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"Mule (mujhe) daddy ke sath sona hai didi , daddy "pari was crying badly standing at balcony , looking at manik , who was sitting in his car.

Manik not even for once looked at pari and left as he knew if he would see him , surely he won't be able to go and it was very important for him to go hospital. After sometime Sakshi made her sleep. Like always pari slept while crying and then Sakshi also slept on floor in pari's room.

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Manik came back home at 2am. He was tired but still he directly went toward pari's room. He sat beside her on the bed and saw pari was sleeping hugging her favourite teddy . He started caressing her forhead. "I am sorry Princess " First he kissed on her eyes and apologized for making her cry.

"Pari , if your parents were alive today then they never let you cry . I took all responsibility after my sister and your father death but i know i am not fulfilling my responsibility properly , i am not able to give you proper time and my love too. You are my daughter pari , i want to give happiness of whole world to you but because of lack time i couldn't , i am sorry Princess , please forgive your daddy "he said while caressing her forhead and then kissed her forhead as a promise to protect her always.

Then manik picked pari in his arms carefully and took her inside his room and laid her down on his bed and after covering her properly with blanket , he went to washroom to change his cloth. Finally he laid down beside her and took small pari in his protective arms. She was not his real daughter but he still loved her like his own daughter. But he knew , pari also needed mother love but he was fearing to bring step mother for her. He thought that if she won't accept pari and if she won't give her love that's why he didn't want to get marry.

Next morning

Pari woke up rubbing her eyes and she got super happy finding herself in her daddy's arms. "Yeh , mein daddy thath (sath) thoya (soya) tha (i slept with daddy)"she said in her childhish language and she was looking super happy and cute.

"My princess woke up today so early "he also woke up listening her voice and said while making her sit on his tummy.

"Yes daddy , i'm yol (your) good girl "she said and after that started playing with manik's chain which he was wearing around his neck.

"My princess is daddy's good girl "he said kissing her cheeks and after this she also kissed his left cheeks. For sometime manik talked with her and then picking her in his arms , he took her inside the washroom and after this he made her sit on slab and gave her brush and then they together brushed their teeth.

"Now who wanna bath with daddy ? "Manik asked " daddy plincess (Princess) "she immediately shouted happily and manik removing her cloth put her inside the bathtub and he also came inside in his short.

As soon as he sat inside the bathtub , pari started splashing water on him. "Naughty Princess "saying this he also started splashing water on her and pari was laughing loudly. Manik then started cleaning her body and also washed her hair. He like a mother gave her bath and they had lot of fun too.

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Manik was making her ready for school. She was in nursery class. "Daddy , meli (meri) flend (friend) jiya kya mein uthe (ushe) apni pencil de thakti (sakti) hn , thool (school) mein (can i give my pencil to my friend jiya in school) " she asked cutely from manik when manik was combing her hair. She was sitting on chair and manik was standing behind her.

"Yes , my princess , you should always share your things with your friends because sharing is caring "manik said and kissed her cheeks from behind.

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Manik dropped pari at her school and he sat inside his car and again started thinking about nandini. "Now after a week only , i could able to see her , i hope she is better now "he said to himself "but wait manik why are thinking about her "his mind scolded him and after putting his all thought on side he went hospital.

Like this a week past. There wasn't a single day passed when manik didn't think about nandini . He didn't know that he had fallen in love with her at first sight. He was hell confused , thinking that why he is so curious to meet her and why he was thinking about her health.

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Manik was happy today as finally he will meet her. Manik was attending the meeting with few doctors , they were discussing something important when peon knocked the door. "Sir , a girl want to meet you " peon said "ask her to wait for me as you can see i am busy with the meeting "manik said and peon left from there.

"Oh shit , may be she will be nandini only , if she left before meeting me , no no , i want to meet her " he thought while nodding his head. "Sorry gentlemen , i have an important work , can we continue this meeting tomorrow "manik asked and they left from there and manik immediately ran toward his cabin.

Before peon could ask her to wait for him, manik came there running . "I am here "he shouted and nandini looked at him with no emotion and he felt bad to see her pale face. Then he took her inside his cabin.

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They were sitting in his cabin and he was just staring at her pale face and looking into her eyes in which there was only pain stored . For the first time he was feeling nervous to talk with someone.

"miss nandini , how are you "he taking a long breath finally started the conversation. " I am fine "she said in low voice looking at her and manik just nodded.

Then he called a nurse and asked her to do her check up and nurse took nandini with her and manik was just noticing her each and every move. He found her so beautiful in this state too. He was thinking , how beautiful she will look with smile on her face. He wanted to see her smile. He wanted to know the reason of her pain. He wanted to know everything about her and he was confused why she remain like this.

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Nandini was sitting silently in manik's cabin , staring at table when he was busy in checking her report. Manik freaked out seeing her report , she was not taking proper food , she was very week.

"Miss nandini , what is all this , if you want to kill your baby like this then why you have saved him that day " he shouted throwing the file on table while nandini looked at him shockingly and a tear fell down from her eyes .

Manik seeing her tear realize that what he had said to her. "I am so sorry , i don't know what i have said to you "he apologized sitting on his chair.

"You don't need to be sorry doctor , i can understand your anger , you have lied to everyone for my baby and now i am myself not taking care of my baby " she said and more tear fell down from her eyes. Manik wanted to wipe her tears.

"But , why are you doing this nandini " he asked in calm tone. " I don't feel to eat anything , i do not feel hungry , i want to eat for my baby but i can't able to eat " she sobbed after saying this and manik felt bad seeing her condition. He wanted to know the reason of her pain. He offered her water and she took a sip .

"You want this baby right " he asked "this baby is my life , i am living for my baby only , i want this baby at any cost "she said putting her one hand on her tummy and her words were clearly showing that her baby was most important for her.

"Then , take proper diet for your baby , if you don't feel anything to eat or you feel alone then talk to your baby , you will feel better "manik said holding her hand and she looked at their hand.

"I am sorry "manik apologized immediately leaving her hand.

"This is diet chat , hope to see you this time healthy and fit "manik said giving her deit chart. " for your baby start living happily , it will be good for baby " when she about to leave manik said and then she walked out silently.

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