thank you guys sm for submitting!! sorry these took so long lmao

Name: Edward (Eddie) Lucas Breene

Age: 27

nice!!!

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Bisexual

representation for the bi buddies thank you

Detailed Physical Appearance: Pre-Fire- Around 6'3 and an odd body build. Skinny arms and lanky legs with relatively pale (yet not to the point which he looks as if he has never left the house) skin. Fried fake blonde hair with no signs of his original dark chestnut roots. He has a long, pretty angular face with splotches of acne that he attempts to cover up with his mother's makeup. Usually wears bad Wal-Mart T-shirts two sizes too big for him and shorts, sometimes wearing sneakers yet prefers flip flops. He has a straight, forgettable nose and relatively proportionate lips. He has dark olive green eyes and well groomed (if too well groomed is not a thing) dark eyebrows, not daring to dye those. Always wears contacts instead of his glasses.

this is super good!! lots of male characters seem to be either twinks or buff-ass giants so way to go on that :0 the fried bit about his hair is a good detail, bleaching and dyeing hair doesnt always leave it soft n healthy

the acne is great and fucking relatable i stg no oc has acne

i like that he isnt drop dead gorgeous and you went into good detail, kudos to you and eddie!!

Post fire- Varies but is usually seen with bandages around his face, (and some parts of his body if you were to look under his shirt or pants and point out the worst of the burns he possesses.) His blonde hair is messed up and far from saving as it is sometimes tangled but at other times, not a hair out of place from it's cookie cutter position. Burns on most chunks on his body yet the deepest or worst are on the following body parts- Right jaw Right thigh Left hip Torso The rest is relatively minor. Usually wearing a button up shirt and tie along with it, sometimes changing to bowties. He possesses a half trench coat sometimes during cold weather, it is made of a thick, canvas like fabric with a grey scheme.

crispy boy ouch

its great that the burns are on his face too and not just his body!

Strengths: Tricking and charming people, he's a good actor and can easily trick you into giving him information that could hurt you. He's also decently physically strong and pretty fast.

good! i imagine he could definitely use the sympathy factor of his burns to gain trust!

Weaknesses: Eddie is overemotional constantly, he values his emotions above others and this can be a problem. Even though he's good at tricking people, he can be easily taken advantage of as well.

nice nice

you could add something about some physical issues? i mean obviously the burns but yknow

Backstory: Eddie Breene was born June 6, 1989 to Katie Breene and Evan Breene. He had an older brother Henry Breene, who was seven years in his senior. He grew up in a slightly unstable household though he was happy, he was decent kid though he experiences a lot of self doubt due to conflicting opinions from everybody around him throughout his life.

GOOD. not all unstable families are instant trauma sources, but they do cause some issues

When Eddie reached around the age of eleven, Evan Breene (Eddie's father.) Became increasingly difficult to talk to as he became emotionally manipulative after Henry's departure.

is there a particular reason that Henry leaving caused this? was there a connection they shared that kept that part of his father at least somewhat dormant?

Eddie becomes anxious due to this, hiding a lot of self doubt and taking it out with aggression towards other people.

YES YES YES TO THIS COPING METHOD!! NOT EVERYONE WITH ANXIETY AND SELF DOUBT ISSUES COMES ACROSS JUST AS SHY!!!!

He dyes his once brunette hair and goes through several phases, becoming increasingly worried about other's opinions and worshiping the ground his brother walks on.

were he and Henry close or was it more of an issue about his dad becoming manipulative when he left?

At around fifteen he moves to a new town, encountering a girl who goes by the nickname S. Though she is eleven at the time the two form a friendship and soon begin babysitting the other town kids together. Including Katlin (Hay) Sherwood, Kevin (K) Lakerd, and Lisa Cray. By the time Eddie Breene is sixteen he meets Lisa's older sister Chloe Cray who was twenty at the time. The two form a relationship (though hidden from his parents due to the fact Eddie is a minor) and it becomes increasingly manipulative on Lisa's end and Eddie's.

YES. especially people with these types of issues can be prone to getting involved with manipulative people

Eddie becomes more aggressive in the relationship as Chloe begins manipulating Eddie into sexual acts as Eddie has a possessive nature and Chloe wanting something to show for it. They go through troubles, worsening Eddie's attitude. Then, around the age of late sixteen, incidents begin happening with some of the more minor kids he is babysitting. They begin to disappear or worse, begin getting hurt and even killed by some unknown creature. Eddie explains to S what is happening and she advises him to stay out of it. Eddie refuses, trying to watch the kids at all times yet they seem to continue dying no matter what.

are the parents not suspicious that these kids are linked by their babysitter? going off of criminal minds here usually in a scenario like this the parents are likely to stop hiring babysitters altogether until it gets cleared up, especially the one who seems to have been watching all of the dead and missing kids?

Eddie becomes more and more violent as he vents his frustrations to others, his relationship with his girlfriend falters even further along with his friendships, more so S's. Eddie's doubts begin to spike up extremely as he develops the idea it is his fault for not watching the children. He channels this through more violent actions.

again parental concern might come into play that their kids' babysitter is having violent outbursts?

On one night in which Eddie was babysitting S herself for the first time in a long time due to the fact she is thirteen, S and Eddie got into an argument over how Eddie has changed. Eddie becomes furious, not wanting to admit anything is wrong and sends S upstairs to her room. Eddie then takes a nap on the couch. Eddie wakes up to S's screams of "fire" and the hot flames nearly suffocating the house. Eddie panics, attempting to run upstairs to save S but the stairway collapses on him, catching him on fire as well as he cannot do anything as he soon looses consciousness. The fire department is soon called by a neighbor and Eddie manages to be rescued and rushed to the hospital where he dies hours later, still unconscious. He is then taken to the Tide due to the fact it was the creature's (The Child Taker as he now knows) doing. Setting up the events that would lead to the fire and he stays there for ten years, in burning agony as he attempts to somehow escape the horrors. He is eventually let out as a HIC, but there is a reason. He has to finish the job that The Child Taker did not finish and slaughter the remaining children that were once under Eddie's care. Eddie agrees to this, under the complex that everything will revert back to the way it was if he does so.

rip eddie oh my god??? i'm not sure what the tide is but this sounds fucking awesome nice nice and that's a good motive for eddie especially considering his weakness about putting himself above others!!!!

Personality: Full of himself, moody and selfish. Becomes sad a lot of the time and acts extremely angry towards things that don't fit his opinion. He had his moments too, though he focuses too much on small things and seems to be unable to look at the big picture. He is quite accurately described as a vulnerable narcissist. He acts like he is entitled to whatever he wishes all the while still somehow wanting to change a lot about himself. He has a very large victim complex and very easy to manipulate if you know what to say to him. He is very emotional and irrational, obsessing over things too easily for his own good.

THIS SO GOOD YES YES YES

it might be good though to add some redeeming qualities? i love this angry boy but overall it would probably help in his eventual development!

Likes: Eddie likes early 2000's pop music, especially Brittney Spears, he's also an avid Scooby-Doo fan. He enjoys being in control of situations and being seen as an amazing person, he likes people who can stroke his ego.

Dislikes: Eddie dislikes fire for obvious reasons along with anything that came after 2006, being irrationally angry at the thought of the world "moving on without him" He also dislikes being told what to do and how to do it, and being separated from things he enjoys.

EDDIE IS AN AMAZING CHARACTER. i'd love to learn more about him and his story! just those few little things could using clearing up but otherwise he's excellent. well done!

more reviews are coming,,,, but later bc im Lazy