Any Genre Intro Winners
Finally, it's freaking published!! *gasp for air*
Remember entering a contest is like signing a contract saying that you will not get upset about your placement.
First Place- RaddestFangirl I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at a 10. You had perfect grammar, vocabulary, and spelling! You aced your details! You didn't have too many details to the point that I couldn't understand the story and you definitely did not have too little to the point of boredom. While your prologue was a little on the short side, it really grabbed my attention. Your details were perfect and the little twist at the end made the fangirl side of me very happy. I'm excited to keep reading your story. Your words were very vivid, I felt like I was watching the scene happen before my eyes.
Second Place- Burge2k14 I (Casey) graded yours. I rated you at a 10. You had plenty of suspicions, grasping me, making me want to know her enemies and much much more. I want to know if the girl named Alice could be the Queen of Hearts because she wanted to change the white roses to red. Maybe this is the story of a girl named Alice who fell down the rabbit hole and got stuck and now in the present Alice falls down the rabbit hole and she is now seeing all the creatures that have fallen down the rabbit hole and they are all trapped there until there is a new creature to take their place. The rabbit is evil and leads each new replacement into the hole. Alice being the Queen of Hearts replacement. You definitely captured me, I definitely want to read it and see if my imagination brought me to the conclusion. You had no grammar mistakes, it was honestly absolutely perfect!
Third Place- -no-social-life- I (Ashlie) graded yours. I rated you at a 10. When I was reading your entry I was stunned. It was beautiful from the way you wrote the letter. That is another part I like, you wrote it in a letter form, and that, to me, made it more interesting due to the rareness of seeing a letter prologue. Your vocabulary was perfect. You used words that really put detail in what you were writing. Your spelling and grammar were great! The one thing that threw me off was where were you going with it. I never saw it going anywhere for a book. There was no plot to it, and you never introduced me to any characters. When I got done reading it I had no words. It made me really think about myself and what's going on in my life. What you could work on is, before you start writing think about it as a book. Come up with a plot. Maybe this letter is a letter that one of your characters read? If so, then I see no problem with it. Just be a bit clearer when entering a contest such as this, where we will not get any closure and be a bit confused. I really loved it, it left me stunned. Thank you.
Fourth Place- Wandstruck I (Tara) graded yours. I rated you at a 9.5. There were many mistakes in grammar and spelling. You weren't capitalizing words that should be capitalized! You did an amazing job putting details into your little prologue! I feel like this story is going to be very similar to a Nicholas Sparks type of story. You did a good job on details and vivid words. I think you did a very nice job overall. You did grab my attention a little bit, even though I'm not all for those gooey romantic books.
Fifth Place- AmyJoe7 I (Ashlie) graded yours. I rated you at a 9. I was concerned with the book at first. I wondered if the plot was an intriguing enough idea. When I got towards the middle, my attention was grabbed by your entry. I loved the idea you had and where you were taking it. I really liked how you detailed your entry. Your vocabulary and grammar were decent, I never saw many problems. What you could work on to improve your writing is to reread what your writing. When you get done go back and reread it til you're satisfied. My favorite part was the ending. You had a twist that left me wanting more.
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