Hi everyone....
Back with update... Surprisingly I am turning quite regular..😂
Don't know for how long I'll be this regular pr jab tak motivated rahugi tab tak I'll be this active..
I have started adding voiceover in some parts. The voiceover is of a damnfam member but of whom that you'll know at end of story....
Do let me know if you are enjoying the VO's...
Back to story....
-----------------------------------------------------------
Manav's side:
Everyone gets in mini bus. Arsh and Addy sits together. Anirudh was sitting behind them. Rishabh was sitting on other side... Ashi and Manav were the last one's to gets in bus. But this time Ashi goes and sits besides Anirudh. Manav looks at her when she smiles seeing him. Manav smilingly goes and sits besides Rishu who turns away his face... The bus starts...
Manav was trying to talk with Rishabh but he wasn't ready to listen...
Manav: (irritatedly) Kya itni nautanki kr raha hai Rishu... Kaha na sorry..
Rishabh: (mockingly) Best way to say sorry... Sorry bhi chillakr keh raha hai...
Arsh: Pyaar se sorry bol na deenu...
Manav: (extra sweetly) Sorry meri jaan...
Rishabh: Diabities karane wala hai ye..
Manav: Isme bhi dikkat hai isse.. Problem kya hai teri Rishu. Mere samne hi itni nautanki karni hoti hai.. Ashi ki baat ek min mai man gaya tha subah...
Ashi: (shouts from back) Jealous people...
Addy: Issi ki kami thi life mai..
Manav: Jyada nautanki mat kr Rishu.. Dekh tu bhi janta hai ki tu mujhse jyada der naraj nahi reh sakta. Toh ye natak band kr.. (Rishu silently smiles hearing him but still shows him a stern face) Nautanki... Lekin sachi sorry yaar.. You know na I love you...
Ashi: (shouts from back) Itne pyaar se toh Manav jindagi mai kisise baat na kare... 'You know na I love you'(Mimics him making faces.. )
Manav: Jealous people... (mimics Ashi)
Rishabh: Exactly... (laughs and hugs Manav) Waise bhi mai aapni jaan se jyada der naraj nahi reh sakta...
Ashi: (shockingly) Dalbadlu insaan. Manav mil gaya toh mujhe bhul gaya. Mujhe start se hi Manav ki niyat pr doubt tha.
Anirudh: Waise bhi Manav bhai din bhar Rishu Rishu krke unpr dore dalte rehte hai. Aur dono ek room hi share karte hai...
Ashi: (over dramatically) Hey maa... Mataji.. Ghor anarth... Kaisa kalyug aa gaya hai... Rishu mujhpr Manav ke saath cheat kr raha hai. Aab mai kya karugi... (everyone laughs)
Manav: (rolling his eyes) Chup kr jaa Ashi. Daily soap shuru mat kr yaha. Nautanki...
Rishabh: Ignore her Manav. (Ashi shockingly sees him)(to manav) I love you...
Manav: (kisses on Rishu's cheek) Meri jaan ... Love you too...
Anirudh: (puts his hands on Ashi's eyes) Iske pehle ye dono aage bade aankh band kr le tu..
Everyone busts into laughter... Ashi smiles seeing everyone happy.
Ashi's pov:
Sab sahi chal raha hai. Sab itna khush hai. Now its my responsibility to let things be the same. I won't let my friends fall apart this time. Aur mujhe Tanzeel se bhi baat karni hogi. I need answers to my questions so that I can atleast move on with peace. (sees Rishabh smiling) I can't hurt Rishabh this time..
Restaurant was 20 mins away. After a while everyone gets busy within themselves...
Rishabh: Manav sun na..
Manav: Mai Ashi ke saath seat exchange nahi karne wala... So no bus romance aaj...
Rishabh: (blushing) Mai uski baat nahi kr raha tha...
Manav: (teasing) Oye hoye... Blushing and all... Chal bata kya baat hai..
Rishabh: Mai soch raha tha ki mai khud hi Ashi ko sab saach bata du 31st ke bare mai...
Manav: (shockingly) Are you pagal!? Tu acche se janta hai ki uske baad kya ho sakta hai. Tu kyu ye sab batana chahta hai. It was past. So move on...
