i'm not so sure about this chapter but I might go through it and change a few things

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jhon's pov

The faint light of the sun flittered in through gap in the curtains i opened my eyes although I was not really asleep I was still reluctant to get off my hammock I sighed and sat up turning to place my feet on the ever shifting floor then when I had become accustomed to the movements again I went and grabbed my clothes pulling them on I walked out of my room into the dorm get up I yelled my voice slicing through the silance causing everyone to jump out of their blissful sleep people fell onto the floor while most stood up reaching for clothes when I got up the stairs the only this audiable with the wind whistling over the deck and the rare moan from the crew hurry up I barked as they all rushed up the stairs the sails were quickly raised pushing the ship forward

We continue at day break I yelled so all the crew could hear so until then rest up I went to turn when I stopped and no complaining they moaned and I smiled as I turned my back to them completely as I walked onto the ship to my room

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I laid on my hammock staring up at th deck the wood groaned loudly I closed my eyes taking deep calming breaths but not even that lulled me to sleep I sat up and slipped off the hammock and walked to my door I ripped it open letting it fall closed behind me I walked quickly through the dorm stumbling up the stairs I walked over to the railing I stared over the edge the water was deep blue and calm unlike me. It reflected the stares and the hull of the ship even my face in its vast blueness I spent most of my sleepless nights like this I pushed myself off the railing and began to do my nightly routine check of the ship.

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I jumped awake and looked around the sun was rising so where am I my back was throbbing as I got to my feet I was resting against the mast how the hell did I get here I stretched and my back clicked giving me relief from the pain I walked to the side of the ship and had a feeling I was forgetting something ...... then it hit me I walked off the side of the ship okay time to pack up I froze and a smile took over my face as I saw they were already way ahead of me the fire was snuffed and they were all wide awake and helping to pack up the site and carrying the supplies back onto the ship well I said this is a first

We set sail and soon after heading into gulivers pass but we were only a few minutes into the trip that we saw another ship get ready men I yelled as the pirate flag was raised

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