Results - Mystery/Thriller


Winners

🥇First Place🥇

Witches Burn at dawn by kndlntsva

🥈Second Place🥈

Finding November by DauntlessShadowIce1

A Chance at redemption: Gina's quest (Season 2) by Bio_Organic_Weapon_

The Eunuch by Rusty_Blogger0912

🥉Third Place🥉

The Brotherhood bond by ever_after04

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Scores

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1. Keep Busy - simplyhorrible

Title: 9/10
Cover: 7/10
Grammar: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 95/100

Review: Your plot structure was phenomenal. The view on your characters in 3POV can be a very hard challenge, but you've done it perfectly. I was able to read diligently through the entire novel, and overall am pleased with it. Keep writing

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2. The Angel and The Eunuch - Rusty_Blogger0912

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 98/100

Review: This was definitely a goosebump, chilling thriller. It captured my attention right away, and kept me "sitting at the edge of my seat". I was constantly surprised at the plot twists.

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3. Those Fine Young Gentlemen and Other Scary Stories - _farheen07_

Title: 7/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 9/10
Character Development: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 88/100

Review: Your writing style caused a lot of your plotline to drag. There were no really split paragraphs, which made it hard to follow along. There was no real main character(s) that the audience could relate to, which might lose some interest, but was otherwise very good.

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4. Carnations - prajakta_19

Title: 9/10
Cover: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Character Development: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 92/100

Review: I found that it copied a lot of the plot and character structure of The Grimm Brothers. There was a lot more prophecy, teen element rather than a thriller. Although it didn't quite fit the genre, I found it entertaining and very smooth as a light read.

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5. Witches Burn at Dawn - kndlntsva

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Character Development: 10/10

Total: 100/100

Review: I am utterly speechless. This book was AMAZING! I cannot get it out of my mind. I hope this someday gets published and I'm able to buy it. I wish you all the best of luck as an author. This was an unforgettable novel. Thank you for letting me read it.

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6. A CHANCE AT REDEMPTION: Gina's Quest [ Season 2 ] - AncientWarrior_

Title: 9/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 98/100

Review: Your cover was very enticing. Although the title was a bit long, as I continued reading there were only minor things I came across. You struggle a bit with keeping the plot structure level, but Gina was a very powerful main character. The dedication you put into this was amazing (trailers, explanations, etc). I absolutely loved it. Professional-level work.

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7. The Brotherhood Bond - ever_after04

Title: 9/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Plot: 10/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 97/100

Review: This book reminded me a lot of In The Woods by Carrie Jones. There was that unexpected feeling, always doubling the reader with surprise. I love that there was an indigenous element that provided cultural representation. Overall, was very thriller and interesting. Keep writing

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8. Tamed For Love - sahimakhatoon

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 13/15
Plot: 14/15
Character Development: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 96/100

Review: There were very few spelling errors, but your writing style caused a lot of bouncing around within your plot structure. Otherwise, your prose was very inclining and the suspense throughout the book kept building. I loved the book, and the cover is very well made

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9. Find Gretel - Di_Rossi

Title: 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 13/15
Plot: 14/15
Character Development: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5

Total: 90/100

Review: Any book in the steam punk / urban genre is very hard to master, so don't be offended! There were a few spelling corrections, and your writing style/plot was a bit hard to follow along with. The character(s) were very likeable, which made it more interesting. Overall, very good! It was original, and I could see the dedication. Thank you for letting me read it

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10. Finding November - DauntlessShadowIce1

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 98/100

Review: I was blown away by your writing style. This was honestly probably one of the most original books I have found so far. Everything about this book intrigued me, and I'm excited to read more of your works. Please continue writing, you could really go somewhere with this.

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