Participants remember that our judges have different perspective in terms of judging. In every contest there's a winner and a loser. Accept the results wholeheartedly. If you have problem or question approach your judges calmly, message them privately and don't just give harsh comments, okay?

Judges - deepthinker1D and Actourine

1. ChocolateIceCreamTae - Sweet Night - 11:11 - 3RD PLACE
Title - 13 - 12
Book Cover - 10 - 10
Blurb/Description - 8 - 10
Characters - 21 - 20
Originality/Creativity - 8 - 7
Writing Style - 23 - 21
Total Score - 83% - 80%
OVERALL SCORE = 81.5%

FEEDBACK;
The story is nice even though I'm confused with the characters 'cause I don't know 'em well. The pacing also is fast for me but yeah, it's an interesting story. Like I said with your other entry, don't forget your commas and periods. Just keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
Hi, co-army!! The first one that really caught my interest to your story is your book cover. Super beautiful, I hope I'll be Leigh though. Emoji with modifying glass Keep writing, God bless!

2. MissBavarian - Farewell In Tears - 2ND PLACE
Title - 14 - 13
Book Cover - 10 - 10
Blurb/Description - 7 - 8
Characters - 20 - 23
Originality/Creativity - 7 - 8
Writing Style - 22 - 26
Total Score - 80% - 88%
OVERALL SCORE = 84%

FEEDBACK;
First of all, I want to commend you on how great your book cover is, it's gorgeous. Characterization is okay but not that satisfactory to me. Hindi ko alam pero nakukulangan talaga ako. Give them their own voices and styles for the readers to distinguish them easily. I also can't feel their emotions. Also, be more descriptive oon describing the scenes for it will make the settings alive. But overall, honestly, I like it. The story is clean and the flow is smooth so yeah, keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
Ang ganda nung flow nung story. May times lang na nalilito ako sa point of view ng characters pero yung batuhan ng linya ay talagang kakaiba. I hope you can improve more and you keep aiming for your passion! God bless po!

3. 95SLUSH - Conman In Luv - 1ST PLACE
Title - 13 - 13
Book Cover - 9 - 9
Blurb/Description - 7 - 7
Characters - 22 - 25
Originality/Creativity - 8 - 9
Writing Style - 26 - 30
Total Score - 85% - 93%
OVERALL SCORE = 89%

FEEDBACK;
Great! I love how you characterize your characters. Even though I'm not a fan of 'em, I didn't feel out of place. Also, the way you describe the scenes are amusing. Technicalities are minimal which makes me read more. Just keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
I LOVEEE IT!!!! The plot and the dialogue tags are really unique, I mean I am not really a fan of fanfiction genre but dang, this is amazing.

4. knjxksj_deibuck - Prom Night
Title - 11 - 12
Book Cover - 7 - 7
Blurb/Description - 5 - 8
Characters - 22 - 22
Originality/Creativity - 7 - 7
Writing Style - 24 - 25
Total Score - 76% - 81%
OVERALL SCORE = 78.5%

FEEDBACK;
Tho' I'm not into K-Pop artist, I still love how you characterize Jin. We do have the same perceptions, I'm straight but I hate homophobic people. The story is clean and the pacing is smooth. I'm just confused with some of the characters 'cause I really don't know 'em well but yeah, the story is good. Just keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
I am inlove with NamJin haha! Nice tags, I love your third pov style. God bless and keep writing!

5. King_Of_Paradoxes - It's been So Long - HONORABLE MENTION
Title - 13 - 11
Book Cover - 7 - 9
Blurb/Description - 8 - 8
Characters - 20 - 23
Originality/Creativity - 8 - 7
Writing Style - 24 - 24
Total Score - 80% - 82%
OVERALL SCORE = 81%

FEEDBACK;
I wonder why the title is different with the title on the book cover? I'm confused with the characters 'cause I'm not a fan of 'em tho' the story is quite interesting. Learn the proper use of dialogue and action tags. Grammar is good and technicalities are not that much. Keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
At first I am so confused since I didn't know the entire plot but you make it sound exciting. Great writing style too. Keep writing and may God bless you!

