Andie

In this chapter Exotic's POV will be her dreaming because she is still in the coma.

I was in my zone and ready to handle business. I looked at Sharee and she had her game face on. She was ready just as I was. These bitches thought this shit was a game. I mean you can't go around fucking with innocent people and think that there will be no consequences.

"Sharee you ready?" I asked.

"Andie boo I was born fa' this shit. Let's make it happen."

We got outta of the car and walked up to the door and believe it or not it wasn't shut all the way. I mean how dumb can you be? I pushed the door open and looked back at Sharee with a sinister smirk on my face. As we walked further in the house we could hear aruging upstairs.

We stayed at the bottom of the steps and listened to see what we would hear before we took both of they weak asses to our destination.

"Sharla why the hell you trying to feel all guilty now? You knew this shit was gon' get ugly."

"Yeah, but I didn't expect for Exotic to try and kill herself either. This shit could have been avoided if I had been woman enough to face my problems. Do you realize she could die because of that shit you and Marcell concocted?!"

"Sharla do you think I give a fuck about Exotic? Hell no! She should have stayed in her place. Que is mines, always has been and always will be."

"Skye you are crazy as hell and you know what I am going to tell my Aunt everything. I have already caused enough problems as it is because of you and Marcell blackmailing me, but shit tell Giselle I don't even care no more.

"So you think that Giselle is going to like the fact that you were boning her daddy. You think she gon' forgive you when you tell her you got a daughter by her father, matter fact that would make her Giselle's lil sister right?"

She was paralyzed in silence and didn't know what to say because hearing her sins from someone else sounded bad, real bad.

"You know what Skye go to hell!"

Sharla made her way downstairs not knowing that she was about to be met by Andie and Sharee. She had just hit the last few steps when she looked up and saw them.

"Well...Well if it isn't the wicked ho of the east. Ain't that right Sharee."

"Yeah sure the hell is." Sharee said

"Look I-"

"Nah Sharla save that shit. You caused Que pain, and the whole damn fam pain. Now it is time for you to feel some pain." I said walking closer to her.

While I was having my moment with Sharla, Sharee went upstairs to find Skye.

Sharee

I made my way upstairs and I silently checked the rooms until I got to the last door on the right. Skye had no idea what she was about to get into fucking with Exotic like she did. When I opened the door she didn't see me. I walked up behind her and put her in a choke hold. She struggled for a few minutes until she fell limp. I drug her downstairs. When I got back downstairs Andie had Sharla laid out. We took them to the rented truck we had and made our way to the destination.

Once we got there we had Big to come out and help bring these ho's inside. He tied them to a chair with their ankles tied tightly and ther hands were tied behind their backs, with their mouth gagged. They were still out for a lil minute because we used the sleeper hold on them.

I watched Andie as she came back with a the gasoline jugs. She passed me one and I smiled because these two bitches was about to understand what Karma really was.

We took the gas jugs and poured gas in a cricle around their feet. They slowly opened their eyes from the stench of the gas. The look on their faces were hilarious.

Their eyes got big and they started squirming in their seats. This shit was so damn funny.

"Aww what's the matter Skye, you don't like havin' a lil fun?" I said striking a match.

Tears streamed down her face. I mean this bitch was literally crying me a river. I knew she was a weak bitch.

"Sharla...Sharla you a dirty ho for real. I mean you fucking people daddy's and shit. So much dick out here and you stoop that low. Then you go along with this plan to protect yoself, but it's cool cause I got you covered. Your secret ain't safe with me just wait on it." Andie said striking her match.

Sharla was putting more than two tears in a bucket the way she was crying. Shit ain't no need for crying now. 

Andie and I looked at each other and threw the matches on the ring of gasoline. They looked pathetic trying to break free knowing damn well they asses were not going anywhere.

We stood back with our arms folded and just looked at them. Big came back out and looked at us like we were crazy. Hell we were for the simple fact that this was that Exotic type shit we were on. If my girl was awake she would burn they ass up for real.

"Skye, Sharla we just wanna give you a glimpse of what hell is like on earth. Everyday of your lives you are gonna go through hell since you like to fuck with people like you run shit." Andie said.

"Since y'all like to lie, scheme and cause drama we about to shake some real shit up that yo asses ain't gon' be ready for." I said.

"Big go get our special guest please!" Andie said.

A few seconds later Amiyah came through with Giselle. The rings of fire were still burning as Amiyah and Giselle looked on. Giselle looked like she wanted to fuck some shit up and I was enyoying every moment of it.

"Sharla you remember I told you to wait on it, well the wait is over because looks like yo lil secret is out." Andie said laughing like she was at a comedy show.

