Review done by badestbitchhh_

Cover: The cover seemed eye-catchy despite it being really simple and spacey. The fonts used are good but the color could be a darker shade in order to blend and contrast with the background perfectly. I felt like you could add more elements and borders to make it look less spacey.

Title: The title is really good with interest and I really liked it. It gives off a mystery/thriller vibe and provokes a reader...however, I couldn't really find the relevance of it with the story. The villain had its name so it's quite bemusing.

Description: I am not sure if this action would be included later, but from what I read...I found it interesting and good though again, I didn't really find the aura relevant to the first few chapters. I would suggest giving small details of the masked devil from the start so that readers stay hooked due to the suspense.

Plot: The plot seemed a bit cliche from what I read yet was interesting. I like the construction but the execution was not the best. You can think through it once more and create a definite plot with sufficient mind-messers, cliffhangers, and scenes full of suspense.

Storyline: The planning is good but as I said before, giving small details of the masked devil from the start will help in attracting and hooking readers to the book. Besides, the twists and suspense were moderate at the start which is actually good and impressive.

Dialogue delivery: The dialogues were moderate and described well, however, I would suggest not using words like "m-m-me", I think it would be better if you write the dialogue and then mention that he/she said it while stammering/stuttering.

Indulgent: I actually enjoyed it and loved reading despite some mistakes. The characters and things were descriptive which helped me imagine and understand them properly.

Character development: The characters had some major developments which were good to see. Though, I would suggest adding more scenarios showing their development.

Pace: The flow didn't seem really slow but I think it was a bit fast at times, like having dinner. Here, you could add more scenarios showing the readers about the gifts and all...and then you could add the dinner part of the story.

Grammar and Vocab:

Sometimes the tense was not right, by now she has solved most of her cases by bringing justice to the victims. The "has" here should have been "had" since the previous sentences were written in the past tense.

Punctuation and sentence-making errors like, as a daddy's girl, she completed it. Yes. She became an IPS officer just for her dad. This could have been a daddy's girl, she completed his wish...yes, she became an IPS officer, just for her dad.

I would suggest not to use words like "WTF". Rather, you can write its full form.

Don't use lines like "But I can't d..." This will count as a grammatical mistake because the word is not complete, so I would like to ask you to write the whole thing.

I would suggest you not use words in caps like "OK?", you can mention that he/she vocalized the particular thing loudly instead.

Sense: It did make sense till now but the relevance should be handled.

Strengths: Description of a particular thing and the way of imagining it.

Weakness: The way of expressing/grammar.

Suggestion: I would suggest you read books with advanced grammar and books that are relevant to your story; mystery/thriller books. This will help you to get a broader knowledge of both aspects.