Juliet and Juliet by @siramontiguez

Not much to say about this. I didn't find many errors!

Great characters and their development was made very clear and was progressing well. You showed and didn't tell and also hinted at character traits. Nicely done.

Description was in check. I liked how you were clever with the different Juliet names but they were technically the same (you know what I mean).

Thoughts should be in italics.

The writing was excellent. You wrote with such innocence and love that it made me feel so warm reading it.

Good inticing prose - makes me want to read on.

Overall, really good. That's it!

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