Reviewer: badestbitchhh_

Cover:- 

The cover looks mysterious which makes me interested in the book but there are a few drawbacks. First of all, the part of cover credits...I feel like it's way too light for the background color and is barely visible. Secondly, the whole name of the book is not mentioned. Here some parts of it have been hidden behind the object which might come off as cool but to some readers, it may not be that good.

Title:-

 The title is related to the plot but I think the secret test alone would sound more mysterious. It's good either way in catching attention so, it's up to you...if you want to change it or not.

Description:- 

The description is intriguing but the structuring could have been better. Rather than having the first part as the start, you could maybe add the second part and a few glimpses.

Plot:- 

The plot was not that clear from what I read but since the book is ongoing...I'll give it a pass and hope you'll explain it further ahead. Till what I read, it was thrilling and mysterious which made me go on and complete the book in a day.

Storyline:-

 The order was good and I felt the connection but not all the time. Especially during the first few chapters...I thought it was kind of boring since you didn't add much description. I think it needed more of it to built a proper connection and imagination for a reader.

Dialogue Delivery:- 

The dialogues were good enough but very few mistakes grammar mistakes were there.

Indulgence:-

 I liked the story and look forward to the updates. It was thrilling but proper description and statements could have been used to eschew any kind of bemusement or loss of connection.

Characters:- 

The character description needs improvement since there were only minor details mentioned. There were no specific developments made but there were realizations. The parts where the brain of a character suddenly ticked off with a completely new plan which led to success...was very good from my point of view. It can be taken as an inspiration/motivation to strive for the best.

Pace:- 

The pace was quite good, but the starting part could use some improvement in this. It felt like you rushed into the important part...which breaks the flow. I'll advise you to give at least one proper description of a day they spent on vacation.

Grammar and Vocab:- 

The vocabulary was good enough with neither too complicated, nor too simple words were used. There were a few tense mistakes...and by few, I mean very few like writing in present perfect but then switching on to past perfect tense. There were some punctuation mistakes in dialogues which broke my flow, and the perspective...they were not mentioned which can confuse a few people so I'll suggest you look through them.

Strengths:: Creativity.
Weakness:: Proper description and a bit of grammar.
Suggestion:: I would suggest you read books that have advanced grammar and try writing incidents from your daily life as meticulously as possible. It will help you get a sharper mind and a broader knowledge of both aspects.