I would like to apologize to the participants for the long wait. The results are here .
Your judge @slayyer777 have done their evaluations. Now let's reveal who will be the
Crystal Snow for the Jeon Jungkook Category.

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Snapshot by Cool_Summer29

Cover art: (5/5)

The cove art is lovely, perfect use of color wheel which is making it eye catching. It also matches the title.

Title: (4/5)

The title " Snapshot " | Maknae Line ✔️ is intriguing, especially for the fans familiar with the term "Maknae Line" referring to the younger members of BTS. It suggests a focus on these characters, which aligns with the fanfiction genre.

Summary: (7/10)

The summary introduces the protagonist, Calista, and hints at a university setting when an unexpected encounter leads to significant consequences. It provides a glimpse into the story's premise but could benefit from more detail fully inform potential readers.

Vocabulary: (12/15)

The provided excerpt demonstrates a good command of vocabulary, with descriptive phrases like "solemn zephyr" enhancing the imagery. However, there are minor issues, such as the phrase "crash sound," which could be refined for clarity.

Grammar and Punctuation : (12/15)

The excerpt contains minor grammatical errors, such as "the sun shone at its brightest," which could be simplified to "the sun shone brightly." Additionally, "crash sound" might be better phrased as "crashing sound." These issues slightly disrupt the flow but are not overly distracting.

Pace : (13/15)

Based on the excerpt and summary, the pacing appears appropriate, with a serene morning scene quickly interrupted by a disruptive event, suggesting a balance between description and action.

Character Development : (10/20)

The summary introduces Calista but provides limited insight into her character development. Without additional context, it's challenging to assess how well the characters are developed throughout the story.

Uniqueness : (10/15)

The premise of university life disrupted by unforeseen events is common in fanfiction. While the inclusion of the "Maknae Line" adds a specific fandom appeal, the overall concept doesn't stand out as particularly unique.

Evaluation :

"Snapshot | Maknae Line | ✓" presents an engaging scenario for BTS fans, particularly those interested in the younger members. The writing is descriptive, creating vivid imagery, though minor grammatical issues are present. The summary sets up an intriguing premise but could offer more detail to fully engage potential readers. Character development and uniqueness are challenging to assess without further content, but the story aligns with common themes in fanfiction.

Overall Score : 63/100

Entangled by KimSoojin1112

Cover art : (4/5)

Cover is good and catchy also but in my opinion it gives more mafia vibes rather that romance, but on the other hand it also gives mysterious vibes.

Title : (4/5)

The title "ENTANGLED" is catchy and suggests complexity and intertwined relationships, which fits well with the blurb. However, it's not particularly unique and could apply to many romance or mystery stories.

Summary:     (7/10)

The summary introduces the protagonist (Y/N) with amnesia and mystical powers, who's on a journey of self-discovery. It gives readers an idea of ​​​​the story's themes but doesn't provide a lot of depth or hint at what makes this plot is unique.

Vocabulary : (10/15)

Based on the provided excerpt, the vocabulary is straightforward and descriptive but not particularly rich. There's some variety in word choice, but phrases like "saving her face" could have been reworded for better flow.

Grammar and Punctuation : (12/15)

There are a few minor grammatical issues, such as "It dawns up," which could be rephrased as "Dawn breaks," and "saving her face from the sunshine" could be "shielding her face." These errors don't detract heavily from the readability but are noticeable.

Pace :  (10/15)

The pacing is hard to assess from the provided excerpt, but the summary suggests a mix of mystery and romance, which typically requires deliberate pacing. Without more context, it's unclear whether the story feels rushed or well-paced.

Character Development :   (12/20)

The excerpt and summary provide limited insight into character development. Y/N's journey of self-discovery has potential for depth, but based on this small section, it's hard to judge how well the relationships and characters grow over time.

Uniqueness :  (10/15)

The premise of mystical powers, amnesia, and a mysterious CEO is interesting but not particularly groundbreaking in the supernatural romance genre. It does include some tropes commonly seen in fanfiction.

Evaluation :

The story "ENTANGLED" has an intriguing premise with mystical powers and a protagonist navigating amnesia and a mysterious CEO. The descriptive writing style shows promise, but the vocabulary and grammar could use some polishing to make the narrative flow better. The lack of a cover and more detailed blurb might deter new readers from diving into this story. However, the themes of self-discovery and mystery give it the potential to stand out if explored in-depth. My favorite part of the excerpt was the imagery of the sun's rays , which created a vivid scene.

