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First Place- DragonGirl_97 I (Casey) graded yours. I rated you at a 9.5. You had 20 words exactly, which by the way was amazing because some people were going over it. You had decent vocabulary and no spelling errors. I loved your details. Even though they were simple they really hit me strongly. Not many people used an onomatopoeia to create their details and to better pull me in. You also used dialogue almost the whole time. Not too many people can use dialogue and still have amazing details because it's just what someone is saying but you used dialogue and I think that just having the dialogue put you over the top. Your dialogue punctuation was great. The only thing I could see you working on it maybe going in a using a bit more large professional vocabulary. Overall you did really well for someone who only used 20 words. Stunning work!!

Second Place- MountainOverseas I (Casey) graded yours. I rated you at a 9. You had 20 words exactly. Your vocabulary was stunning and you had no spelling errors. You used descriptive words that helped me visualize everything you wanted me to see. Your entry was very hard to place. Instead of having a horror theme you used a more nostalgic and mournful theme. But everything was perfect, absolutely perfect. I saw how you described amazingly and used perfect vocabulary for your theme. If this was a nostalgic prompt then you would've received a ten because of how perfect your prompt. I know that you were supposed to write a horror story but I couldn't let your amazing work go uncredited and unawarded. You did fantastic and there's not really anything I saw that you needed to work on. Just remember that the prompt is there for a reason.

Third Place- Death-For-One  I (Casey) graded yours. I rated you at a 9.  You had 20 words exactly. You had decent vocabulary and no spelling errors. I just want to say that you took the horror to an extreme but it was definitely a good extreme if there's no age limit. You took on a much more of a gore theme but it's still creepy. I personally don't do gory movies but these 20 words were the perfect example of horror. If I were to look at everyone's entries you would be one of the top three creepiest. You rocked the horror theme. I know that some people wouldn't touch the gore part of horror because well some fear it because of how inhumane it is but honestly, you took it a ran with it. I think that you did absolutely amazing. I love how you described it literally gave me chills. All I think you need to work on is using a more mature vocabulary. Overall I think that you did an amazing job with the theme/genre that you were given.

Fourth Place- beauftiul  I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at an 8.5. You had 20 words exactly. Your vocabulary was fine, (just don't forget to capitalize letters that need to be capitalized) and there weren't any spelling errors. Your story was more of a mysterious horror. It had lots of details and I loved it! It gave me chills down the back of my spine with all of the creepiness. If you had taken the time to capitalize, I would probably have bumped you up half a point. The thing that really got me in your story was the details. I don't know how you managed to have so many details in only 20 words. You met the theme perfectly and your details were outstanding (I know that I keep mentioning them, but they're important). Just keep working on your vocabulary and you've got it! 

Fifth Place- StayingGoldWhovian13  I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at an 8.5. You had 20 words exactly. Your vocabulary was perfect and so was your spelling. Normally I'm not a big fan of werewolves, vampires or any of that stuff (funny because I read a lot of it...) but I liked how you just had a glimpse of it. You didn't truly say it was a werewolf, you just left the details there showing it as a wolf. I loved how you used specific details, it really helped me picture your story. You met the theme well. What I would like you to work on is your professionalness. You should use stronger, more vivid words. Words that aren't as common, that looks more professional than using words that everyone uses to describe something. All in all, I enjoyed your story!

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