Reviews Of First Part And Votings
Ashes to love..vanishaaR of Smeared_ink
Hmm... This was a royal story.. At first we thought the first intro would be SWASAN.. Wr Sanskar or swara's bravery would be shown bt the author proved us wrong.. The story starts with introducing the kingdom kathna and it's king Ramprasad Maheshwari..then the story also introduced abt meraat wch was ruled by the cousin of Ramprasad Meghraj Maheshwari...who hates Ram... This was described beautifully... A great applause to the author of the first part...
We were interested as wat will happen next? And we really loved the way Ramprasad trusted shekar one of his ministry... At the first thought shekar was honest and humble minister bt soon it reversed.. Ram accepted Meghraj's friendship due to shekar.. Wch showed a pure blind trust.. Bt shekar played the double game with him by joining hands with meghraj.. Wch was kept in suspense till the end...
The way the little sanskar and swara was bonding... actually this part was liked by all of us.. We appreciate the author for adding this small scene..
And when Meghraj was successful in destroying the peace of kathna.. Even in that time too Ram believed shekar... And in the ending the writer kept suspense of man in dhothi and kurta
We loved the way writer hv written the part with full dedication... This shows the writer is experienced in describing or creating a character.. This part was totally amaaaaaazzzzzzzinggggg...
REHNUMA :THE ONE WHO STANDS BY YOU by brokenangel27 of lost treasures
This story is the journey of friends... The thing we loved in this story is Sanskar's character... His nature he being a supporter of swara..
This story starts with swara's cunning aunt throwing her out of the house bcs of her cunning daughter Maya.. And wn swara found sanskar beside that was the moment we wanted to do aww... Seriously.. And in the old age home... Kriya was so cute the way her and Sanskar's relation was!that's superb..
And wn sanskar pour his feelings to swara... And the reason behind this was to make swara tell him everything that was awes... And wn swara told him everything he supported her by making good mood to her..
And wn sanskar told swara that she will fight against the cunning ladies.. There arised a question how.. The author left the part with suspense bt we loved it..! Every emotions were beautifully described... Whoever would hv read this part will hv a small smile at their lips reading this beautiful part..
Bravo.. We need a friend like Sanskar in our life.. Isnt it?
Deewangi by pratheeksha94
This story was full of suspense and suspects.. Ragini was tried to be molested by a person and she was saved by the other person.. With whom she hv fell in love.. Rag was unconscious due to the harassment she faced and wn she woke she couldn't find anyone
And then the story takes the leap of 10 yrs.. Rag has turned beautiful and modern... And wn she moves out there dumps with a guy who is revealed to be laksh the saviour of Ragini 10 yrs back.. Bt ragini didnt see him bt she believed him by questioning him.. And wn Ragini asked laksh abt the person eho tried to molest her.. Laksh tell her that the person loved her and he is Sanskar his friend.. Wch created a suspense we appreciate the skills of the writer
Rag was madly in love with laksh.. She wanted to propose him.. Then there she meets Sanskar who tells her that Laksh has tried to molest her and he hv saved her... Whom to believe and whom to not.. We we so confused who was lying laksh or Sanskar? Before Ragini we were in the dilemma.. Quite interesting!
The story is filled with twists and turns... An outstanding part by an awesome author a great applause to you
Bound by love by Shiningpearl16 of lost charmers
A cute love relation of SWASAN from 15 yrs.. The way swara cried for Sanskar's departure and the way sanskar assured her that he will come for her was the cutest thing in the story.. Wch was portrayed beautifully by the author
And after 15 yrs.. Swara gets the news of Sanskar's arrival.. Her excitement was to no bounds.. And whrn sanskar comes to her and the he said her 3 magical word... Awww that was sooooo sweeett
After swasan gets married.. It was so beautiful like a dream married life bt everything changed wn Sanskar's behaviour changed and he said her that he married her only bcs his parents.. Still swara thought positively.. Bt there was something else... Hmm quite interesting described beautifully... We appreciate the author for writing every emotions on single part... Excellent!
The Intruder by Deeshsh of dazzling divas
This story starts with Ragini being intruding an apartment with her self talks online;) .. Bt her intentions was crime or not still to be known..
Ragini is bold and a daring girl
Then she tells abt her friend Saasha who is opposite to her nature..
Saasha is is love with a guy... Whose apartment she was sneaked in
Saasha strongly believes in love.. Wch Ragini thought impossible to make her understand so she wanted to collect proofs against him...
Soon she sees the guy sleeping... The way she got feared of getting caught was fabulous.. Even we felt the same while reading... A great applause to the author.. And wn she heard his and she realised that she was holding his duvet.. We too had the same reaction.. Bt later laughed... That scene was quite with a suspense as wat will hpn next?
The author hv described each and every emotions neatly... Standing ovation for the writer... The part of the story was fantastic!
Dream of changing hate into love.. By Gayu_Crazy of beauty devils
Yep the first word 'Dream'.. The start of the story was also dream of laksh wr he is marrying Ragini.. And wn he was awake his feelings and emotions hv touched our heart great work author
And Sanskar's dialogue made us know that.. Its the marriage of Raglak... His guilt was beautifully written.. And his guilt regarding wat and all wrong he did with Ragini was superb!
And then the marriage of Raglak... Wr Ragini's oath of hating laksh.. Was the mind blowing part and laksh's oath of loving Ragini unconditionally was the other mind blowing part...
Well written author.. Its was interesting... And a great applause to you..
She's mine by the_naughty_princess of WackyWriters
The title itself is interesting..
The story starts with the unknown person's pov... Which was somewhat dangerous of obsessed lover of Praghya.. Then it was another person's pov.. Which so lovey dovey abt his bride.. Wch we are so sure that its abhi! (P. S we didnt read the second parts.. Till thrn its abhi)
And then it was Praghya's pov.. Wr her relationship with her mom was beautifully shown.. Like every mom daughters.. This was the best moment.... Loved it..! And then comes a lovey dovey msgs from her groom.. That was so cute and romantic and funny too.. Haha the thing which was jhakaas
And wn Praghya was suspicious abt the flowers sent by a visitor.. And this proves how she know abt her groom.. bt she was been kidnapped the thing wch is twisting our mind.. The visitor hv kidnapped her...
This was quite interesting... The writer hv written this beautifully.. Outstanding... A great applause to her..!
Votings only for the first part..(there will be 2 winner's one is freakss choice and the other ppl's choice)
You hv to vote only once thats +1..and you can vote on any stories.. Bt only once more than once voting will not be considered even one vote too..!
1.Ashes to love
2.Rehnuma:the one who stands by you
3.Deewangi
4.Bound by Love
5.The Intruder
6.Dream of changing hate into love
7.She's Mine
-Thank you
-freakss
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