Rishabh: Nahi yaar. It always scares me agar usse kisi aur se pata chala toh kya hoga. Aur agar usse Tanzeel ya Unnati ya kisi aur se pata chala toh wo pakka mujhe galat samjhegi. I can't lose her. Agar mai khud hi usse bata du toh I can atleast explain her my side.
Manav: I am still not convinced. She is really happy. Ye sab purani bate nikalne ki jarurat nahi hai. But its your call. If you think ki batana chahiye toh bata de... Whatever happens I am always their by both of your side...
Rishabh: Thanks Manav. Mai trip ke last din usse sab bata duga. Tab tak lets enjoy every moment together...
Manav smiles seeing him.
They all reach at a beach side restaurant for their lunch.. They all go and have their lunch enjoying the view.
Voiceover:
Everything was going well and everyone was happy but life can never be perfect...
Everyone finish their lunch and were just chitchatting. Just then Ashi gets video call from her mom. The place was really noisy and Ashi couldn't hear the call. Ashi excuses herself and goes from their.
SUTA and Mrunu's side:
They go to a near by market along beach. The girls start their shopping as usual. Sanket being the shopaholic also rushes to the shops behind girls. Tanzeel was hell bored but he had no other option. He also joined them. Unnati couldn't figure out what to buy. She sees Sanket buying some stuff for himself on other side... She thinks to ask him for help and goes towards him...
Unnati: (sweetly) Sanku please help kr de na clothes select karne mai...
Sanket continues looking for his shirts not paying any head to what unnati said..
Unnati: Sanku... Maine itne pyaar se help mangi yaar.. Kr na help Sanku...
Sanket: (he purposefully ignores her) I am busy unnsu.. Better luck next time... (he continues his shopping)
Voiceover:
Sanket and his shopping is a never ending relationship. Noone can disturb him during his shopping. Shopping is his first love but can't say the last.. Cause you never know what life has for you..
And moreover this is how he and Unnati has always been. They both can never agree on same thing. They'll always be fighting and troubling each other. No matter how much tantrums he shows to unnati but he cares the most for her. They are like they can't stand each other but they can do anything for each other... I know its wierd but can't help..
Author's pov:
Unnati annoyingly sees Sanket but her face changes to a smirking one as an idea strikes her...
Unnati: (smirkingly) Sanku.. Tu saachi help nahi karegi meri...
Sanket: Nope...
Unnati: Isse dekhne ke bad bhi nahi. (she smirkingly shows his a photo.)
Sanket: (casually) Ye kya hai...
Unnati: Ye wahi hai jo subah room mai ho raha tha..
Sanket shockingly sees her. He was about to grab her phone but she pulls it back...
Unnati: (shows him 2 outfits) Which one is better Sanku??
Sanket: (glaring her) Did I ever say you that I hate you...
Unnati: Mention not... Love you more.. Now say which one.. Actually ye dono rehne dete hai.. We'll go in another shop. Wahapr acche hai..
Sanket glared her but later went with her to the other shop. Other's giggled seeing Sanket's annoyed face...
Mrunu: Unnati ne sahi kiya sanku ke saath. Wo har baar tang karta hai usse. Aaj uski shakal dekhne layak thi..
Aashna: Bechara Sanku..
Tanzeel: (teasingly)Kisiko bura lag raha hai sanku ke liye..
Aashna: Chup kr Tanzeel.. Aaisa kuch nhi hai... (blushing)
Mrunu: Kyu jhoot bol rahi hai.. Hume pata hai ki tu Sanku ke liye kya feel karti hai... Confess kyu nahi krti...
Aashna: I am not sure about it. And I will not take a step forward jab tak mai sure nahi hoti. I don't want to lose him as a friend. And last time jaisa kuch scene bhi nahi chahti.. So I'm not gonna tush to conclusions..
Tanzeel: Honey you don't know the whole thing. You should talk with him and clear out things...
Aashna: Yes I will... Now can we continue our shopping...
Tanzeel: No ways.. Tum dono continue karo.. I am getting bored toh I'll just go on the beach...
Mrunu: Cool... Chal aashna hum chalte hai...
With that they all leave. Tanzeel walks towards the beach.. Just then he bumps with someone.
Tanzeel: Sorry.. Maine dekha nahi. (he looks at the person) Ashima..
