Characters
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Brightcloud:A white cat with ginger splotches,amber eyes(YOU)

Clan:LeafClan

Villain:Spikeclaw:A gray Tom with prickly fur and amber eyes (Your brother)

Leader:Froststar:White sleek she cat

Dep:Ashpool:Pale gray tom

Info:You are main character"Brightcloud"Your brother you knew since you were kits,is the villain!Spikeclaw plans to kill the leader and deputy and take over the clan and spread darkness!Can you save the clan and Stop him??!!

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(Your P.O.V)
You pad out of warriors den,still can't believe  that your a warrior now!Which means no elder's ticks and yucky mouse bile.You see clanmates
Sharing prey or tongues and sun is bright.

Clouds scattered across sapphire sky and whispering winds slip through your ears.Newleaf's breath floods your pelt and you start walk towards the senior warriors. "Brightcloud!Your part of Troutwhisker's patrol.Stay out of trouble"Ashcloud mewed to you.You pad along with Needlefur,Troutstream and Sliverfrost.You crouch and spot a mouse picking at a seed,walking slowly and crept on it,gather all strength and you give the gray creature a swift bite.(1st pov)(Your not character for now!) I pad toward my clanmates and spot them,"Wow great catch!"Needlefur mewed.

I walk in camp,and drop my prey,grabbing a fat rabbit in return,I sat and ate up.I rose to my paws with a full belly.Ashcloud walks over,and talks to me,I follow the deputy to forest,"Do-o want to m-mates?"Ashcloud asked,My eyes glittered,overwhelmed by joy."Yes!yes!"I purr back,nodding happliy.I nuzzle him on cheek,When we arrive at camp.We did sharing tongues ,cleaning out each other's fur.

A earsplitting yowl from leader's den pierced the slience of camp.Few cats stopped and glanced around,Ashcloud and I ran to Froststar's den.Spikeclaw,my brother, delivered a blow and was clawing his leader!Froststar fell dead,Please don't  die! I ran across and pin my brother"What are doing?"I spat.Birds singing,and day is beautiful.My brother should just to dark forest for this!Froststar came back,gasping for air.(YOUR POV)  You slash your claws across Spikeclaw's flank.Blood stained your claws,Your fur burns with sorrow and fury,Spikeclaw's eyes burn with anger,he met your gaze.You felt a claw swipe across your face!You swipe over and over until Spikeclaw was out of the den.

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the Tall stump for a Clan meeting!!"Froststar called out"I hereby send Spikeclaw in Exile!He had try to kill me!"Yowls of fury and outrage rang out.Spikeclaw snarled and ran out of camp.You see your only brother,leave the clan forever.you ask yourself,why?You bound across the clearing to medicine cat den,Fernpool gently taps webs against your clawed muzzle.

You slip out of warrior den,it had been only two moons since your brother's exile.You go out the camp,and take a walk around a small pond,taking sip of water,water slithers down your throat as fresh scent of prey drifted in,You glance around,narrowing your eyes in parts of shade.You creep on a rabbit,then a snap of twig from few fox lengths away,scared the rabbit,it ran off in deep lush forest,You glance around and say"Mouse-dung!"angry,You walk around until you can find cat who ruined such great catch.A voice spoke,then more.A strange scent drifted in your nose,You spot one of cats,half of them hiding in dark shadows of forest,untouched by sun's light.One of cats,is your brother!Your happy to seem,but not that he isn't alone."We shall attack now!"A tabby spat.Your heart beats with horror and shock.

You turn around and run as fast your paws can carry you,hoping no cat saw.Stopping at camp's mouth.You take deep breathes and crows cry in distance."S-spikeclaw is coming back to revenge,and he is not alone!!"You meowed with a huff ."All warriors and apprentices get ready!!For battle!:Froststar yowled.Fernpool and Featherpaw had luckily stocked a day ago."Attack!!"Spikeclaw yelped,Spikeclaw appeared with group of savage  rogues,Ashcloud was face to face with a big ginger tom.You face a gray tabby,"Fight or die"He hissed,dodging blow of claws,you slice his chest.

Tallfoot,your mentor runs and pins your enemy,He nods and as you dodge battle of claws,teeth and blood.Spikeclaw's claws sink into Froststar's shoulder,you sink your teeth and grab your brother by scruff,yanking him off Froststar.Spikeclaw,ready strike came for you,ready with unsheathed claws,His paw swoops but does't hit you.Rabbitnose!your father falls to ground,bleeding from his neck."I love you both.."Rabbitnose spoke weakly,before going limp.Spikeclaw kicked the dead body,"Yea right!"Spikeclaw spat.You pin your brother,tears start to flood out,you give your brother a killing bite.He yowls in rage and pain.You slice his chest and once again his flank,as he fell dead,the last breath left him,his eyes were dull and his body rolled to side.A little tear rolled down and sank in earth.

"Farewell Brother,I will miss you..."Your nose pressed against your brother's cold fur.

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