♕︎FANTASY RESULTS♕︎
The credit for making the below stickers goes to MxWritesxx
~ First Place: Witches burn at dawn by kndlntsva
~ Second Place: The Black Scales of Spitfyre by lavendareyes
~ Third Place: Tales of Sundardasha by MandyTheMadness
Judge: Aurora_Orna
# The Empress Of The Doom
Tittle: 3.5/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:9/10
Opening:4/5
Character Development:13.5/15
Plot:23.5/25
Flow:8.5/10
Grammar:14/15
Overall:8.5/10
Total:88.5/100
Review-The blurb is amazing and that is what captured my attention the most. Really enjoyed and liked the way whole book is worded. Great cover and tittle. Just a few spelling errors, nothing a thorough edit cannot fix, other than that its superb.
# Aragons
Tittle: 5/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:7.5/10
Opening:3.5/5
Character Development:13/15
Plot:23/25
Flow:8/10
Grammar:13.5/15
Overall:8/10
Total:85.5/100
Review-Tittle and cover both are really very unique having quite some richness to it, also the book has distinct and contrasting ideas. Great story plot, it has a nice flow to it.
# The Green Gaurdian
Tittle: 4/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:7/10
Opening:3.5/5
Character Development:13.5/15
Plot:23.5/25
Flow:8/10
Grammar:14/15
Overall:8.5/10
Total:86/100
Review-Really nice and interesting story with some uniqueness. The story is developed in a really nice and smooth way. Thoroughly enjoyed the parts I read. Just at some points I felt that there aren't many emotions described for the characters. Otherwise, all over the story is really exciting.
# My Wonderful Second Life
Tittle: 3.5/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:8/10
Opening:4/5
Character Development:13/15
Plot:23.5/25
Flow:8/10
Grammar:13/15
Overall:8/10
Total:85/100
Review-Tittle and cover are good. Blurb is eye-catching which short and sweet also to the point. The story is really distinct, carried out smoothly. Few grammatical errors but nothing editing cannot fix. Enjoyed reading the book.
# Cursed Bond
Title: 4/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:8/10
Opening:4/5
Character Development:14/15
Plot:23.5/25
Flow:8.5/10
Grammar:13.5/15
Overall:8/10
Total:87.5/100
Review-Tittle and cover both good. Blurb is also very eye catching. But the thing which I liked the most is the first opening chapter which is a great start with amazing details in it. The plot is good too not like most werewolf stories. I liked the book very much. just a few grammatical errors, nothing else.
Judged: Pretziesh
# Tales of Sundardesha
Title: 4/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 9/10
Opening: 4/5
Character Development: 15/15
Plot: 25/25
Flow: 10/10
Grammar: 15/15
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Total: 97/100
Review: Your story is interesting to read, and the plot is on point. Your book cover is also engaging to look at but I hope you could capitalize the first letter of the word "lost'' and "queen", so that it would be suitable as your title. At first, the prologue and the first chapter are kinda confusing especially when you've introduced new characters at the next events of your plot, but I love how you conveyed the dialogues carefully through Third Person's Point of View. Nevertheless, the flow of your story is smoothly written, and I am getting even more curious on how the underlying questions between Thalya and Ayden would soon unfold. Such though, your blurb only contained one paragraph. The sentences are so long. I would consider breaking them up so that it wouldn't be cramped to read.
# The Black Scales of Spitfyre
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 9/10
Opening: 5/5
Character Development: 15/15
Plot: 25/25
Flow: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Total: 98/100
Review: Your cover looks so professional, and the title is engrossing to hear. I must say that your blurb had minor grammatical errors, but the opening chapter had this kind of essence of mystery that sets the mood within its settings. The descriptive words that you've are so eccentric that it fits on the dialogues and emotions from your characters. I could also vividly imagine how the scenes are manifesting with its current actions that didn't bore me to read. Also, the personalities of your characters are well-crafted, and I'm impressed that you keep balance with their strengths and weaknesses.
# Witches burn at dawn
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 10/10
Opening: 5/5
Character Development: 15/15
Plot: 25/25
Flow: 10/10
Grammar: 15/15
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Total: 99/100
Review: No need for more explanations. You nailed it! The eerie and suspense atmosphere gives relevance to your plot. Then, the situation of your character in a complex matter makes this story creative. I've got no problem with the grammar and the details and transition from one scenario to another because it's vividly written.
# The Silver Raven
Title: 5/5
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 9/10
Opening: 4/5
Character Development: 14/15
Plot: 25/25
Flow: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Total: 93/100
Review: There are minor grammatical errors in the sentences. Such though, your title is interesting, but its book cover doesn't give the vibes within the genre. The title is not even visible to read, and its font style did not blend well with the background cover. I suggest though that perhaps you could change it. Nevertheless, the first phrase on your blurb is catchy but the sentences are kinda long. I would consider breaking them up and put it in the next paragraph. Moreover, the little detail in your story makes me smile as the interactions and mood from your characters are relatable.
# The Kings of Dreams and Nightmares
Title: 4/5
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 8/10
Opening: 4/5
Character Development: 14/15
Plot: 24/25
Flow: 9/10
Grammar: 14/15
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Total: 89/100
Review: To be honest, I didn't engage with your book cover. Its font style and color to its background cover doesn't fit well to each other. Nevertheless, the descriptions within the story are enticed to read that the message that you want to convey is understandable. The narrative formats within the dialogues and emotions from your characters are also engaging to read. Such though, the pacing of your story is kinda slow and I've noticed some typographical errors with the words.
Congratulations Winners!
Thank you for participating everyone.
- Alishkha
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