6. penscanwrite - Next To Me
Title - 12 - 12
Book Cover - 7 - 9
Blurb/Description - 7 - 8
Characters - 20 - 22
Originality/Creativity - 7 - 7
Writing Style - 22 - 23
Total Score - 75% - 81%
OVERALL SCORE = 78%

FEEDBACK;
Hmm, so you're afraid on getting negative feedback from people? Just an advice, getting a negative feedback is a great help for us, writers, to know on what we are going to fix on our novels. Yes, it hurts but it will also help us to improve, yeah? Okay, I really don't have a problem with your writing style. I just have seen some minimal errors. Characterization is good but somewhat lacking, try to describe their visage for the readers who aren't a fan can imagine your portrayer. The flow is smooth so I really enjoyed reading. Just keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
Your story seems familiar then I realized that I've also seen the s2 of this one. And kind of confused since it does not seems like fanfiction, I think it is teen fiction since the s2 was on that category. Anyways, your tags are great and the plot itself. I hope you'd never get tired of writing and I wish you all the best. God bless!

7. @Rachel_Relonjin - BTS Stories
Title - 12
Book Cover - 8
Blurb/Description - 8
Characters - 17
Originality/Creativity - 8
Writing Style - 22
Total Score - 75%

FEEDBACK;
Sorry but I really can't relate with the characters 'cause I'm not a fan of 'em. I think most of the scenes were based on an inside joke of your fandom? Or their personas? I really have no idea. I have no problem with the writing style that you have used but I wanna suggest, if you can-please show, not tell.

NOTE:
The second judge didn't had a chance to read the story since it was unpublished at the midst of judging.

8. @MS_Purple_Dreamer - Our Unexpected Encounter
Title - 11 - 12
Book Cover - 6 - 8
Blurb/Description - 7 - 8
Characters - 17 - 23
Originality/Creativity - 7 - 8
Writing Style - 22 - 26
Total Score - 70% - 85%
OVERALL SCORE = 77.5%

FEEDBACK;
Okay, I'm not really into K-Pop artist but I'm also a die-hard fan of many Western artists so I can say that I can feel the character's feelings. Tho' characterization is not properly built, it lacks. Also the emotions and reactions. As I said, I'm also a fan, being in a concert of our idols will be surely heaven. Nagkulang ang description sa scene kung saan pumunta sila ng concert. Put yourself on your characters' shoe and imagine what you're going to feel if you're in the scene. Yes, hindi natin alam kung anong mararamdaman kaya maiiyak na lang tayo sa tuwa, hindi ba? Pwede mong ilagay iyon sa scene. Be more descriptive on describing your scenes because I really can't imagine the settings. Just keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
I never knew na kikiligin ako sa fanfic. Haha, you're the best author! Na-imagine ko tuloy na ako 'yon pero sana LAHAT DIBA? Keep writing, God bless!!!

9. @Dputyoflve - That's My Bully SasuSaku
Title - 11 - 11
Book Cover - 7 - 9
Blurb/Description - 7 - 9
Characters - 19 - 22
Originality/Creativity - 8 - 8
Writing Style - 18 - 23
Total Score - 70% - 82%
OVERALL SCORE = 76%

FEEDBACK;
I'm not an Otaku (I'm watching anime movies/series but not a fan) so characters are sort of confusing 'cause I don't know them well but I'm coping up. I have seen many technicalities such as grammar and proper use of punctuations. I'm suggesting you to edit it. Learn the use of proper spacing and all that. Tho' I can see that you have a potential so just keep on writing :)

FEEDBACK;
Not really a fan of anime but I find your story cute! I mean the way Sasuke defend herself is savage and so cute. Keep on writing, Miss/Mister! May God bless you!

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