Reviewer: kyaaraa13

Title - 

The title is unique and not very common. But it does not even give a hint of the storyline which is perfectly fine as most novels/books/stories have such titles so you need not worry. The title is relevant to the book as you have shown the female lead to be chubby.

Cover - 

The cover's background picture is too bright. The font used is also not matching and degrades the cover appearance. The storyline and the title are very good, so a change in cover here is a must. I would suggest you ask a graphic designer to make a new cover for the book.

Blurb - 

The blurb at the very first glance looks longer than required. Long blurbs do not tempt the reader much, instead drive them away. The blurb does have appropriate content to lure the reader, but readers will drive away seeing the length of the blurb itself. You can remove some adjectives and high descriptions from the extract. Also, do not use emoticons in the blurb. It becomes highly informal.

Prologue - 

The prologue is engrossing to a certain extent. The length of the prologue is perfect. It contains the back story and has been written very beautifully. It is written in understandable English. It certainly has a smooth ending with an unavoidable cliffhanger hooking the reader to the book successfully.

Grammar - 

The grammar used was very good. I am not a grammar freak and I do struggle to pinpoint small grammatical errors currently. I am working on it, so in case you need a grammatical review, I would suggest you have the book proofread. The words were not very much repeated and show you have a rich vocabulary.

Writing Style - 

The first very part instead of having such a long name can be easily renamed as the 'Disclaimer' or 'About' or 'The Chubby Tale'. I like the vocabulary/dictionary/keyword finder, whatever you may address it as at the end. The endings of the chapters were certainly very smooth.

Plot - 

The characters were introduced in a good way. The plot is not very rare. It is a pretty used plot, so you may or may not benefit from it, depending on various readers. The development of the characters was smooth as well. The story isn't rushed or stuck at one point, it is going on at an even pace, so good job! I hope your book reaches the heights which it is capable of.