I was home just getting back from a festival with my family.I walked to my room and sleep.I smiled as I slept.

I woke up and got ready for the day.I walked out side.With a smile.I look at my wrist and sighed.I walked to a roof were my brother wanted to meet me.

I saw him and ran to hug him.I tripped over myself.I fall off of the roof.I cried. My long hair came undone from the pigtales I had Then in.I couldn't feel a thing.Then every thing went black.My body hit the ground!

I woke up in a white room.My two brothers were in the room with me.It looks like I'm in a hospital.I take a breath. "Hi"I say softly.My brothers looked at me crying and ran to me." I thought to dead "one of them said.I cried and sighed with a smile.

This chapter made me want to cry...is that good?I hope you like the story :)
JerredKing