story itself? Is it the time transitions? As I read further, I understand that it is a narration. If that is it, it is advisable to create a gap, between the centre alignment, with the left/right alignment, or maybe bold/ italicise the sentences.
Other than that, I have no more words to describe, how beautiful this book is. I must admit, my heart moved towards the ending of the story. I cried at the ending, to be honest. A few words on this story: SHORT BUT PACKED WITH EMOTIONS!
Review #2:
I've always been a fan of short stories so I do get pretty strict when reviewing such stories and I have to say you exceeded my expectations. All chapters were short and sweet. They have exactly what they should to make the story ongoing and intriguing. The cover is simple and I wouldn't say it's very perfect or outstanding but it did fit with the plot. The blurb is strong enough to attract a reader so it makes it worth the read. I love every words that you have chosen and all the emotions that have been emphasised in the story. I seriously love the story. Keep up the good work!
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End note:
Overall, it is a great book, and it is worth recommending especially to those who are a fan of short stories. Thank you for requesting, any questions, feel free to DM me or @KabyHsu personally. Have a great day!
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