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First Place- Princess-of-the-Pen I (Casey) graded yours. I rated you at a 10. You took a big risk using racial comments in your entry, but I don't think it would have been as awesome. You had no grammar errors or spelling and your vocabulary was stunning. I loved how you had a great meaning in your short story. Your entry grabbed me with the first few paragraphs and kept me interested. It made me almost want to cry! Overall you did an amazing job and I cannot wait to read more of your amazing work!

Second Place- DragonGirl_97 I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at a 10. Your description was amazing, same for vocabulary and grammar, I didn't notice any mistakes. You had a very intriguing story that grabbed my attention right from the start! It made me just want to keep reading. You had such a unique way of bringing your color into the story, it fit perfectly! And your plot was of perfection.

Third Place- IAmNotSamSamIAmNot I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at a 9. Your story was so cute and sad at the same time, I fell in love with it. There were a couple areas with grammar mistakes, but it was SUCH a good story. Your description was 'on point.' You had an amazing comparison to your color. At first, I didn't think I would like the story, but in the end, I was in love with it. The work you put into the story was obvious!

Fourth Place- Vroomfondel42 I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at a 9. Your story was pretty good, but in terms of drawing me in, it could have been better. Your vocabulary and grammar were good. The description in your story could not have been any better! I loved how you made the story about the brownness of the world without calling it brown! I thought that was pretty amazing! I think the only thing you would need to work on would be drawing the reader in better.

Fifth Place- bloodredThreads I (Casey) graded yours. I rated you at a 9. Your entry had nice vocabulary and grammar and it was a decent length. It also had a great plot. I just felt like you could have used a little more detail and maybe you could've built up the story more. It was sort of confusing, maybe if you added a little more detail or a little more backstory. Although you used a great plot, I think it could've been built up more.

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