Heart On Fire by msconjuring

Title (16/20)
It's common but it can somehow make readers curious about the whole story.

Book Cover (17/20)
It's fancy and I liked it but some readers are not into k-pop. It may lead future readers to hesitate to read the story.

Description(13/15)
I won't consider the grammatical errors but the description should be well-constructed because that's the first thing readers check. But the way you write the description is unique from the others which is very good. It'll make readers continue reading it.

Cleanliness (14/15)
The story was written in Filipino and the grammar was good. The writing mechanics such as punctuations, spellings, grammar, etc. were all used right. That's why it's 14.

Writing Style (9/10)
The author has her way of narrating or delivering the story. It will make you read more because chapters were short yet you'll get curious that's why it will eager you read the next.

Judge's Impression (8/10)
As a judge, the story was good. I enjoyed it. But, the author should work more on how to express the characters' emotions in detail but not too much, for the readers to feel more the emotion of the story. But all in all, your story was nice!

Reader's Impression (8/10)
At first, I didn't get hooked up by the story but as I read it I was slowly getting interested in it. That's why I gave 8. As much as possible the first part of the story must hook readers instantly.

Total: 85/100

A Hard Habit To Break by gemaiara

TITLE: 18/20

BOOK COVER: 14/20

DESCRIPTION: 13/15

CLEANLINESS: 13/15
Pag-aralan mo ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag.
Ang pagkakaiba ng Nina at Nila.

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
Muntik ng dumugo ilong ko. HAHAHA. Gusto ko lang sabihin na maganda ang story mo pero para sa akin parang ang bilis lang na may naramdaman na agad siyang ✨feelings✨ para kay Mr. Laging Nakatingin Sa Kawalan (Knox). Pero walang kaso, magandang ang takbo ng story. KEEP WRITING.

TOTAL: 82/100

With A Smile by missin_writer

TITLE: 17/20

BOOK COVER: 15/20
Hindi ko mahanap kung ano ang connect ng book cover mo sa iyong story and para sa akin hindi rin ito attractive dahil na rin sa genre ng story mo.

DESCRIPTION: 12/15

CLEANLINESS: 12/15
Pag-aralan mo po ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag.

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
Grabe, Mare! Doon sa last part no'ng chapter 5. Hush, naluha ako! Parang alam ko na rin ang mangyayari🤷‍♀ at kung iyon nga ang mangyayari ay good 'yan! Anyway, maganda ang story mo. KEEP WRITING.

TOTAL: 81/100

Ikaw Pa Rin by IrishHeaven

Title (16/20)
It's kinda common but if this title was connected to the story then it's alright.

Book Cover (17/20)
The cover is good but I think there will be a better cover that will represent the whole story or the concept.

Description (14/15)
The description says it all but if you can make it more concise yet powerful, make it.

Cleanliness (13/15)
The grammar was good I've seen no problem with the author's grammar but the writing mechanics, specifically the punctuation marks were not used properly. Don't forget to use the period to end the paragraph, use comma to take pause, and try to study how to write 'stuttering words' like instead of placing many hyphens *a----ko ay ma-----ganda* you can write in this way *a-ako ay m-maganda*, (just a suggestion huhu). But it's your choice, it's your story, you can do whatever you want. No errors, just the punctuation marks.

Writing Style (9/10)
It's not that unique-the writing style- but the author had delivered the story well. The narration was good. It may hook readers. So I gave 9

Judge's Impression (8/10)
I gave eight because I've seen errors that a writer must basically know but on the other hand, I loved how the author narrates the story. I was hooked up.

Reader's Impression (8/10)
Seven because as a reader you want to read satisfying (what I mean by this is, you'll really get into the story. 'maaadik ka' kumbaga) chapters. But then, if the writer wants it that way then it's alright.

Total: 85/100

My Secret by jemaxx_

TITLE: 14/20

BOOK COVER: 14/20
Unang-una ay hindi po attractive. Pangalawa ay walang romance vibes lalo na't sa romance mo isinali. Makulay ito, kabaliktaran ng story mo.

DESCRIPTION: 13/15
Dito naman ay bumawi ka. Nagustuhan ko ang description mo.

CLEANLINESS: 10/15
Pag-aralan mo po ang dialogue tag and action tag dahil mahalaga 'yon.
Pag-aralan mo rin po kung paano ang tamang paggamit ng Din at Rin, Daw at Raw, Doon at Roon, at Dine at Rine.
❌Yung
✔️Iyong
✔️'Yong
*
❌Yan
✔️Iyan
✔️'Yan
*
❌Diba
✔️'Di ba
*
❌Nalang
✔️Na lang

WRITING STYLE: 5/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 5/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 6/10
KEEP WRITING and KEEP LEARNING!

