Winners

🥇First Place🥇

Like a dream by cynkruse26

🥈Second Place🥈

Ten Dates by shrireddy

🥉Third Place🥉

Life's a blackhole by SakshiDwivedi384

A love so blind by goldenrozes_

Angel full of flowers by writingjuniper

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Scores

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1. Disputed bonds - _aciddoll

Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Plot: 14/15
Overall enjoyment: 4/5

Total: 82/100

Short review: I enjoyed the plot but some things need to get polished. The characters of your book are amazing but I feel the side characters are quite one dimensional. Also, there are few grammatical errors that I hope you will fix while editing. Good luck writing <3

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2. Nightmare turn into a dream - Lil-Bird

Title: 6/10
Cover: 5/10
Blurb: 6/10
Grammar:13/15
Originality: 5/10
Writing Style: 9/15
Character development: 6/10
Plot:10/15
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 63/100

Short review: I liked your main character but I think you need to improve your side characters a bit. They don't hold a firm position in the story, it's like they're there to either helping your main character out or causing her more trouble. Involve their backstories, their arcs and give them time to grow and about the plot, I feel you can make it more dramatic by adding few plot twists. Also, I advise you to work on your descriptions a little bit. Good luck writing <333

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3. Intoxicated with you - samihaahmad20

Title: 8/10
Cover: 6/10
Blúrb: 7/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 11/15
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 77/100

Short Review: Hello Samiha, I really like your book but I think it needs to be more specific. The cover of the book is what makes the first impression of the book, I would suggest you make catchy and beautiful covers. Nextly, I really like the way you wrote, but I think you have to improve your grammar more. Character Development was awesome, really awesome! I overall like the book, but it needs to be improved. Good luck! <3

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4. Angel full of flowers - writingjuniper

Title: 9/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 12/15
Plot: 14/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 83/100

Short Review: Hello there! First of all, I really like how the aesthetic vibes are oozing from your cover and title, it matches the book well too! The blurb was nice too, it would surely attract the reader's interest in the book. I think the grammar needs to be much more improved. The books need to be more specific, more detailed too so that they can be more original. Overall, I like the book, but it needs to be improved. Good luck! <3

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5. A love so blind - goldenrozes_

Title: 9/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 11/15
Plot: 14/15
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 83/100 -

Short Review: Hello dear! I would like to say that the cover you made is really simple but attractive, and the title matches the book well! But the main thing, the grammar, needs to be improved. I am quite disappointed because of the punctuations, it really needs to be improved. The character is just awesome, how you made them love each other, but one of them don't want to be together, is great. Overall, the book is nice, but it really needs a lot of improvement. Good luck! <3

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6. Our disconnected love story - Ammaspet

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 9/10
Grammar: 11/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 13/15
Character development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 81/100

Short Review: Hello there! I really wanna say that the books' cover and title are all okay, but you'll have to improve it, cause that's what makes the first impression of the book. Secondly, your blurb is just awesome! I really like the unique concept that you chose! But, your grammar really needs to be improved, and the book is really craving for details. Overall, the book is awesome, keep going! <3

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7. Like a dream - cynkruse26

Title: 9/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 9/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 13/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 86/100

Short Review: Hello! I really like the cover, it perfectly matches the title and concept of the book, the dreamy vibe is oozing from it! The grammar is just awesome, but it is not perfect, you still have to improve it. Overall, the book is awesome! Keep going! <3

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8. Life's a black hole - SakshiDwivedi384

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 11/15
Originality: 9/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 14/15
Character development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 4/5

Total: 83/100

Short Review: Hello Sakshi! I wanna say that the cover and title of your book is nice, it's giving the sad vibe which is needed for the story, but I think it can be improved. The blurb, the blurb is a thing which should be interesting, cause that's what the readers read to know about the whole story, I want you to make it more interesting. The grammar and punctuation need to be improved again. The book is not well detailed, but still, it's giving the original vibe, which is really rare. I hope you'll keep the points in mind and try to improve yourself! Keep going! <3

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9. An amateur city girl - buttercup_for_life

Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 80/100

Short Review: Hello! I really think that the cover and title of the book are nice, but they can be much more improved. The blurb is alright. I feel like the grammar needs to be improved as I saw some grammatical mistakes there, but it's okay you can improve it. I really hope you'll improve soon! Good luck! <3

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10. Diary of A Misanthrope - kundab

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 12/15
Plot: 13/15
Character development: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 79/100

Short Review: Hii! I really like the cover of your book, and the title matches with the book well, BUT it can be much better. I love how you wrote the book in the form of a diary, but I think the grammar and punctuations have to be on point. The book is really craving for details. I hope you'll improve really soon, keep going! <3

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11. Deal Made me fall in love - Kajal0101

Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 11/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 75/100

Short Review: Hello Kajal! Firstly, let's start with the cover, the cover is something that makes the first impression of the book, and I feel like the cover of this book is all okay, but you have to improve it and the same goes with the title and blurb too. I found many grammatical mistakes which is something which you have to put all your focus on, nobody likes messy stories. The originality and character Development are cracking for improvement. I hope you'll keep these points in mind and improve yourself. Have a good day and keep going! <3

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12. Ten Dates - shrireddy

Title: 8/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 14/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 85/100

Short Review: Hello there! I want to say, your cover is just amazing, the aesthetic or we can say elegant vibes are oozing from it! The title is catchy too. But I think you should focus on your grammar and punctuation. Details are much more needed to make it original. The character, the strong girl and the playboy kind of boy, just awesome! I really like it! Keep going! <3

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13. Secrets to keep - yeoubi10

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 3/10
Writing Style: 10/15
Plot: 7/15
Character development: 5/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5

Total score: 60/100

Short review: Your writing style is good but I feel that your story involves a lot of cliché tropes like the girl moving to a new school, she meets the popular school bad guy with cheerleaders swooning over him. My advice will be to plot a little bit of the story, design the characters in your own way and then write. Or maybe write whatever you want and then re write in a more planned way. Good luck writing <3333

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14. Becoming Oblivion - DauntlessShadowIce1

Title: 6/10
Cover: 5/10
Blurb: 6/10
Grammar: 10/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing Style: 9/15
Plot: 11/15
Character development: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total score: 63/100

Short review: The plot is compelling but I feel that the plot is not well executed. Work on your world building. Introduce unique elements and create stronger conflicts with her parents. Develop your side characters and try to add some enigmatic incidents in the start so that your readers are hooked. Also, change the cover please and add proper space in your blurb. Good luck writing <333

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15. The disappointment kid - mellimack

Title: 5/10
Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 12/15
Originality: 7/10
Writing Style: 10/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total score: 66/100

Short review: I really liked your book. The characters are good and it's nice to see someone talk about such grave issues but I feel that you need to add more dialogues and remove the redundant information. Slow down your characters a bit. Don't let Hayden drop his guard down easily. Start with baby steps for his character development. Also, please change the title. Good luck writing <333

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