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I would like to apologize to the participants for the long wait. The results are here .
Your judge sarang_my_winterbearย have done their evaluations. Now let's reveal who will be the Crystal Snow for the Kim Taehyung Category.
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Better Lover This Time by Seong_Grace
Cover design: (4/5)
The cover of this book is quite good while giving me an aesthetic soft vibe which match with the story Title.
Title: (4/5)
The title of the book cover is really good but i don't understand why you give 'ยฎ' this on your cover. But despite its really catch me when I see it.
Summary: (8/10)
The summary is the most important part of the story. And when I read the summary of the story its really helpful like you mentioned twist part on the summary which caught my eyes. And reading the summary I really want to know the whole story so its quite good.
Vocabulary: (11/15)
the vocabulary of the story is not that bad just some silly mistakes are here like "his car parked near the corner of town" so town is not a small place or don't have a verified corner so you should use "his car parked near the house or the park" but corner of the town is not good to hear.
Grammar: (9/15)
As i say before grammar is ok I don't find any huge mistake but there's some small mistake like "or should we invite them too"ย it's good if you mentioned whom you are talking it and "Ringing the door bell" it's the wrong term of words the correct one is "As the door bell ring, he greeted by an elderly woman" etc . I also found some more but i hope you edit those later.
Pace: (10/15)
To be honest if I say about the pace of the story it's not that good i mean after seeing the girl taehyung suddenly feel like his heart beat but i think it should be given more time to experience this feeling.
Character development: (13/20)
sorry but reading this story I really think that you should give a character introduction because here is many characters I think which one is the main character I mean the lead one and which one is the female lead and which one is the negative character on this story I think you should introduce this first then its maybe helpful recognize the characters.
Uniqueness: (12/15)
when I first read the summary of the story I really thought that it was a unique one and it is but somewhere I found that I read this kind of stories before like the plot of the story is quite interesting and good and I think it's more unique than the other stories i read before.
Evaluation:
I think it's my one of the best Office Romance Story and I really like how Hyerin said taehyung its our first snow I really like that line like it's really romantic and dreamy ๐.
Overall Score: 71/100
Strings Tangled by taexdreams
Cover design: (3/5)
The cover of this book is quite simple and the font is also not unique pluse it's not that match with its title. Like i want a school theme as it's a school romance story.
Title: (4/5)
If I say about the title of the story its really match with the story plot i really like the story name it's really express how our heart is Tangled when we're confused 'is it really a feeling of love'. So it's really catchy title.
Summary: (9/10)
The summary of the story is too good i mean it's really grow the expectations and those last lines oh my God super i really love it.
Vocabulary: (11/15)
the vocabulary is quite simple I mean there's no uses of hard phrases or words and somewhere like the line " He said while teasing him" it must be also like this" He said him in teasing tone" . So just this is what I found some small mistake.
Grammar: (10/15)
so as I said before that there is some silly mistakes which caught my eyes like you forget to give question mark when someone asked anything like "Are you ok...." Here must be a question mark which is not here it's not repeated all time but some time which means it's a silly mistake which is ignore your eyes. And "you should be careful from next time" - 'the' is missing here. So from the next time recheck it before uploading.
Pace: (10/15)
honestly the pace of the story is not good but not bad like the incident happened too fast and when taehyung apology to y/n I think you should give this also in story part not in flashback.
Character development: (15/20)
Character development of the story is good bcz you give a introduction part for character which is really helpful but you should give the introduction of negative role *Lia* bcz she's also a important part of the story and *Felix* also.
Uniqueness: (10/15)
It's not that unique i mean this kind of story is all over in the Wattpad like the rich boy and middle class or poor girl love story and the villain who love the rich boy but didn't gain any attention and try to harm the poor girl and the next boy who is so close to the poor girl which is cause of jealousy for the rich boy.
Evaluation:
All over the story plot, cast and the simple and easy language which is good for beginners. And the line when taehyung said "i don't know when she became my moon" - my heart beated fast after reading this.๐
Overall Score: 72/100
An Everlasting Obsession by junnuVkook
Cover design: (5/5)
The best cover for this story. Honestly the best cover I seen. It's too good it's attractive, catchy and perfect combination of dark colours. I really really love it.
Title: (4ยฝ/5)
It's awesome i love it. The title is perfectly matched with the cover and it's really give me a dark romance feel which is perfect. What happened when a devil/mafia obsessed with someone it's really Everlasting Obsession.
Summary: (9/10)
It's super duper. I don't know how to express im really speechless. The lines really proved that villains are not born they're created by their situation but God send someone to them to turn into again what they are before. And really while reading the summary my expectations are higher than moon.
Vocabulary: (10/15)
I really expect there's no mistake in vocabulary but there's some mistake like "tuff" it's the wrong spelling however it's ok but i noticed some more wrong stuffs.