Overall Score : (69/100)

You Never Know by  sunfloraaaaa

Cover art : (5/5)

The cover is nice and perfectly giving mysterious theme, all the pics in the background with the strings, its to good. I personally loved it.

Title : (4/5)

The title "You Never Know_JJk" is intriguing and suggests elements of mystery or unexpected events. The inclusion of "JJk" indicates a focus on Jeon Jungkook, which aligns with fanfiction themes.

Summary: (6/10)

The summary introduces Jeon Jungkook as a famous K-pop idol with a hidden playboy persona. It hints at a transformative love interest but lacks specific details about the plot or the new girl who will impact his life.

Vocabulary : (11/15)

The provided excerpt uses descriptive language, such as "piercing gaze" and "bustling playground." However, there are minor issues, like "admist" instead of "amidst," indicating room for improvement in word choice and proofreading.

Grammar and Punctuation : (10/15)

The excerpt contains grammatical errors, including misplaced commas and tense inconsistencies. For example, "A girl ,around eight," should be "A girl, around eight," and "her piercing gaze is fixed" should be "her piercing gaze was fixed " to maintain past tense consistency.

Pace : (10/15)

Based on the summary, the story appears to follow a typical romance progression. Without additional context, it's challenging to assess the pacing accurately.

Character Development : (12/20)

The summary provides a glimpse into Jungkook's dual persona but lacks depth regarding other characters or their development. The transformation hinted at suggests potential for character growth, but specifics are absent.

Uniqueness : (8/15)

The premise of a celebrity with a hidden playboy lifestyle undergoing change due to a new love interest is common in fanfiction. While it may appeal to fans, the concept lacks distinctive elements to set it apart.

Evaluation :

"You Never Know_JJk" presents a familiar narrative within the fanfiction genre, focusing on a celebrity's hidden lifestyle and potential transformation through love. The writing demonstrates descriptive language but is hindered by grammatical errors and a lack of unique elements. The summary provides a general idea but could benefit from more specific details to engage readers fully.

Overall Score : (70/100)

Jasmine by shilohshammah

Cover art : (4/5)

The cover effectively conveys a dark and mature tone, consistent with the themes of the book. The tagline, "A married man isn't off-limits, just another challenge," sets up the story's dramatic and provocative nature. The imagery, including Jungkook's intense expression and the shadowy composition, aligns well with the fanfiction genre.

Title : (5/5)

The title "Jasmin" is simple, elegant, and intriguing. It suggests a symbolic connection to flowers or deeper meanings, which fits well with the romance or drama genre. The inclusion of "JJk" caters to fans of Jungkook, making it even more specific and relevant.

Summary: (7/10)

The summary would need to encapsulate the essence of the story while tying in the flower symbolism (Jasmine) and its connection to the characters or themes. Without a full summary, it's hard to assess, but the provided content feels promising.

Vocabulary : (13/15)

The provided excerpt shows a rich use of vocabulary with phrases like "unusual adoration for flowers" and "massive, pristine, and custom-made garden." While the word choice is vivid, avoiding minor redundancies (eg, "a variety of diverse" ) would further enhance it.

Grammar and Punctuation : (14/15)

The writing has strong grammar with minimal errors. There's a slight redundancy issue ("a variety of diverse"), but overall, the punctuation and structure are solid.

Pace : (10/15)

The pacing, based on the excerpt, feels deliberate and atmospheric. It's appropriate for a reflective narrative or an introduction to the character's backstory.

Character Development : (15/20)

The excerpt focuses on "Mamma," giving her a unique trait and a backstory. This sets the stage for strong character development, though more context would be needed to assess relationships and character arcs fully.

Uniqueness : (11/15)

The combination of flower symbolism, familial legacy, and a potential connection to a BTS fanfiction (JJk) gives the story a unique appeal. However, the premise feels partially reliant on common tropes in romance/drama.

Evaluation :

"Jasmin | JJk" begins with an elegant and descriptive introduction that immediately immerses readers in its atmosphere. The flower symbolism and familial ties hint at a deeper, more reflective narrative, with potential for emotional depth. The writing is polished, though slight redundancies in phrasing could be refined for a smoother flow. The title and themes promise a story that's both romantic and dramatic, with a unique edge for fans of Jungkook.

Overall Score : (80/100)

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Results

3rd Place: KimSoojin1112

2nd Place: sunfloraaaaa

1st Place: Shilohshammah

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Congratulations to all of the winners. Remember this was an opportunity to learn so do not feel discouraged if you expected to be the Crystal Snow . Winners, expect your reward shortly. As for our lovely Judge, do not feel left out. My offer still stands clear as I said before. Your prize will be given with this week.

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