The Freshman Tease - by - Leolunah


Review done by HAPPINESS_IS_YOU_


COVER (7.6/10)

If you want my honest review, I believe the cover could be a lot better if the author wanted. I am kind of dissapointed to see that such a great story has a cover like this. An advise if you want, make the cover look like its hiding something. I mean take a scene from your book which is the most important part and is your favorite. For example : A boy proposing a girl in romance stories or the typical heart balloons and all that. Try to keep the space in cover free but make it beautiful too. Most of the times when people make covers which are too complicated, they take a risk. As a reader myself, I try to avoid those books which have complicated cover, it looks like they are working too hard. Make it easy and simple. I am not saying that your cover is not good or something... It's just it can be better if you try.

TITLE (9.8/10)

The title fits the story perfectly. It could have better just like I have said something but you know, everything can be better than what they are now so don't mind me. So the title, well it's a type of title which I haven't yet seen anywhere with pretty common words. I am a crazed fan of unique title and this so happens to be it so you get bonus points there.


DESCRIPTION/BLURB (6.4/10)

It's good. Introducing the characters is good and if you don't introduce them in the description, you have to in a chapter. The only thing I didn't like was how you wrote all the awards ans rankings the story got in the description. It was taking up more space than the actual description which put me in a bit bad mood. I am not saying that you have so many good things that I am getting jelouse here and all that, I am just saying that you can write all of them and more in a specific chapter in your book. It's good to see that you got such great ranking and awards but honestly it puts off the mood of a reader to see that. Maybe you can remove some, but I know that will probably hurt so maybe write them in a specific chapter. It's just an advise and is up to you to follow it or not.

PLOT (9.7/10)

The plot is unique and definitely a not so cliché school romance story just like you said. As much I have read so far, it's really great. But then my net got bad and I couldn't read anymore. But definitely would really love to read some unique plots in Wattpad like yours.

FLOW OF THE STORY (9.3/10)

It was pretty great too. I didn't feel it for a second that there were too many emotions at once and it was overwhelming me. It's really difficult to continue the whole story in the same flow so it was pretty good thing you managed to do.

 
CHARACTERS DEVELOPMENT (8.9/10)

[WARNING: SPOILER'S ALERT]
The characters are really great. I felt like I could actually feel those emotions Jason was feeling when first time someone chooses Lincoln over him. His jealousy was confusing him too. So wow... It was actually really really really good. The emotions were great too and I really hope to get a bit of time to complete the book. Katie's shyness and Lincoln's behavior were good too. I laughed when I heard or read Katie saying that "I've always been shy..... " like they can't see and we can't read it the way she stuttered at the beginning. It was fun. The characters were fun and unique in themself. 

WRITING STYLE (9.1/10)

The writing style of the author was great. I personally prefer to read books which are written from someone's POV. There weren't any grammatical mistakes but I can't say that surely as I am really bad in grammar but pretty great if you ask me.


GENRE RELEVANCE & TAGS USED (10/10)

A lot of tags were used which is great. The more, the better. The genre is a correct fit for the story. 

READER'S ENJOYMENT (10/10)
There were a lot of really weird and sarcastic comments which made me laugh more than the actual story did. There are some readers who comment very frequently and their comments are good too so these 10 points belong to them. You should thank them for it you know... Now I am laughing and I can't control myself.


REVIEWERS PERSONAL LIKING (9.2/10)

So, after calming a bit from the laugh we had, we are here in the last part of our small journey.
This is about me and you should not worry about it as every reader prefers to read something different.
I personally don't exactly like to read shy female protagonist so it was a bit sad that she was there in the story. I really loved the plot and the characters and those funny comments but the only sad this were those parts i have mentioned in the whole review.
I would love to continue reading it when I get time.
Now, it's time for what you were waiting for since the day you were born! Ahh, not since your birth but you get it right?
So..... It's time for our overall grading.


OVERALL (90/100)

If you are a fan of new adult, chick-lit, and college romance with a lot of twists, a great plot, some idiotic and funny moments, this book is for you.

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