Grammar: (13/15)
So i don't find too much error in Grammar portion but still as I say before some small mistake like spelling "tuff" and "wered" and in this line "there was one senior and older member named Sarah....." I think this line should be like this " there is one oldest senior member named Sarah...." And the extract part is fully okay!
Pace: (12ยฝ/15)
It's super perfect every incident is serially happened except some which can be considered.
Character development: (18/20)
The character development is Awesome. I really like how she also give a character introducing part. And the explanation is super i really want this type of introduction for characters.
Uniqueness: (12/15)
This kind of story i also read before but it's really unexpected i mean when you reveal her uncle is also bad. I am fully surprised and it's unique bcz y/n accept that she loves taehyung. In other stories basically y/n don't accept it and think he is a mafia or he is just my saviour i can't fall for him etc. But i really like how she accepted the fact that she loves taehyung.
Evaluation:
It's super duper story. Im obsessed with it. How you explain every detail and the past of y/n how she find her brother-in-law and friends it's really good I'm speechless. I don't have any specific favourite line cause the whole story is my favourite it's too good. Easy to understand the situations. I love it๐
Overall Score: 84/100
My Vampire by ArmyR72025
Cover design: (3/5)
The cover design is good but it's quite simple. But it's match with the story title and it's also catchy however I want some more dark theme but it's also good.
Title: (4/5)
I love the Title it's super. And give me horror, dark feeling which can attract anyone.
Summary: (5/10)
Sorry but i can't give too much points bcz the the summary is too short and when I first read it i really don't understand what is going to be happened you should give some more details.
Vocabulary: (14/15)
Your vocabulary skills are awesome it's really helpful to know new words. And i rarely find any mistakes.
Grammar: (13/15)
It's awesome when I read it i really impressed bcz there are no mistake in grammar i found very rare mistakes.
Pace: (10/15)
It's really hard bcz you explain some incidents but expect it it's ok. The matters are serially combined.
Character development: (16/20)
So it's a different kind of story where the only character is taehyung and y/n and i really love it your introduction part of Taehyung "Hello my name is Mr. Vampire" i really like it but I think the title must be like this "Hello I'm Mr. Vampire" not my name is Mr. Vampire. However in the incident you introduced your characters but i think at first it's hard to understand what happened.
Uniqueness: (14/15)
It's really unique bcz when I first saw the title i think it's the same vampire story like the boy is vampire and he fall in love with a normal human. But when I read it I'm really impressed. I'm really surprised how you write it like Taehyung told the readers some of incidents which was happening her life. It's really unexpected unique i really feel that it's happened with me i really feel that he told me the stories. I really love it.
Evaluation:
I like this it's not like any other vampire story. It's totally different and unique for me i really love how you write it and here's really very small mistake. And my favourite line is when Taehyung said " I can hear your heart beat remember?" I love the line it's literally give me goosebumps. ๐
Overall Score: 79/100
Blue Eyes 2 by user_thv
Cover Art: (4/5)
The cover is sooo good and extremely giving me a dark vibe. It's also attractive catchy and you show your many characters in it which is really good it's also match with your title but it will be more unique if you give a pair of Blue Eyes in centre as your story name is this.
Title: (5/5)
Totally awesome. It's too catchy and perfect for the story while giving me a mysterious vibe. I really love it.
Summary: (8/10)
The summary is so good and informative while giving me a mysterious and thrilling vibe. The summary is fully detailed and while reading it i can sense the story is going to be soo good. I really love it.
Vocabulary: (13/15)
It's super perfect there's use of so many words you really described every single thing in details. There's no mistake in vocabulary or spelling.
Grammar: (11/15)
The vocabulary skills are as good as grammar but it's too hard term. I mean it's too hard for beginners you should use easy term. I hope you understand what I say but it's really awesome your grammar portion is so good.
Pace: (12/15)
So good everything is serially happened and in details. I like it how you describe everything in details.
Character development: (17/20)
It's good you really have many characters in your story and i like how you slowly developed your characters but in first i think you should give some information about your characters.
Uniqueness: (13/15)
The story is defination of Uniqueness i really read alot story but this kind of mysterious and thrilling story I read first and honestly my first impressions is awesome. And in First the Trailer it's awesome super i really love it how you give your story a realistic form.
Evaluation:
It's my first mysterious and thrilling story which is super it's theย season 2 maybe i really love to read BLUE EYES it's super. Everything is described in detail. And the trailer it's my favourite it's super you are also a good video editor.๐
Overall Score: 83/100
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3rd Place: ArmyR72025
2nd Place: user_thv
1st Place: junnuVkook
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Congratulations to all of the winners. Remember this was an opportunity to learn so do not feel discouraged if you expected to be the Crystal Snow . Winners, expect your reward shortly. As for our lovely Judge, do not feel left out. My offer still stands clear as I said before. Your prize will be given with this week.
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