Winners

🥇First Place🥇

Turn the Paige by Evergreen_Ebony 

🥈Second Place🥈 

The Laws of Beasts Book 1 by JabreelWilson

🥉Third Place🥉 

Parfait by chrysthh

Scores

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1. The prince's huntress - Kami_Goddess

Title: 10/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 88/100

Short review: The font on the cover can be changed to a lighter shade. The strong female lead is applaudable, she is mysterious and rebellious which is a great thing. The special powers of the heroine are confusing as new powers are introduced in successive chapters. The writer can add a map of the kingdoms to distinguish the summer kingdom from other kingdoms. The suppression of women is relatable to real-life events, kudos for adding those scenes. At some places where there are words like: the king said, it is confusing as if which kind said what, please edit those for better understanding. I loved the loyalty of Luis and I too want Ember to kill that prince, sorry not sorry. All the best for your writing.

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2) Happily ever after - kalhixo

Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 85/100 

Short review: The word Ali in the blurb was offensive to me, as it is used to defame the transgender community in my language. Though it is mentioned that Kiaan's mom tags him so, I found it disrespectful, kindly change that term. The reality of Indian households is explained promptly. The backward thought of Kiaan's mom is real yet irritating. I felt sorry for his dad, the poor old man couldn't support his son against his furious wife. But he gave his credit cards, I loved his dad for that! Kiaan already had suitors at 20! I was shocked at that. I loved the supporting characters of Ram and how Chitti explained the LGBTQ+ movements, well-scripted points, kudos to the writer. The Tamil terms can be translated, the non-speakers could easily understand the words like Enda Kanna. All the best to you.

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3) Lost - Starstruck1305

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 12/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 7/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 72/100 

Short review: The cover didn't explain much about the story. The sarcasm of the female lead during distress is commendable, good job writer. I loved how the flashback scene was differentiated by using italics and the flow of English throughout. Though the story is cliche, the sarcasm is amazing. The vivid explanations of the scenario and scenes are really good. Paragraphing could have been better. all the best.

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4) The Spectacled novelist (English version) - happysnowfeet

Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 10/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 10/15
Plot: 13/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 79/100

Short review: I loved the cover. The blurb could be added some more details like the name of the landlord,  Ella's passion in detail. The grammar needs correction, I think the story is translated as it was in the original version, that's why it has tense mistakes too. I love how Ella fiddles with spectacles, the continuity is good. I felt it was very fast pacing, it's good too if the timeline of the story is for many years. Please get help to edit the story.

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5) Turn the Paige - Evergreen_Ebony

Title: 10/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 15/15
Originality: 9/10
Writing style: 15/15
Plot: 15/15
Character development: 9/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 96/100

Short review: The cover could be related to the theme of the story. I have never read such an engrossing story with a science background, it was good. Paige and Brian Rochester were like Jane Eyre and Rochester: she is full of dreams, he is grumpy yet caring. I love their combination. Mr Adesanya was entertaining! The words Oh my fiddlesticks, mothertucker are amusing and goes well with the setup of England. It is realistic, relatable and well written, kudos to the writer!

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6) I don't like you back - ever_after04

Title: 7/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 12/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 82/100

Short review: The cover can be edited. The title is also a repetitive one. The story is already a known one but the use of diverse characters is unique. The paragraphing could be better, edit for grammatical errors. Some scenes are cliches like the popular kid admires the female lead, the author also commented that in a chapter, it's sportive. The flashback scene can be written in italics to differentiate. All the best!

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7) Under Ontario skies - IvashkovLightwood

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 14/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 7/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 90/100

Short review: I loved the cover, aesthetics and banners. The description in the banners was amusing and inventive. The story seemed a known one, the writing style was distinct. Vocabulary, paragraphing were well thought and well structured by the writer, congratulations. The Spanish conversations could have been translated to help non-speakers. The support Elvis gets from her grandparents is commendable, her friend Madi and Tyler are contrasting to Elvis yet they too support her. The backstories of her breakup, Gene could have been given in small details for readers to comprehend their pain. The italics at some places needed space, please edit those. All the best writer! 

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8) The law of beasts (book 1) - JabreelWilson

Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 15/15
Originality: 10/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 14/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 94/100

Short Review: The stickers on covers could be arranged uniformly, it disturbs the cover. Amazingly written, its horrific yet vocabulary is pleasing and intriguing. The detailing of chapters shifted me to the scene, kudos to the writer for plotting such scenes. Alicia is going to be the boss of badass women in Wattpad world without a doubt! I felt sorry for Brenda and her cousin's bad luck too. The cocky attitude of Alicia especially in that hotel, that apparent 'suicide' was much-needed relief in between the horror. The point of views on chapters 3,4 and 5 could be specified to avoid confusion. The points of Lawbook could be given in italics as they appear along with Alicia's comments, It was confusing at first. I loved the page breakers using horoscopic signs. All the best!

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9) Captivated - alphaholic

Title: 9/10
Cover: 10/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 10/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 85/100

Short Review: I loved the cover and the blurb was intriguing to me. The initial chapters are just setting up the story, so I couldn't find any supernatural elements in those chapters. Chunky paragraphs are slowing the pace of reading, could be edited. Grammar and vocabulary are good, the way the writer explained her house setup, details about the climate, buildings are good. 
Edit the big paragraphs, please! All the best!

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10) Parfait - crysthh

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 15/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 15/15
Plot: 13/15
Character development: 9/10
Overall: 5/5

Total: 93/100

Short Review: I loved the cover, blurb and how the author explained the meaning of parfait. The name of her workplace being parfait is also perfect. The lovely banter between Alex and Summer was cute, it made me crave for a supportive guy friend. The details about her work and their reactions were amusing, the author has done a great job in writing. Loved the vocabulary and style. However the mercurial mindset of Summer regarding Sophia could have been treated better like it could have been explained differently, I felt it was broken into different paragraphs so it lost the momentum. The explanation of skin tone and contrasting it with hair and different people were also well written. All the best!

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Good Luck for your future!

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Oceanics