Chapter 1

Daisy looked out at the shining river, it looked like diamonds were floating in the rippling water. She smiled and curled up on the shore, snuggling into the leaves that made up her nest. She closed her eyes, peacefully thinking of the crystal water. That was when she heard a soft rustling in the bushes. Mouse dung! She was on Sunningrocks!
   "Daisy?" A gentle voice came out from the bushes. It was Ferncloud. Thank StarClan.. "Ferncloud." Daisy purred, pawing her nose. She smiled."But are you okay? Is everything okay with Spiderleg?" She asked, eyes glistening with worry. Daisy shook her head. "He's such a mouse-brain.. Why did I choose him, of every cat I could've chosen?" Her head still shaking, she padded over to Ferncloud. "I should have chosen yo-someone else!" Daisy blushed furiously. Ferncloud purred. "Oh, Daisy.." She giggled. "Let's go home. It's getting late." Ferncloud started padding away.
  "Wait!" Daisy meowed. She turned towards the tan she-cat. "I had a good time." They both smiled and walked back to ThunderClan camp, tails twined.
   Daisy, from the other side of camp, heard Spiderleg scowl. She purred. Ferncloud would never, ever, do that to me. Sighing, she padded over. "What?" Daisy snapped. Spiderleg growled. Didn't you hear, you need to go on a hunting patrol, mouse brain!" He rolled his eyes. "Nah, I don't NEED to. Plus, this is probably one of your stupid pranks. She walked away, bumping straight into Ferncloud. Their noses touched. Daisy's eyes widened. She blushed and ran to the Warriors camp. She saw Ferncloud standing there, surprised, but her smile grew as she saw Daisy through the bush of the den. And for the first time, she felt comepletely happy.
  "Daisy!" Spiderleg growled. Well that totally ruined that moment.

I hope you like that first chapter! I worked really hard! And don't you guys be like, "oh they're both girls" or "that's not possible" cuz they are literally so cute together :my opinion: Anyway, I'm starting a new thing in my novels called Tail Tips which are basically lil tips on how to be a good writer. Today's is: Write what you want to hear. I heard this in an amazing and helpful book. I wrote what I wanted myself to hear, and it turned out great. So, keep writin'!

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