Never mind no I'm not making a new book.

I'll do that when I reach 50 parts.

This is the second OC submitted by catswithtophatss!

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------ Name: Vervain.Beautiful name.

------ Age: 9.Alright.

------ Sexuality: Demisexual and biromantic.So many people forget what a romantic orientation is. Kudos to you.

------ Gender: Female.Cool.

------ Tribe: RainWing (though she does look weird from hybrid ancestors).Interesting!

------ Abilities: She has venom and is able to shift scale color.So, normal RainWing abilities. Nice.

------ Relationship: Dragonfruit (a fellow RainWing).Excellent! Most Pyrrhian dragons will only date dragons in their own tribe. Sadly, most of the fandom ignores this. I'm glad to see you haven't.

------ Occupation: Princess (youngest of five; three brothers and one sister).Hmmm.

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------ Scale Color: Her scales are a usually a pink that fades into a blue at her wings, tail, and feet. She also has green swirls on her (she can be very finicky).Finicky is a beautiful descriptor. This is very interesting, too - simple, but still descriptive and creative.

------ Eye Color: Yeah I know we all hate different colored eyes (I literal can't spell the word for it) but she has one soft green eye while a striking green on her left same for her sister but amber.You got that right, most people do. But I don't mind, since they're sort of similar.

------ Build: She's a bit more chubby than skinny but not chubby to be considered fat.That's very specific, which is good. Don't be scared to have a fat character, though. They're fun.

------ Height/ 15'3 (she be smol).So smol.

------ OND: She has a flower necklace gifted from her brother Enchanting.Ooo, that's lovely! Enchanting is a cool name too.

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PERSONALITY;;------ Strengths: She is a total sweetheart she loves to hang and take care of dragonets and is usual trying to help other dragons too. She a total mama's girl too, she loves her mom and will want to help her in any time for her any needs. She is known for being a social butterfly, being up in others' business and always trying to make new friends.She sounds so vibrant! I love her already. These qualities are all very interesting, and moreover, they're attractive in a sense. If she were real I'd genuinely want to be her friend.

------ Flaws: She is very finicky, she is terrified at ANY chance of danger even it's very minor and will overreact. She can be finicky if she meets someone from a different tribe too. She's also a scaredy-cat and will get scared at the slightest sound, and she is very immature from her acting like a dragonet almost all the time.Very good. These suit her strengths perfectly. She has a very unique personality.

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BACKSTORY;;Vervain was born to Queen Quetzal and King Jaguar. She was loved by her parents for her whole life and her sister Wonderful had a close bond with her.Nothing wrong with a happy family. Most OCs I know have tragic or distant family lives, so this is a nice change. Also, Wonderful is a good RainWing name, especially for a royal dragon.

Her brothers on the other hand were not so nice - well, two of them. Enchanting was quite nice to her and gifted her with a necklace when she was two.Enchanting sounds very nice, though I'd love to hear about her two other brothers.

She met Dragonfruit when she was four and they were friends at the time they met. He loved to joke around with her different-colored eyes, saying, "Wow look, the first RainWing that changed her eye color.". Of course Vervain knew he was joking and she loved that about him.Splendid. They already have a good relationship going, which is nice.

Her sister, who now was 8, while she was 6, challenged her mother and won, becoming queen. That's when Wonderful became not so wonderful. She was not a good queen. She was making rules, breaking rules, making more rules, not doing anything to stop danger, and neglecting her Kingdom.A queen who isn't good? That's a pretty sudden change. I love it, though.

Vervain's mother was done with it.Wait, Quetzal's still alive? I'm assuming they use the RainWing challenge method from The Hidden Kingdom, then.

She re-challenged her. Her sister was like, "You can't do that," while her mother was like, "Yes I can," and Quetzal won.Quetzal might just be the sassiest dragon I've ever met. What happened to Wonderful afterwards, though? Did she try challenge Quetzal again?

When Vervain turned 8 she settled down with Dragonfruit and had three dragonets two: female and one male called Toucan, Banana, and Tulip.8 is a little young to have dragonets, since she'd only just have become a mature adult at 7. But then, I suppose it could happen.

Sadly she never lived to see them older than one when a thunderstorm hit and she was crushed by a falling tree.What?That's so sad! Very good plot twist, but really sad all the same.

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COMMENTS;;
------ The good...
Vervain is a the epitome of an original character, with several unique but not over-the-top concepts. Her bio is detailed but not excessive. Her personality is fresh and punchy, and perfectly suits a RainWing. I also loved reading her backstory; it was very interesting. Rather than telling your character's story, you've recounted a series of events that happen to be her life. Excellent.
Also, she and Dragonfruit are adorable.

------ The bad...
I don't really have anything to say here. Of course, I'm heartbroken to read that she died so soon, but even that twist is wonderfully creative. You could perhaps add a bit more detail in places though - Quetzal, Enchanting, Wonderful and Dragonfruit's personalities, for instance, or maybe how the RainWing challenge system works. How did Wonderful defeat Quetzal? How did Quetzal regain her throne? What competition did they use?

------ How you can improve!
*shrug* Just detail and the such.

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OVERALL RATING;; 9/10.
I love her. I love her. I love her.

I'm sorry if my reviews have become a bit less detailed, guys. I'm pretty tired at the moment.

- Siri Mom.