Ok so I was doodling a character and this guy seems to be okay to take Dream's role

I don't know what to name him.

What should I change? (Other then obvious anatomy faults)

(I edited the rest on btw)
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Ok I had to add more. I plan on having five chapters with Art relating to the comic. At this point, I'm referring to the characters like Cross, Dream, and Night as 'placeholders'. Dust and Blue are placeholders of two characters that I'm designing right now.

The dudes up there is Matthias. And his bro is Neo. I'm working on Neo's design. I have his basic shape, but how his past has effected him is how I may color him.

I have designs for the original charcacters to take the following places:

-Dream (Matthias boy)

- Night (Neo (other Nikki))

- Cross (Alex)

-Chara (Blair the ghost)

I'm working on the characters for:

-Dust

-Blue

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I hope on portraying the many different personalities much better then I have in here.

And also: There will be female characters.

Yes. There will be. I am so excited! But I also hate say, but they will be supporting Characters. But they will bring the sensibleness and humor to the comic.

Horror's Character will be a woman. So will a info broker. I am thinking of making Ink's character a woman too.

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I also hope to show secret sides and of many characters.

Blue's character will have an loveless arch and stuff.

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I may just go ahead and plan this. I hate using different personalities for charcacters that are not mine. I know what happens at the end of this story, there were five more chapters left if I wanted there to be, but it would of been a cliffhanger I would never complete.

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If you have suggestions leave them in the comments below:

Here's Alex's coloring

I was coloring sketches for references.

I made a few more changes I will post next week.