The person was revealed to be Ashi. Their was a akward silence between them. Just then Ashi's mom spoke.. (just to remind you ashi was on vc with her mom that's why she comes out of restaurant and then she bumos with tanzeel while she was on call with her mom)
Ashi's mom: (on video call) Are Tanzeel beta. Tum bhi waha ho? Mujhe Ashi ne kuch bataya hi nahi...
Ashi sees tanzeel nervously. She adjusts her camera so that both fit in the frame.
Tanzeel: Namaste Aunty. Actually hume bhi pata nahi tha ki ye yaha aa rahe hai. Mai sanku,honey aur mrunu ke saath aya hu. Waise kaise ho aap?
Ashi's mom: Badiya hu.. Kafi time hua tum sabse ikathe baat kiye. Aab saath mai ho toh sabse baat ho jayegi. Kaha hai sab...
Tanzeel: Wo log shopping kr rahe hai aunty...
Ashi's mom: Koi baat nahi. Waise kafi time hua tumse baat kiye. Ashi se puchti thi toh woh baat tal deti thi. Accha laga tumhe saath dekhkr. Aab sab log saathme Delhi aana..
Tanzeel and Ashi looks on at each other.
Ashi: (trying to divert topic) Mom mai aapse badme baat krti hu...
Ashi's mom: Koi baat nahi. Saath ho toh sab maje karna. Bye baccho...
Ashi: Bye Mumma..
Tanzeel: Bye aunty...
Ashi cuts the call. Ashi and Tanzeel see each other. They both were not knowing where to start the conversation from...
Ashi: Umm hi...
Tanzeel: Hi.. Umm.. Beach pr chale...
Ashi: (she looks back in restaurant and sees the boys busy chitchatting) Sure...
They both walk towards the beach. They both didn't exchange even a single word but both were happy. Their was silence between them but this silence spoke 1000s of things. Maybe the thought that both wanted to talk and sort out things was enough to make their heart happy...
Tanzeel: (nervously) Ashima... Actually mujhe tumse baat karni thi...
Ashi: Mujhe bhi. And subah jo bhi hua uske liye sorry..
Tanzeel: Koi baat nahi. Is Rishu ohkay now!?
Ashi: Yes... Waise tum kuch bol rahe the..
Tanzeel stops walking. Ashi turns back and looks at him.
Tanzeel: (nervously) Ashima I know maine bohot sari galti ki hai. I messed up things. Pr trust me I never wanted to hurt you or Rishu or Manav bhai. I want to sort things. I miss Arsh, Addy, Ani.. I know Manav bhai aur Rishu bohot naraj hai pr can't we try to fix things.. I miss both of them... (softly) I miss you... I miss you Ashima...
Ashi: (emotionally) Itna aasan nahi hai Tanzeel. Bohot chije badal gayi hai. I have seen Manav going through the heartbreak. And aaj subah jo bhi hua uske bad mujhe nahi lagta ye ho payega...
Tanzeel: please tu toh aaise mat bol. I know ki tu bhi yahi chahti hai. I know you are also hurt pr please trust me.. Give me one last chance to fix up things... Last chance for all old time sake..
Ashi: (with teary eyes) Pr manav aur Rishu... Kabhi nahi... I can't hurt them Tanzeel.. Sorry... (she starts to walks of but Tanzeel holds her hand and stops her)
Tanzeel: (with teary eyes) Can YOU give ME another chance??
-----------------------------------------------------------
So finally I started getting things sorted. Lets see what all happens now.. I am super excited for all that is going to happen....
Also next chapter is almost ready. It is thoda chota chapter but I'll update that on Friday..
Question of the day:
What is your favorite damnfam trio?
What do you think will be Ashi's answer?
Also I am not that sure whether you all are enjoying the story or not... For previous 2-3 chapter the views are quite less compared to other. It is not that views it affects me but I need honest reviews so that I can improvise. Please give me honest reviews. I am open to all kind of feedbacks toh please ye mat sochna ki bura lagega ya kuch. You can dm me your feedbacks... Pr please honest reviews do..
Do vote and comment. Appreciation and criticism both are welcomed. Feel free to dm me your feedbacks.
Thankyou
-Dolly
Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top