Ethereal by @Ann192004

I thought the first poem, Just a Flower, was really original. It had a unique idea and was beautifully written and paced. Really really great opener.

I almost couldn't find any faults! Although I did comment some suggestions that I thought might help.

Other than that, some really beautiful poems. So sorry I can't say anything more.

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