One Man's Trash is Another Man's Treasure Winners
We should have a new contest up in the next five days. If you are looking for reasoning as to why we are behind please take a look at CaseyyNicolee 's posts. It will explain.
Hopefully we have a bit more entries than we had this time. We understand that it's our first contest back, but we hope to get more entries! Thanks!
Remember entering a contest is like signing a contract saying that you will not get upset about your placement.
First Place- etherealzaynie I (Jenessa) rate this entry 8.5. All of the requirements set in the contest are met perfectly and your suggestions and advice at the end were sound and polite. Your starting paragraph is strong, instantly giving the reader a feel for what this book is about and starting minds whirring. I feel that you could've kept it a bit shorter, it was a bit too long for a description. Now, if you were to write a prologue, this would be the perfect length! The sentence flow was perfectly varied, throwing short sentences in the midst of long ones to give a more natural and professional tone to the reader. I did, however, notice that your vocabulary was a bit vague in places. The ending question adds a pull of curiosity, polishing the whole thing off with a nagging feel that the reader must know more. Amazing job!
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Well, we hope to see you guys again soon and all goes well before we communicate with you once again. Remember to contact us through PM to give us your info, we need to give you your rewards! If you don't ever contact us you will never receive your reward for being recognized in a place. PM us ASAP winners thank you. (You can find a list of things we need to know for the rewards in chapter 1)
Please give these amazing people some constructive comments and votes!!
If you happen to have any questions at all or would like to suggest for the next contest feel free to PM us or comment!!
Thank you & Good Luck, Casey & Tara!
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