TOTAL: 67/100

Notes From The Moon by sugaplumrae

TITLE: 17/20
Ang cute ng title at unique!

BOOK COVER: 18/20

DESCRIPTION: 13/15

CLEANLINESS: 13/15
Pag-aralan mo po ang Dialogue Tag an Action Tag
Pag-aralan mo rin po ang tamang paggamit ng Diyan at Riyan
*
❌Padin
✔️Pa rin
*
❌Sayo
✔️Sa iyo
✔️Sa 'yo
*
❌Bat
✔️Ba't
✔️Bakit
*
❌Di
✔️'Di
✔️Hindi

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 7/10
May kunting typos lang naman at sana kapag may oras ka ay magawa mo iyong i-edit. KEEP WRITING!

TOTAL: 84/100

Zodiac 1: Name Your Price by amvernheart

TITLE: 18/20

BOOK COVER: 15/20

DESCRIPTION: 13/15
Maikli pero grabe. Dito pa lang ay nakuha mo na agad ang atensyon ko. Goods 'yarn.

CLEANLINESS: 12/15
Pag-aralan mo po ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag.
*
❌Di
✔️'Di
✔️Hindi
*
❌Yun
✔️'Yon/'Yun
✔️Iyon/Iyun

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 10/10
Wahhhh! Hindi ko talaga inasahan ang mga nangyari. Hindi ko inakalang ✨secret agent✨ siya! Tapos nang nasa chapter 5 na ako, saka ko lang narealize na si Zach ang nasa description (tama ba?😭). Anyway, masaya akong nabasa ko ang story mo. Good job, Author!

TOTAL: 84/100

I Will Walk By by christalpen

Title (18/20)
The title is good! It sounded more of a romance novel or something. Nice.

Book Cover (17/20)
It was nice. Aesthetic but make it more connected to the concept of the story. But I loved the cover.

Description (14/15)
It is brief yet some part of it didn't come clear to me. Maybe it needs a minor revision especially the part of introducing the series.

Cleanliness (14/15)
Grammar (✓), it was very good. The punctuations and spellings were used correctly. All in all, I've seen no errors.

Writing Style (9/10)
I gave 9 because it's unique. The author's writing style was effective! You can really feel the emotions. Everything was delivered very well.

Judge's Impression (9/10)
I enjoyed reading it because I can feel the emotions that the author was trying to project. I felt it that's why readers would definitely gonna love it. I'm pretty sure of that.

Reader's Impression (9/10)
I gave 9 points because I loved how the author narrates the whole story. It was effective and as a reader, you'll never stop reading it. So nice!

Total: 90/100

Love Waves by Queenel_21

Title (18/20)
The title is unique! Nice.

Book Cover (18/20)
It was nice and accurate to the concept of the story.

Description (14/15)
It needs more 'power' to catch readers but I loved it nonetheless. Just make the readers more curious and satisfied at the same time.

Cleanliness (14/15)
The grammar (✓) and the other writing mechanics such as punctuations, spelling, coherence were all used correctly! Impressive.

Writing Style (9/10)
This story was the author's first story, I guess? But she delivered the story very well. The narration and all were really good! I loved the style of writing though a lot of authors have this kind of writing style.

Judge's Impression (8/10)
The story was really nice and I enjoyed reading it! (not the whole story tho but, it was really good).

Reader's Impression (9/10)
When I've read the first part, I couldn't stop anymore (haha). I loved the story and it's really obvious that readers would definitely be going to enjoy reading it.

Total: 90/100

Crime Of Love by AkoSiIttal

Title (18/20)
The title is so nice, it would catch readers!

Book Cover (18/20)
The book cover says it all. The concept of the story and the book cover complement each other.

Description (14/15)
The description was brief and it actually hooked me that's why it's 14.

Cleanliness (14/15)
I gave 14 points because the writer used the dialogue tag correctly. The grammar was good. The writing mechanics were used properly.

Writing Style (9/10)
The writer has a unique style of writing and it was really effective! Nice.

Judge's Impression (9/10)
I really enjoyed reading the story. It was really nice and I know readers would absolutely going to love it as well.

Reader's Impression (9/10)
I was thrilled by the story and I loved it! The author's style of narrating hooked me up. So, nice!

Total: 91/100

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🥇Crime Of Love by AkoSiIttal

🥈Love Waves by Queenel_21
AND
I Will Walk By by christalpen

🥉Heart On Fire by msconjuring
AND
Ikaw Pa Rin by IrishHeaven

BEST IN BOOK COVER
🎗I Will Walk By by christalpen

BEST IN TITLE
🎗Notes From The Moon
by sugaplumrae

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