FANTASY RESULTS
Zeiah The Battle Begins by jasper625
TITLE: 18/20
BOOK COVER: 19/20
DESCRIPTION: 12/15
CLEANLINESS: 13/15
Pag-aralan mo po ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag.
May mga typos at maliliit na mali pero madadaan naman sa pag-eedit kaya sana ay ma-edit mo para mas luminis.
WRITING STYLE: 9/10
JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
READER'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
Marami na akong nabasang ganiyang story pero 'yong sa 'yo ay iba. Nadadala mo ako sa lugar kung na saan ang character mo. Naiimagine ko ang lahat! Pero iyon nga, sana ay magawa mong i-edit ang mga maliit na mali at gamitin mo rin ng tama ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag.
TOTAL: 89/100
The Green Guardian by CroodsGirl
TITLE: 19/20
BOOK COVER: 19/20
DESCRIPTION: 13/15
CLEANLINESS: 14/15
WRITING STYLE: 8/10
JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
READER'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
First of all, your title is nice also your book cover. You are good in describing things, and I like that. I can imagine clearly the sorroundings. The plot is amazing. Good job!
TOTAL: 90/100
Legends Of Shaoghal: DIVERGING PERIODS by MzYouKnowWho
TITLE: 18/20
BOOK COVER: 15/20
DESCRIPTION: 13/15
CLEANLINESS: 13/15
Pag-aralan mo po ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag.
WRITING STYLE: 8/10
JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
READER'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
Ang ganda ng title mo pati ang description. Nacurious talaga ako nang mabasa ko 'yon. Goods 'yarn, huh. Basta, aralin mo lang ang Dialogue Tag and Action Tag. Good luck sa iyong journey!
TOTAL: 85/100
Diyosang Manyak by LittleChunHua
TITLE: 15/20
BOOK COVER: 12/20
Hindi kasi ito attractive, eh. Andoon nga ang dyosa pero wala pa rin, eh. Nasa sa iyo pa rin naman kung gusto mong palitan pero ang masasabi ko lang ay dapat book cover pa lang may laban na.
DESCRIPTION: 13/15
Dito naman ay okay. Nakuha ko ang nais iparating.
CLEANLINESS: 10/15
❌Narin
✔️Na rin
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❌Nalang
✔️Na lang
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The correct way to use naka- is to repeat the first syllable of the attached root word. EXAMPLE: nakagugutom. nakakikilig.
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Pagdating naman sa dialogue tag and action tag. May mali at may tama kaya sana ay magawa mo itong maayos.
WRITING STYLE: 7/10
JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 7/10
READER'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
Masaya akong nabasa ko ang iyong story. Keep learning and keep writing, writer!
TOTAL: 72/100
The Odds Of Cludora Academy: Seeker's Treasure by RoygebivTwirl
TITLE: 18/20
Hindi ko masabing unique pero nakuha ako ng title mo.
BOOK COVER: 19/20
DESCRIPTION: 14/15
CLEANLINESS: 13/15
❌Nalang
✔️Na lang
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❌Yun
✔️'Yun/'Yon
✔️Iyun/Iyon
May kunting typo at sana ay magawa mo itong i-edit.
WRITING STYLE: 8/10
JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
READER'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
Nakaka-enjoy basahin ang iyong story. Ang ganda ng plot, hindi mo mahuhuluan kung ano ang mangyayari. GOOD JOB!
TOTAL: 89/100
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