Reviewed by Key Keeper Nina recklessnina

Author: RainAndSonder
Title: Sometimes They Come Back
Genre: Short Story/Horror

Cover : 3/5

It could use a little improvement, here and there to make it more appealing. Nevertheless, it looks okay.

Title : 4/5

Relevant and very intriguing, I like it.

Blurb : 4/5 

It’s very accurate and was very descriptive.

Plot : 8/10 

One of the most decent plots I’ve seen so far for this month. It’s neat and almost flawless. It’s intriguing and very well thought out. I thought it was going to be boring because why would anyone care much about a missing dog? But, it got me hooked until the end. 

Character Development : 14/15

It wasn’t confusing at all. I was able to tell them apart easily.

Spelling and Grammar : 8.5/10

I suggest just skimming over the material again, I didn’t find a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. There were just a couple honest mistakes that I’m sure you just looked past it, other than that nothing major. 

Overall : 8.5/10 

I would definitely recommend these to some of my friends especially those who are fond of mysterious plots.