Dialogue Help
One of the main problems I see in books I critique is not being able to format dialogue correctly. So instead of tagging everyone in critiques where I've shown others how it's done, I've decided to make a page with the tips.
Okay, take a look at these examples.
"Morning," said Linda. Her lips split into a huge yawn. "Man, that mattress was comfy."
Notice how there's a comma before the dialogue tag? And that after the full stop there's a capital?
Here's another. Starting with action this time though.
Tom stirred his coffee lazily. "Well I go shopping for beds every year." He placed the spoon on the marble worktop. "Costs me a grand each time, they do."
Notice here how whenever there's an action, there's always a capital?
GROUND RULES:
Dialogue tag = comma + lower case
Action = full stop + capital
Hope this helps^
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