Amiyah and Giselle had a box in their hands with a very lovely surprise. Inside those boxes were rats and they were going to enjoy the company of Skye and Sharla as the fire burned. We were going to keep them there until Exotic woke up and at this point we didn't know when that is going to be.

"Giselle I still don't like yo ass but I feel sorry for you because Karma has a way of slapping you in the face. I bet none of y'all asses won't fuck wit Exotic no more." I said.

"Now Amiyah y'all can do whatever you won't to them because Karma already taking its course." Andie said as we walked out.

Skye and Sharla went through immense pain, torture, and agony, but it was well deserved. Now Marcell bout to really catch his real soon....

Exotic (Coma-Dreaming)

I was consumed by darkness until all of a sudden I saw a little girl that looked like me. It was me and I was with my mom again, but how is that possible? I had on a lil ballerina outfit as  my mom held my hands and twirled me around. I was giggling and enjoying myself.

"Look mommy I'm dancing. I am going to dance just like you someday."

"Yes baby you are. You are going to be big and famous with your name gracing billboards."

It was like I was walking through and I could see back in the past. Was I dead? I mean how was this even possible? I kept walking and I saw an older me with a leotard on dancing and my mom was showing me how to do a series of turns.

"Mom you are the best dancer ever and I promise I will never let you down."

"Oh Exotic I know you won't because you have a wonderful gift that you need to share with the world."

As I kept walking I saw my mom hugging a man. Is this my father. I never knew him, but I did see pictures. He was killed in a car accident when I was one. They looked so happy and in love. I kept walking towards the light and I saw Derrick, my mom and my dad.

"Momma where am I? Am I dead or something?"

"No sweetheart you are not dead yet, but you have to decide if you want to live or die. You have so much to live for and you have so many people that love you, including Ja. I have been watching over you everyday that I have been gone."

"I know its hard not having me there with you, but know I will always be in your heart and in your spirit just as you are in mines."

"Derrick w-why did you leave me? Why did you take your life?" I asked looking at him.

"Exotic I couldn't bare to live with myself everyday knowing I had hurt you so deeply and it hurt knowing that I could never get you back, so I did what I felt I had to do. Look at it this way if I had stayed you never would have met Ja."

I walked up to my father and smiled at him.

"Daddy I finally meet you. I just hate it is under these circumstances." A tear escaped and rolled down my cheek.

"Baby girl don't cry because one day we will all be a family again, but first you gotta fulfill your purpose on earth."

My mom stepped up and they stepped back. She touched my tear stained cheeks and I knew that this was going to be the last time I saw her and this was the last time I would touch her unless I gave up and died. I really wanted to be with my mother because I felt like I didn't have the strength to endure anymore.

"Exotic baby listen to me. I love you to the moon and back, but you are needed on earth right now. God has a plan for you. When you feel pressed, hurt, angry or whatever emotion you are feeling, remember that I am here." She pointed to my heart.

"Everything is gonna be alright. You are gonna have to be strong because Ja is gonna need you. Y'all are gonna need each other."

I looked at my mother in confusion because I didn't know what she meant by that, but I just nodded taking it all in.

I looked over her shoulders to see Derrick and my dad walking the distant. I hugged my mother tight and kissed her.

"I love you momma, but do you really have to leave me again?" Tears freely fell from my face.

"Exotic I love you so much and I am never too far away because I am in your heart and you are in mines."

I heard music in the background and my mom reached for my hands. We danced in a circle like we used to do when I was little. I laughed and smiled as she twirled me around. This was the best feeling in the world.

Derrick and my dad had stopped walking and turned around waiting for her, because it was time for her to go back.

"Baby its time. Its time for me to go, but it's time for you to go back....I love you baby girl and keep ya head up because I am with you every step of the way."

She let my hands go and blew me a kiss. I caught it and smiled.

"Momma I love you."

I waved to my dad and Derrick and blew them a kiss. Shortly after everything went black again. I felt myself being placed back in my body.

*******

I heard voices around me, but I still couldn't open my eyes just yet. I felt what I knew to be tears roll down my cheeks. My hand twitched and I opened my eyes to the brightest light. I really couldn't move my head too much because I was weighed down by all the stuff that was connected to my body.

I could hear my aunts voice and I could hear Ja's voice as they talked to one another. After I heard his voice everything that happened came rushing back. I felt more tears stream down.

"Exotic! Oh my God you are awake." I heard my aunt say.

"Que go get the doctor!"

I couldn't talk because of the tube down my throat so I just had to look and make eye contact.

I really didn't want to come back but my mom told me it was time to go back so here I am, back in this cruel, cold and unkind world....

It was so hard writing Exotic's POV. I literally cried writing it! Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter!