The 2017 Winglet Award
The winglet award goes to the authors with the best original characters whose stories are just waiting to be told.
And the winners are....
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1. Hearts of Black and Gold by Sandshadow9!!!
2. The legend of goltalon by Goldtalon!!!
3. Bedrock by Bedrockthynightwing!!!
Congrats to all!!!!!
Feedback-
1. Hearts of black and gold
Love it! Storm is a great OC, and she's an Icewing, which makes things more interesting. I don't see a lot of Icewings characters usually, but she makes you see them in a different way. Like they actually can feel emotions sort of way. Unlike some stories, your characters aren't flat- they have real feeling which make them come alive more and it's perfect! And I LOVE Caracal. She's adorable! I look forward to reading more into your stories! (And we both have a character named Ember, so that's cool.)
2. The Legend of goldtalon
This is an AWESOME book. For starters, I like ho there's pictures included so you get a clearer image of how the characters look, especially Goldtalon. I would've never have thought to picture a Sandwing-Nightwing hybrid that way, but it's really cool. This story, unlike some I have read, keeps you interested. I can't decide whose team I'm on though- Ray, Vine, or Destinyseeker. Hmmmm... Anyway! I have no idea why I find this funny, but just the part when Goldtalon is talking and then it's just like Hey, Vortex died BTW. Makes me laugh every time even though it shouldn't. This is a really great story and I hope you'll be able to update it soon! :)
3. Bedrock
.....Why is there so much killing in your books? Just wondering. Anyways, Bedrock time. Bedrock seems interesting. I like the idea of there being squads in the Nightwing kingdom. It gives them more of a brutal look that suits them. And I love how the story starts earlier, before Quickstrike.... you know, and Battlewinner got internally frozen. You don't really hear much about those days, but this story talks about it. It could use some grammar work, but is still understandable. Bedrock seems like an interesting character and I'm interested to know why he is so big and more about his squad. A very intriguing story.
This concludes all the normal awards! The next and final award announced is the Sutherland award, the highest award a book can win in this competition. The awards will reopen on January first. Feel free to spread the word before new entries are accepted!
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